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Posted: 13 years ago
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when are you goin to update??? plz do it fast...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 7:

"Five, six, seven eight." Rey finished instructing Taani.

"Good, excellent. You pick up quite fast." Rey said as he saw Taani do his routine flawlessly.

"Rey it's going to be 7, we should get out of rehearsals before VP sir sees us." Taani said not wanting to get caught and ruin footloose for everyone.

Rey laughed and said, "You're right. But we need to decide a way that all of us can meet up. You can't tell anyone about our team Taani." Rey said knowing that Shivam was starting to become a good friend of Taani's.

"I know." Taani smiled.

Rey looked at her and saw that she wouldn't tell anyone about the team. He knew how convincing Shivam could be. Shivam successfully cheated Sharon and Taani was just a naive girl from Jotpur. He didn't want her to get hurt.

"Taani one more thing, it's about Shivam." Rey said as they walked out of the room.

"He's nice nah? Pata hai he was the first person to talk to me here." Taani said.

"Taani I'm just going to tell you straight out, don't trust Shivam. He's not a good person. If you don't believe me ask Swayam or Sharon, just be careful around him." Rey said.

"Rey I understand that you may have had problems with Shivam, but he is just a friend." Taani said confused.

"Taani I'm just saying be careful." Rey said.

Taani smiled and said, "I will."

Swaron walked into class together smiling. But that smile soon faded away as they saw Taani talking with Shivam.

"You don't believe me I'm serious." Shivam said as they saw Taani laughing hard.

"Swayam don't you think Shivam is trying to get too close to Taani." Sharon said as she saw them.

"I know Sharon but we can't just tell her to stay away from him. She's new she won't understand. Besides Shivam was the only person that she became friends with on her first day." Swayam said. Sharon looked over at them and hoped that Taani wouldn't make the same mistake she did.

Sharon saw Rey come in and a smile appeared on her face. "Taani." She called out.

Taani came over and smiled. "Taani why don't you sit with Rey today?" Sharon said.

"Yeah, cool." Rey said coming over. Sharon smiled knowing her plan worked. She looked over at Shivam with a smirk.

For the rest of the day Sharon realized that Taani and Rey gelled well together. They talked throughout the day, laughed, played pranks, and would walk to class together. She was glad that they both gained a good friend in one another.

"Sharon why are you smiling?" Swayam asked as he saw Sharon smiling by herself.

"No reason." Sharon said hugging Swayam.

All of the sudden their phones rang. Come to my house after school for rehearsal plans ~Rey. They opened their texts. Both of them nodded and decided to leave.

After school everyone was gathered at Rey's house. Once everyone was there Rey announced, "Okay guys today was good. VP has no idea about team Louin. And guys remember we have to be careful to not talk about it in school."

"Haan dude that's right but where will we rehearse?" Vishaka asked.

"Guys I think my house will be perfect for that." Sharon said. "My dad is a dancer and we have a big rehearsal hall."

"That is actually a good idea Sharon." Rey said nodding.

"Okay so guys it's done we will rehearse at Sharon's house so this means no more rehearsal hall in school." Rey said.

"But it's our place we can't just not use it." Simi said.

"I know Simi but we don't have a choice right now." Rey said.

"But Rey why can't we use it?" Rini asked.

"Rini Rey's right. If we even go into the rehearsal hall and VP sir finds out he will interrogate the situation and can figure out our new plan for footloose." Taani said.

"So guys it's decided. From tomorrow no more rehearsal hall." Swayam said.


Four months had passed and the gang had successfully hidden their team from VP. Sharon walked into class and saw Swayam sitting in his seat alone. She narrowed her eyes at him and sat next to him. She looked around and smiled when she saw Taani and Rey sitting next to each other. They both looked happy and were laughing. For the past three months Taani and Rey had been inseparable. They did everything together, from studying, to dancing, to eating. Rey had even told Sharon that Taani made him feel something he hadn't felt in a long time. Of course Rey didn't know that Taani had told Sharon the same thing. The only problem left was that along with Rey Shivam was also getting closer to Taani. They hung out a lot and Sharon was scared for Taani knowing that Taani really trusted Shivam.

"Bhai kya hua? Did you and Sharon have a fight again?" Taani asked when she saw that her brother and Sharon were glaring at each other.

"Haan Taani because you're brother is a big dummy!" Sharon said.

"Oh no not again." Nil said.

"What?" Vicky asked as the gang clued into the converstation.

"Sharon aur Swayam ka phirse fight." Simi sighed.

"Oh no not again." The entire gang said.

Sharon gasped and said, "Excuse me guys we don't fight that much." Everyone gave her a look and she rolled her eyes muttering, "It's his fault."

"What how is it my fault?" Swayam asked. He would normally apologize sweetly but this time he really didn't know what he did wrong.

"Bhai what did you do?" Taani accused Swayam.

"Taani you are my sister you should be on my side and I didn't do anything." Swayam said.

"Yes you did." Sharon countered.

"No I didn't." Swayam said.

"Stop! Stop. Guys cut it out ab toh you guys are a couple and you are still fighting." Rey said. Swaron looked at each other and turned the other way.

"Hey guys what's up?" Shivam said coming in. Everyone besides Taani ignored him.

"Hey Shivam come sit." Taani said with a smile. Shivam had been trying for the past month to get Taani to tell him what the gang was hiding from everyone but he wasn't successful yet. He also wasn't successful in getting Taani to fall for him.


During lunch Taani and Rey saw Swaron walk into the canteen hand in hand.

"Lagta hai swaron ka patch up ho gaya!" Vicky yelled as the gang laughed.

"See bhai all you had to do was explain why Gul was following you." Taani said smirking as she saw Sharon's cheeks go pink.

"Yeah Swayam you should recognize Sharon's jealous face." Rey said laughing.

"Enough guys." Swayam said holding back his laughter.

In a few minutes everyone went back to their own thing.

Rey looked at Taani enjoying her drink and smiled. She looked absolutely adorable. Rey couldn't place his finger on it but every since he started getting to know Taani his heart did something it hadn't in a long time, it skipped a beat.

"Taani what are you doing today after school?" Rey asked Taani still not understanding why he wanted to spend as much time as he could with her.

"Aaj? I promised Shivam I'll tutor him today?" Taani said with a small smile. Taani didn't understand why she wanted to ditch Shivam and hang out with Rey.

"Oh." Rey said with a hint of jealousy.

"Rey be nice." Taani said as Rey scoffed. "Please for me?" Taani asked and Rey gave a small smile.

"Fine but just know you're missing out." Rey said with a grin. Taani smiled back and before she could answer her alarm rang signaling the fact that their second class was about to start. "Time's up Miss Taani." Rey said with a grin as they walked to their next class.

Shivam was watching Rey and Taani in the canteen. "Taani, Taani, Taani, you blew off Rey for me." Shivam laughed with a crooked smile.

"Poor Rey doesn't even know that he's falling for her. Too bad Rey I will get my revenge." Shivam said waiting for the day to be over.

After school ended Taani tutored Shivam for an hour. "Thanks yaar Taani so much for this." Shivam said getting up after pretending to listen to Taani explains things.

"No problem Shivam." Taani smiled at him. Shivam got up and smirked leaving to go to VP sir's office.

At 4:30, the normal time Taani leaves, Shivam openly talked with VP. "Bhai I told you our plan would work." Shivam said not worrying if anyone heard him talk to his brother.

"Shivam at first I thought you were crazy with this plan, but this is a good one. I can successfully steal money from the school and you can get your revenge on these stupid kids." VP answered.

"Haan bhai, poor little Loins don't even realize that their VP sir, the one they will not disrespect because of his authority, is a fake. Not just a fake, but my, Shivam's brother." Shivam smirked.

"Now look at them, no team, no money." VP said.

"Bhai we have to be careful though. You can't take that much money or the school will know. Besides before the real VP comes back or princi comes back we have to leave. And bhai when we do leave they will regret the day they ever insulted me." Shivam smirked.

"And the girl Taani?" VP asked him.

"Taani, she is Swayam's sister and the lynch pin. Once I break her I'll break him. Once I break Swayam I break Sharon, Sharon to Rey, you see the cycle will go on until each and every one of them is broken." Shivam said. Shivam and VP smirked congratulating their evil plans. "And they won't even know what hit them." Shivam said with an evil smirk.

Edited by desigirlx5 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
wow dear i will read now and then comment very nice update i just read a para
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
fab update...

luvd it..!!!!

eagrly wi8n 4 nxt update...

plz update fast.. n ty 4 pm..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
just awesome.
a big 🤗 for super duper post.
and suspense???
i just loved it.

my fav lines

"Rey had even told Sharon that Taani made him feel something he hadn't felt in a long time"


"Rey looked at Taani enjoying her drink and smiled. She looked absolutely adorable. Rey couldn't place his finger on it but every since he started getting to know Taani his heart did something it hadn't in a long time, it skipped a beat."

Tarey really awesome...😎

eagerly waiting for the next part.😍
THANK YOU SANJU❤️

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Posted: 13 years ago
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rey jealous😳..wow loved it sanju..that vp and shivam ughh😡 soon you ll learn a lesson shivam.

thank u sanju.amazing update🤗

Edited by blue_cherub - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
@such thanks yaar again if u hadn't encouraged me i wouldn't have been able to write this ff

@arushii no need for thanks dear glad u liked it

@maneesha 😆 i knew you would like the update esp the taarey parts 😍 and a big 🤗back to you love you gurlie ❤️

@christy hehe glad u liked it dnt wry shivam wnt even see wats coming his way 😈
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
Awww...i am loving the way the story is proceeding specially Rey and Taani's feelings for each other...The way u write how the feelings among both are developing is just so very adorable😍

Hahaha Swayam and Sharon are so cuteee😆 Sharon and Swayam had a fight and Swayam didnt even knew the reason😆😳 and then thodi hi time me haath pakad ke canteen ja rahe the haye😍☺️

Shivam Shivam Shivam...please someone give me a knife so that i can chop him off😡

And even that VP omg...they are planning to steal money???😲

I hope they will not be able to...

Lovely update sanju as usual👏 waiting for the next part😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sreeja_rox

Awww...i am loving the way the story is proceeding specially Rey and Taani's feelings for each other...The way u write how the feelings among both are developing is just so very adorable😍


Hahaha Swayam and Sharon are so cuteee😆 Sharon and Swayam had a fight and Swayam didnt even knew the reason😆😳 and then thodi hi time me haath pakad ke canteen ja rahe the haye😍☺️

Shivam Shivam Shivam...please someone give me a knife so that i can chop him off😡

And even that VP omg...they are planning to steal money???😲

I hope they will not be able to...

Lovely update sanju as usual👏 waiting for the next part😳



hehe thanks sreeja 😳 and shivam is not even going to know what hit him 😈

i really hope we see some taarey progression in the show as well 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: desigirlx5



hehe thanks sreeja 😳 and shivam is not even going to know what hit him 😈

i really hope we see some taarey progression in the show as well 😍

yup lets hope so...😳 fingers crossed for that!!!!😉

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