Arhi FF: A Page From The Diary Th2 Link pg 143

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segad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#881

read your note. just one thing to say. it is your story, write it your way.

nice update. so at least he is putting some thought into it

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reallyhappy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#882

he's all J..n he's namin it gratitude..wteva she does..La's Khushi's frnd..z she his gf as wel?
or juz a frnd or so?
she told him abt shyam n his taaareefs..n he was ol angry..feelings r cumin out..finally..:)Khushi 2 z dstrbd..lets c wt xctly z btherin her..loved it.:)n updte weneva yu want..:)happy 2 read..:)thnx.:)

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incandescent

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Posted: 12 years ago

#883

Originally posted by: reallyhappy
he's all J..n he's namin it gratitude..wteva she does..La's Khushi's frnd..z she his gf as wel?
or juz a frnd or so?
she told him abt shyam n his taaareefs..n he was ol angry..feelings r cumin out..finally..:)Khushi 2 z dstrbd..lets c wt xctly z btherin her..loved it.:)n updte weneva yu want..:)happy 2 read..:)thnx.:)

Yes, La is Arnav's gf as well as Khushi's friend. It was first mentioned in chapter 4.

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anonyasr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#884

Beautifully written story. Enjoying the mystery.

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Arnav_Khushifan

@Arnav_Khushifan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#885

Nice update and thanks for the pm. I am so hooked on to your story and I just luv the whole concept of how we are reading both the past and the present scenario at the same time. Thanks or sharing your story. You are an amazing writer.

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#886

Brilliant and fantastic update, loved reading the update from Arnav's point of view. So he can't stop thinking about her and he even got angry at Lavanya when she mentioned that khushi had said that Shyam was a nice guy, awww he was feeling jealous. But I can't believe he is calling it gratitude, the thing between him and khushi. Please continue soon and thanks for the PM, also I think the pace of the story is perfectly fine as I like the fact you write the present and the flash back leading up to why they got married.

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Jenna

@LondonChick

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Posted: 12 years ago

#887

I think everything about your FF is amazing including the pace. The pace is perfect.
Thanks for the PM
God bless
Jenna

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inajnar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#888

Beautiful and well written story ...I started late and read 10 chapters at one go...

I think the past and present in each update layers the story very well...

Take the story at your pace ...coz you are the writer and you know best...

But please dont discontinue ...Its so nicely written that it would be sad to leave in unfinished ...

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kritash

@kritash

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Posted: 12 years ago

#889

first starting with your note:
The most frequently asked question for this story is when the mystery behind Arhi's marriage will be revealed. If I answer that now then there won't be any excitement left. The whole story is revolving around this mystery and if I disclose it now, there won't be much left in the story. 😳 But I am slowly getting there. 😊
i loved the way the story is progressing, i am also eager to know the mystery soon but not on the cost of story.
Now coming to the frequency of updates, I really wish I could give you quicker updates but I honestly can't manage to do that as I have a pretty tight schedule. But I am really trying to update as frequently as I can. Many times I have contemplated discontinuing the story because it gets really hard for me and I feel like I am not doing my best but I still keep writing just for you guys.
the pace is ok. I liked the way you are taking all thedetails into consideration.
to understand about titght schedule.
Now about update.
still he is interpreting others view and making a conclusion rather than asking it directly to kushi.
hope her will try to understand her.
lovely update.