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Posted: 13 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

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di ur language, man wat shud i do, i hav no wrds,
the way u described, i cud actuall see it.. all live in front of ma eyes...
god, i ur mindblowing...
sooperbo.

shit.. awesome written...

okies, nw stry,

well, the way u have written forest, i m deing to go der..
it is really enticing,...
though we r not in stry, but i lovd dat forest...

nandini's entry god, it ws supernatural in itself,
the strange actvity in wind, breeze currents, ...climate.. every thing, says amarpuili is gonna witness the wrlds most romantic n thrilling stry...
jo ki meri di likh rhi h, n rtmc jinke lead h,

mugz as nandini is so apt,
wat shud i say...
so perfecto.

den comes driver,
well, jiss tarah driver nandu ko darata h.. sacchi sooperb part h voh..

nandu wished to go to forest,
n driver said dat her wish will cm true very soon..

hey dats so supernatural,
mujhe bhi jana h, .....uss forest main...

oops! gadi kharab ho gyi,
lekin rabbit kahan se aaye,
is dis a trap of forest itself,
kya yeh forest is also living..
well supernatural cheeze kisi bhi cheez ko living baba deti h...

o no!, nandu ghumm gyi, ab kya hoga...
dark n dark all around...
oops!,

gud nandu, haar na maano, prithviraj chahuahn ne humme vahi sikhaya h.. aapne rastha kudh dhundho...

thoda dhyaan se,

se bushes k piche se kuan baar baar pareshaan kr rha h :S
darayo matt yaar,
nanadu ki jaan tho vaise hi atki hoi h...

o ma god, she is just over a chams... ab jungle main achanak se khaaii kahan se aa gyi...

god, humare hero ko jaldi bejho plz...
😍
humara hero usse aapni bahon main barega, main bhott pakadega,
eyelock hoga...

phirr kya... lov at first sight...

and phirr vhi jo har rtmc stry main hota h- inevitable part of all rtmc stries- JAGDA...
hehehehe...

yeh sab guess tha...

ud soon di,
i m developing a interest in it,

ho sakta h yeh js ki place le le..
js phirr bhi mere dil k kareeb h :P

and, yes last comment main maine likha tha ki mujhe dark fantasy bhoott psnd h,
but ur head is still ma favorite choco..

ud soon di, lov u..

i lov thrillers...


thank u sooo much sis
trust me I hv been to one such forest, though in a sumo, its really really scary as if u r not well acquainted with the place u just cant find ur way out
😆 its Amrauli
aur lets c kaisa banta hain
kyun re tujhe supernatural aur wild beasts ke haathon jaan gawana hain kya? 😆
aise jungle mein jaane ka toh sochna bhi nehi 😉
hmm...mysterious...isnt it...lets c if the forest is alive
lol yahan bhi PRC, par fikar not Prithviraj toh is story mein bhi hain
chal dekhte hain kaise bachegi Nandini
oye pahari ilaka hain toh khai toh hoga hi na
😆 I know u just luv chewing my head 😆
will update 2day
luv u 2 Rashu




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Posted: 13 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: geetap

a fantastic start...plz continue soon


thanx sooo much
will update now
Nandini25 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: tejjo

vry nice update
loved it

i mean i just lost in the story while read it seems that watched it with my eyes

its seems true n believable...though i scare from ghost n spirit bt i love this story truely

i loved ur every line n every words ur description is superb

when the air went to her ear i just scared

in the forest those voices,omg bechari nandni kahan fas gyi

jb wo rabbit dikha tbhi mujhe laga ki kuch hone wala h

oh god save her ...

I thing wo baba hi nandni ko bacha sakte h kyunki he know all about the forest na

ya fir hmara hero rt urff prithvi

last scene to sach me darane wala h hope she will be alright n reach her home safely

di ur description about the amrauli beauty n forest is just mindblowing

i love ur writing di

update soon
with rt entry
luv u


thanx sooo much
as for me I just luv mysterious stories
lets c who saves her
thanx sooo much dear
will update 2day
luv u 2

Nandini25 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: tejjo

ek baat bolna bhul gyi isliye fir aa gyi

i love ur siggy of dark fantasy
i love this title too

i love u n ur story too...kya mast story

di jaldi ud dena nhi to mein aage kya hoga soch soch ke pagal ho jayungi


thanx sooo much dear
but the credit for the siggy goes to shruja
she doesnt like taking credits but still its her creation
luv u n ur ff 2 dear
jaldi hi update kar dungi
will update 2day

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Posted: 13 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: mddmayuri

awesome start...n fantastic description of all the scenes ...and siggy is superb...

luved it...ud soon...


thanx sooo much
will update 2day
Nandini25 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar

I really liked this story, so this is some what like Vampire diaries nd twilight saga?

Ab yaha mugz ka naam Nandini hai ab har jagah jaha nandu waha uska Prithvi hota hai, to kab ayega prithvi meri kayi me latkati nandu ko bachane??

Aur aise time pe koi story rokta hai kya?? Abhi jaldi se next ud de do plzzz


thanx sooo much
hmm...lets c 😉
😆 dekhte hain tumhara Prithvi kab aata hain aur kya karta hain
I luv leaving the story in cliffhangers 😉
will update 2day
Nandini25 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Bells.E.cullen

superb...
starting was really very gud n exciting...
i just love supernatural things and stories...
n i know m going 2 luv dis story very much...
mind blowing intro of nandini as well as of the town...
thnx alot 4 d pm...
plz plz plz continue soon...
cant wait 2 read next part...


Thanx sooo much
I 2 luv supernatural stories
hope u like it
most welcum
will update 2day

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Posted: 13 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: ridzzi

speechless di...stupendo fantabulous...👏

i so knew that it's on vampires...yes yes yes ...i really love you for starting this...goshhh...
nandu is so stubborn...and that driver...the way he was talking it can be easily figure out that of which species he was talking of...the discription over nature,about that wind...mind blowing di...
and that rabbit it seems like he has came for her...now damn eagerly waiting for prithvi to come to save her...
and we all knew that our hero will come to save our princess...di plz plz plzzz...update it soon...i really can't wait for the next part...it's so exciting...di you know me too is writting one os on this theme...
loved your siggie a lot...
continue soon...
luv u...😊


thanx sooo much sis
hehehe m not gonna say nethng 😉 Awe luv u 2 dear
lets c 😉
will update 2day
wow post ur os will luv 2 read it
luv u 2
Nandini25 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

arey maine banner ka tareef tho kiya hi nhi...

sooperbo, perfecto, ek dum awesome, hugelr amazing...

sachii d best banner this stry cn gets..
mugz light main n rt vampire dark main...


hehehe I know ts really beautiful
Shruja made it
her creations r always the best
Nandini25 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: Freethinker

do i need to say it was awesome...loved the concept and loved the way you described


thanx sooo much

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