KR FF- Stewing Temptations; # 1; Ch 1 to 8

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magical_mania

@magical_mania

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Posted: 13 years ago

#301

OMG! OMG! OMG!
Tish u r an awsm writer...m readng ur work after a long time stil its that fresh in my mind n nw addng to d pile u r writing on kriyansh wow
i m lovng kria more dan any1 even i lyk how u portrayd sharon
keep writng u deserve an ovatn hehe

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Yogini

@yogini64

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Posted: 13 years ago

#302

Hey tish . . . Wen u'll update?? 😳

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ekiholo

@ekiholo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#303

hey tish when u'll update yaar!!

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Palakh Aggarwal

@RudrakshPreesha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#304

tish jaan wen will u update dear😳

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medha

@SavageMissMe

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Posted: 13 years ago

#305

i know im super late so sorry for that.
as for the update its absolutely amazingand never fails to bring a smile to my face.the way you write is simple yet compelling and totally leaves me asking for more.the story rattles off at an easy pace not rushing it but never gets boring even for a second, infact it just seems to get better and better. kriyaansh part was fabulous with a dash of humor through those witty lines you seem to excel at writing but it was the swaron part that left me absolutely surprised. i guess i was as shocked at sharon! this ff has me totally hooked waiting desperately for the next update everytime.
hope you get a lot more classes with this prof so that we get a lot more updates. plz do update asap, the wait seems long enough already infact im already considering stalking this thread waiting for the next update.

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#306

aawesome part tish...it was superb

loved the way kria cut every statement of rey...typical baatcutter

and rey he is too daring ...carrying the girl like this ...amazing

poor kria she got scared but rey is rey...loved it

and swaron part was superb and the tight slap in end was more amazing

loved the update...

waiting eagerly for next part

continue soon

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vaishali

@Vaish24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#307

update di!!!

aaj toh every pm that is coming at night am opening pehle this...

actually mujhe convo padhna hai kriyansh ka..

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tish18

@tish18

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Posted: 13 years ago

#308

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vaishali

@Vaish24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#309

Patience pays... phew...

so i am the first one to comment...

maine aaj bhi vahi rotuine follow kiya tha...

i loved the update...

u know fully crisp...

loved how kria was cutting him a slack.. i like this kria...

rey finally got into her to make her work... well how much a person changes from out but inside the same and so kriya had to have a soft heart...

sweet on rey's part that he is trying to amend the things gone wrong... but seriously he wud be having a hard time to keep his hands off...

i seriously doubt what rey's feelings are.. u know much later...uske dimaag mein aakhir chal kya rha hai...

loved the photographer.. and both being the sadist from their parts...

rey hates kids... cool looks like he is gonna start loving them or the person who is gonna handle them

but the last part i can already picture what might be coming next... u know her coming and the cuddling the toddler and rey lost...

unless u plan to change it... plz don't do ...

looks like di aapko mazaa aa rhi yeh ff likhne mein.. pata nhi kyun i have a feeling u know...

Edited by kriyansh24 - 13 years ago

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Yogini

@yogini64

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Posted: 13 years ago

#310

Res
unres
Rey finally convinced her to take on the job . . . . . . 👍🏼
as if he gonna search another asst. Ever 😆
uff . . . Ye kriya to kuch batane hi nhi de rahi uss NIGHT ke bare me 🤔
babies products . . . . . Well dat was totally unexpected 😛
wen alex called him- "hii baby"
my heart flinched,,, I thought its taani 😔
but thanx to u . . . . He was just a gayish photographer & not dat chudail showed up . . . 😆
awww . . . . Kids are adorable . . . 😃
& rey is such a ignorant 🤢
oops . . . . . Baby is crying now,,,, thankgod he did'nt pee on him 🤣
now,, kriya will come & handle the baby very gently 😍

Edited by yogini64 - 13 years ago

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