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incandescent

@incandescent

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#721

Originally posted by: babli0204

Just finished reading. Excellent update!!

What intrigued me is Arnav's eagerness to see Khushi's reaction to their physical proximity during their dance.

Arnav's restlessness and disturbed mental state to the point of physical pain and his silent resolution to end it finally in the FB made me think that he was the one to be in love with Khushi already. Khushi, however, was still unaware of his inner turmoil and of her feelings for Arnav as well.

Well...it definitly going to take a very very interesting turn in the coming parts.

Thanks a lot. I am glad you liked it...I was really apprehensive about this part.

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#722

thank you for another great update, I love the way you provide an insight into their present and past, keeps your readers wondering why they got married. Arnav wants her to look at him once so that he can read her eyes, she refuse to as she knows this is dangerous territory for her...glad to hear you are better and hope for another update soon...

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Amina

@KreyaArshiLover

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#723

Awsome I really loved it. Please update next a bit sooner

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someoneipk

@someoneipk

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#724

nice update...really curious to know how they got married...though you are unfolding the past and present situation very efficiently...thanks for the pm...please update quickly...

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greenbutterfly

@greenbutterfly

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#725

amazing update plz update soon

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anurao.66

@anurao.66

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#726

Fari 😊

After such a long time, I am so happy to meet you. Ire ally loved the update and I am begging for more. It was Fari Style outstanding makeing readers hungry for more.

Anu

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Yuks

@-Yuks-

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#727

It was a nice update. But may I say, your story moves really slow.
It's chapter 11 already, and in present day its only been a few hours. There's been very little progress.
Do you plan this to be a long story?

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Abhinaya

@HeyDeviMaiyya

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#728

Hi Fari !🤗 Its been long! Sorry hun,for not commenting on the previous updates,I have just been replying to my PM's one by one after a long time! 😳Just read all your updates of this FF till Part 11! Loving it! Do update soon and thank you so much for the PM 🤗

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incandescent

@incandescent

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#729

Originally posted by: anurao.66
Fari 😊

After such a long time, I am so happy to meet you. Ire ally loved the update and I am begging for more. It was Fari Style outstanding makeing readers hungry for more.

Anu

Hi Anu 🤗

Long time...thank you so much !!

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incandescent

@incandescent

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#730

Originally posted by: -Yuks-
It was a nice update. But may I say, your story moves really slow.
It's chapter 11 already, and in present day its only been a few hours. There's been very little progress.
Do you plan this to be a long story?

Thanks.

Yes, it will be a bit long. It is a quite slow at the moment the from the next chapter the pace will quicken a bit...but it won't be very fast I guess.

Edited by incandescent - 12 years ago