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Sar_M

@Sar_M

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

omg this was fcuking amzing :D:D

I love your writing style...you are soo talented

keep these SS stories coming and do update your FF soon as well :)

Thanks for the PM

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SleepingBeauty.

@SleepingBeauty.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

OMG THIS WAS CUTE CUTE CUTE CUTE HOT CUTE CUTE SUPER SEXY CUTE CUTE CUTE Yeah you read it right 🤣 OMG i couldn't believe i was reading that kind of a shot by you! Never seen you right sexy kinda stuffs! But believe me, it wasn't OTT. It looked perfect!

NOTE TO SHRUU - GO TELL HER MOM, SHE HAS A RIGHT TO KNOW WHAT HER DAUGHTER HAS BEEN UPTO! Right when her exams her on 🤣 🤣

But Aanya! I Love how Riddhima in your stories are never the bichari kind but the much independent girl who every girls dreams to be sometime! It feels nice to read her character like that! :)

Aah i loved the shot completely! And it surely has been one of your best shot i feel till date :)

And Armaan? I knew, he loved her! Poor guy never got a chance to tell her :( But Aah he is so adorable <3 Loved how he realised about her morning sickness and didn't leave that morning. I wish he could have stayed back all those mornings the night after they slept together. At least it would have not brought everything to this. But Aah well everything happens for a reason and Yayy THEY ARE TOGETHER! :D

Aaa right more shots PLEASE? Pretty please? Eeekkss Imma go and read this again ;)

Love you xx

Edited by SleepingBeauty. - 12 years ago

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doublep

@doublep

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Your writing is top- notch, no doubt about that. The whole OS has Aanya written all over it- writing the main character in third person, going into excruciating details about every single thing and well everything that's so intricate and engrossing is your patent.
However, I cannot relate to your characters here. In the middle, Armaan just seemed an outright jerk and Riddhima a girl in love who loses control before her lover. Their story had a happy ending which I fervently hoped it would but i wished the ending would've tied the whole story as in giving a more plausible reason for Armaan's detached behavior. I'm used to your strong characters in Ricochet, that's all. It was an interesting read anywho and you top my list of writers on IF at present.

Edited by doublep - 12 years ago

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Aanya

@Aanya.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: doublep
Your writing is top- notch, no doubt about that. The whole OS has Aanya written all over it- writing the main character in third person, going into excruciating details about every single thing and well everything that's so intricate and engrossing is your patent.
However, I cannot relate to your characters here. In the middle, Armaan just seemed an outright jerk and Riddhima a girl in love who loses control before her lover. Their story had a happy ending which I fervently hoped it would but i wished the ending would've tied the whole story as in giving a more plausible reason for Armaan's detached behavior. I'm used to your strong characters in Ricochet, that's all. It was an interesting read anywho and you top my list of writers on IF at present.

I AGREEE. But omg this thing wouldn't leave me alone. So I went ahead and wrote it anyway because it was interfering with Maths ki pahdai :P

Originally posted by: Pious_KaSh
yay!!

i am the first one to comment'
first when i had started reading I thought of it as the same old cliche topic and it was but it was a whole new thing to read at the same time'
have you noticed'its become kind of your trade-mark to dodge between past and present'and its fun to read'
while reading I was comparing the writing style to that in your ff and i realized that the ff has matureness added to it and i like to read that'no make that love
it was not that mature'
you are one of the best writers here'
I expected more mature thing from you

p.s. haww :O jab tak maine pura comment likha logone comment bhi kar diya :(

THANK YOU <3

P.S - I agree. Even I didn't like this too much :P