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Dhanvi

@Freethinker

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#91

it was awesome...loved the hero...
very nicely written...

i was waiting for an update for tere liye...😍please try and update...

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#92

reso jii

~~EDITED~~

o me god o me god..

marr gye hum tho prithvi k killer attitude ne maar dala...

dnt wry di, mera bhoot phirr bhi aapka sirr khayega..

believe me, i m disgraceful more dan a vampire...

prithvi ko tho nandini kaise bhi tolerate kr legi..

but aapka kya hoga.., main aapka picha nhi chondongi di, neva eva... :P

so, humari anandini ko bacha liya,

poora ud almost pirthvi- nandini ka tha, aur kya chahiye...

maaze aa gaye.. sachi.

bada kah rhi thi madam nahi lungi uski mamdad( yaad h na sanyo ne bhi nahi li thi prithvi ki help jab mango tree pr latak kr rah gyi thi ...kya funny tha.)

bad main uski hi help se bahar nikali na forest k...

special prithvi the cool.. temperature and mood, attitude sabke mamle main..

nandu tho sakh tho shoro ho gya h prithvi pr...

god yeh ladka itna kamm kyun bolta h...

actually, main nandu ko blame nahi karungi.. kyun karo..

main kudh jyada bolti hun...silence psnd nhi mujhe...

so galti prithviki h, prithvi is abnormal.. ..

nandu i m wid u.. u rock...

so voh rabbit sirf nandu ko dekhayi diya tha.. wow..na...

so mystical and supernatural feeling h na!...

ud soon di,

lov u

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#93

comment edited...

di aapko mere LSS pr comment karna h.. yadd dila diya aapko.

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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#94

superb amazing,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,👏

liked prithvi's entry,,,,,,,,,,,,but he was so rude with her...

prithvi saved her...but nandini was getting bored by his all long silence*silence*silence...bechari kitni koshish kar rahi thi silence break karne ki but prithvi is prithvi,,,,,,,,,,,,,how can he allow her to break that silence...

and she was surprised that how he came behind her without making any noice,,,,,,,,,,,,and she was too thinking about his cold touch...nandu he is a vamp. soon you too will get it to know,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

and he was again gone...poor nandu ko pata hi nahi ki wo hawa ko us driver se introduce kara rahi hai,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

continue soon...

luv u...😊

di i have found something for you...well it's not made by me but i have found it from somewhere,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,but i think that it suits your story...i mean for prithvi...

did you liked it????????...

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: ridzzi

di i have found something for you...well it's not made by me but i have found it from somewhere,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,but i think that it suits your story...i mean for prithvi...

did you liked it????????...

sooper cool di.. juz lke our prithvi.👍🏼.. the vampire... kya masst h na..

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago

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Khushi Grover

@Amor.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#96

awesome parts <3 srry for late cmnt 😊

Edited by BhartiKhushi909 - 13 years ago

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Poonam Jayaswal

@Poonamjayaswal

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#97

amazing update!!!! keep it up!!!

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riya

@Riyaa16

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#98

superb part
oh rt ki kya dhansu entry hui mujhe to maza hi aa gya is ud mein...di u r fabulous writer..ur description was awesome...it seems that i watching them...oh god yeh to ladne lage...jahan dekho wahan shuru ho jate h yeh 2no...bt rt kuch jyada kam nhi bolta...bt koi ni apni mugs to cool h na
i just loved this part...thank god she's safe...mujhe to pta tha apna rt hi ayega bt at the end wo kahan gayab ho gya...

Di jaldi ud dena pls
luv u