MISSION KRIYAANSH - Page 53

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Loved it

the song fitted here perfectly

1 more update soon

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mannu that was absolutely wonderful

loved it

yeh smriti kab maanegi? waiting for next update

Awesome chappy ekdum funny tha loved it
Kr intense love and the song everythink i love tha

Aww lovely updt
Lyked it
Beautifully written
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wow!!!!!!!!!!!!! after reading this chapter ...
no words... the dance was a magical to it ...
the whole gang support them and want to two back together...
pl do make kriya mom release soon what she is do is wrong and her she is right...
it get interest to read more... do continue soon and pm me early wait

Hi m apoorva die hard kr fan except my buddy req and pm me i really don't wanna miss this 1

Part-13

At Kriya's place,

Sm- woh sab kya tha kriya...what were you doing downstairs...?

Kr- sach bol rhi thi ma...i really love him and he also loves me...woh pure dil se pyaar karte hai mujhe...I know ki unka first impression aap pr acha nhi tha but it was not his mistake, the situations didn't favour...he is a nice guy

Sm- kaunsa nice guy tumhari ma ka sabke samne mazak bna dega...

Kr- but he didn't had any option...

Sm- bas kriya...us jese gunde ko na main bahut ache se handle karna janti hu.

Kr- huh...?

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Whole gang except abhi and taani were sitting in front of the tent when a jeep entered with siren beeping with a huge sound.

Am- ale yal ye polich yha kya kal lhi hai {are yar yeh police yha kya kar rhi hai}

Bh- hume kese pta hoga be

Nil- guys I think something is wrong

Sw- lets check guys

Rey- chalo...

A police inspector with two constables got down from the white jeep when the gang came towards them.

Inspector- kya tamasha lga rkha hai yeh...

Vick- kya hua sir...whats the problem?

Inspector- tu hi hai kya woh...a...kya tha wo naam...a

Constable- rey

Ins- ha ha rey...tu hi hai kya?

Rey- main hu rey..

Ins- oye hero...kya tumbu wambu gaad rkha hai yeh...ukhad ise

Sha- aese kese ukhade...aapke paas koi warant hai...dekhiye law hum bhi jante hai aap aese kuch nhi kar sakte...

Ins- ab hume kanoon tum sikhaogi...

Sh- listen aap...

Sw(intrupting sharon)- sharon aram se...control...calm down...don't spoil the situations more...and sir aap please btaiye hua kya achanak...

Ins- complaint aayi hai tumhare khilaf...

Rey- complaint..?

Ins- tum is society me without permission tambu gad ke bethe ho aur yha sabko pareshan kar rhe ho aur ek ladki aur uski ma ko faltu me insult kar rhe ho...

Rey- but sir yeh kisne...

Sw- (intrupting) rey...[swayam raised his eyebrows indicating rey to look up. In kriya's balcony smriti was standing with a smirk along with kriya who was again and again seeing here and there as if waiting for something]

The constables were heading towards the tent while the gang was trying to stop them when a voice came aloud to be heard addresing the inspestor.

There taani and abhi were standing with a piece of paper in taani's hand which she soon brought towards the inspector.

Abhi- sir yeh log yha hai to shi aur definitely ek girl ke liye hai par they are not without permission.

Ins- matlab?

Taani- matlab sir aap yeh dekhiye is page par is society ke har ghar ke person ka signature hai except flat no. 201 (kriya ka flat) and dekhiye yha sabse end idhar ke secetory ka bhi sign hai so...

Abhi- so aap na hi is tent ko aur na hi hume is place se hata sakte hai.

Inspector took the sheet from taani's hand and started examining it.

Rey- guys thankyou so much

vi- but lady james bond tumne yeh kiya kese...?

Taa- vickey maine kuch nhi kiya yeh sab abhi ki wajah se hua hai...(she said with a huge smile)...so rey aapko thanx kehna hi hai to inhe khiye

Abhi- what rubbish...agar tum na hoti to main kuch nhi kar pata...its all because of you...I got really tensed when mujhe police ke bareme pta chala and when I told you...you suggested this idea of taking signatures aur sab kitni aasani se ho gya

Tan- but agar mujhe poice ke bare me pta hi nhi chalta to how would I have done all of this

tan- jab kriya ki mom ne police ko call karke complaint ki tab kriya got tensed for rey and called me and told everything so the credit goes to kriya.

Rinnie(whispering)- aww...they are fighting for each other...that's so sweet

Swayam who listened this and got irritated spoke- OK...thanx to both of you...ab khush...

Meanwhile inspector had examined the sheet.

Ins- hmm. Deekh hai

He was heading back towards his jeep when smriti came downstairs while kriya was still standing on her balcony.

Sm- sir aap aese kese ja rhe hai?

Ins- dekhiye inke paas papers hai aur officially main inhe haath bhi nhi laga sakta...sorry

Smriti was highly irritated. Inspector was about to sit in his jeep when he stopped and turned towards rey.

Ins- bahut pyaar karta hai na use...

Rey (smiling)- bahit...itna ki agar mere paas do dil hote na to dusra bhi me use hi deta todne ke liye...

Inspector smiled while sitting in his jeep and then drove off with his two constables.

Dil hote jo mere seene mein do
Doosra dil bhi main tumhe deta todne ko

Rey looked up towards kriya with adorable eyes and sung these lines looking straight in those two beautiful black pearls of her.

Hosanna..Hosanna..Hosanna
Ho..Sannna...Hosanna..Ho...

Rey took few back steps while not breaking the eye contact with kriya whereas the dancing gang which was scattered till now came unified behind rey.

Dilkash thi woh shaam pehle pehal
Jab ke tumse mili thi nazar

Rey along with the gang performed a random step and then placed his right hand above his eyes.

Aisa chakraya ki ab ye na jaanu
Ke jaaun tto jaaun kidhar

He placed his hand over his head and moved his neck clockwise and then freed his body and fell down only to be catched by swayam who again dropped him but this time sidewards only to be catched by vickey who then made him stand.
Hosanna tum samne thi pal
Hosanna Agle hi pal thi ojhal

Abhi and taani brought a big cardboads which had kriya's pictures (this was what abhi brought in last update). rey pointed at those and then stood at his toes doing a step with his hands.

Ab kya bataaun main
Kis haal mein hu main
Yahaan-wahaan bas apna dil aur hosh dhoodta hu main

Rey formed his hands as if asking question still on his toes. He stood on his feet and started finding something while doing one leg splits.

Hosanna.. (Madhoshi deewanagi)
was Hosanna.. (main aur teri bandagi)
Hosanna.. (ab hai yehi zindagi)
Hosanna..

Rey did some fabulous hip hop with the gang supporting him and abhi and taani moving rhythmically on the music with kriya's pics in their hands.

All this time smriti was standing there only with an angry expression and kriya was adoring rey from her balcony.

Everybody wanna know be like be like
I really wanna be here with you

Bharat and amar placed a ladder such that it touches kriya's balcony on which rey started to assend.

Is that enough to say that
We are made for each other is all that is Hosanna true
Hosanna... be there when you are calling i will be there
Hosanna... feeling like my life's changed

Rey was assending the ladder doing some idiotic steps with his legs while balancing himself. Bharat and amar were holding the ladder whereas The rest of the gang was dancing around smriti stopping her to go towards rey.

I never wanna be the same..

Rey was on the second last step of ladder from downstairs and nodded his head in a no.
Its time we re-arrange i take a step
you take a step and me calling out to you

Rey took the last step of ladder and landed inside her balcony straight infront kriya. He took her hand and pulled her into him.

Hellooo... Hellooo... Hellooo ooo
Yooo Hosanna

Ho..sanna...ooo...

Kriyaansh were sharing a beautiful eye lock forgetting about the world.

Udti hui titli ki rangeen parchhaai reh jaati hai phoolon mein
Waise hi tum ek tasveer ke jaise chhaye ho inn aankhon mein
Hosanna, Tum jo mera khwaab ho
Hosanna, Dil kyon na betaab ho
Kahoon to kya kahoon
Main kyun deewana hoon
Tumhare baare mein hi har ghadi main sochta hoon kyun.

Rey smiled a bit and twisted her and started doing some couple steps. God knows how while dancing kriyaansh stepped inside the house via the open door joining kriya's room and balcony going out of smriti's and gang's sight.

Hello.. Hello.. Hello...
Hosanna... (ab din ho ya raat ho)
Hosanna... (dil chahe tum saath ho)
Hosanna... (bas haathon mein haath ho)
Hosanna...

Smriti managed to push everyone aside and went inside the building heading towards her house where the two love birds were dancing.

Dil hote jo, mere seene mein do

Doosra dil bhi main, tumhe deta todne ko

kriyaansh were drowned in each other in kriya's room when...

Ok now that's it...guys I know all of you want kr reunion so advance me bta rhi hu that kr would be together in max 2 updtes and that's taken being on a safer side. So, STAY TUNED.

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Awesome update...
Song was very nice...
Aww..rey is so cute.
Smriti ab toh maan jao...
Kriya ne rey ki hep ki...
Arre!! police bhi kriyaansh ke sath h...
Akhir purani setting h..hahahaha