Arhi FF: A Page From The Diary Th2 Link pg 143

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applesauce.

@applesauce.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#761

Beautiful Update,Fari!

The conflict of thoughts in Arnav's mind was very well written.Just love the way the story is going.:D

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616377

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#762

Loved the Chapter Fari!

Can't wait to read more!

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daffodils06

@daffodils06

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Posted: 12 years ago

#763

beautiful story..wud love to read more...

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#764

It was so interesting to see Arnav's eagerness to see Khushi's reaction to their physical proximity.

He was mesmerized and subconsciously he wanted her to be just as intrigued.

You have a wonderful way with words. Even though I know they are already married I can't stop worrying about what Arnav and Khushi might say or do that can rip them apart when I read the flashbacks.

Magnificently written! Continue soon :)

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@abracadabra

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#765

Fari Dearie. 🤗 read the FF in one go! Now i'm dying for the updates..

I love how you have weaved the story telling us about the past and present parallely and how you have stuck to the details.. Marvellous! Love your style!

I liked how Arnav 's possessive side is taking over him slowly, how he is admiring her unknowingly, and how he has started tearning for her.. I would like to know how Khushi feels about Arnav a little more, how she gets affected et al. Waiting for the next update eagerly! 😊

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Arnav_Khushifan

@Arnav_Khushifan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#766

Great update. I just luv the two parallel stories. Also I like the way you are letting us see how khushi and arnav are feeling, what there thoughts are. Looking eagerly towards the next update.

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incandescent

@incandescent

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#767

Originally posted by: chaitra2011
Fari Dearie. 🤗 read the FF in one go! Now i'm dying for the updates..

I love how you have weaved the story telling us about the past and present parallely and how you have stuck to the details.. Marvellous! Love your style!

I liked how Arnav 's possessive side is taking over him slowly, how he is admiring her unknowingly, and how he has started tearning for her.. I would like to know how Khushi feels about Arnav a little more, how she gets affected et al. Waiting for the next update eagerly! 😊

Hi Chaitra 🤗

Good to see you here...thank you so much !!

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serialwatcher16

@serialwatcher16

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#768

There is some emotion about this story that I just adore. And since the way it is written, like a flashback, the process is all the more interesting.

Great to know you are well now. Take care. Thank you so much for the lovely update.

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@abracadabra

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#769

Originally posted by: incandescent

Hi Chaitra 🤗

Good to see you here...thank you so much !!

Fari, i did not know you write.. I have been exploring FFs off-late and to my delight i find both You and Appy here in the FF section! I'm eager to read each and every FF of you guys..

Beautiful story written so well. Waiting for the next update impatiently 😆 🤗