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Posted: 12 years ago
nice updte
pta nhi rey ke dimag me kya chal rha he
so ,waiting for ur next updte
continue soon 😎
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Posted: 12 years ago
likes demand complete hogayi... update... update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
likes vali demand to hogayi ab baaki he page ki vo bhi ho jayegi update soon..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
tu update likhana start karde ha vo bhi bahot lamba vala okay..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
i got to go now sry dear.. m in in the plan okay.. vl msg u later.. cya tc.. lub u.. demand complete karke jaiyo..

n yaa i miss u a lot des days.. chk out my latest kriyaansh work too okay.. cya
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update tayar hena page 90 pohoch gaye hum
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzlingmanavi

PART-10

R- main apse baat karna chahta hu'pls atleast give me this chance.

Everyone were preying to all their almighties to give a little brain to kriya's mom and make her listen to rey's lambi chodi speech which was combinely made by swayam and rey'.well actually the speech was quite nice and had the capacity to melt the heart of any parent.

Sm ' no'.mujhe tumhe koi chance nhi dena. Now don't create any scene here and get lost

K- but ma'..

R ' aunty'

And smriti closed the door with a bang and there they stood with stone faces.

T ' hey Krishna ji'yeh kya ho gya

Sh ' expect hi nhi kiya tha ki aunty ek chance tak nhi degi

Sw ' script wasted'kitni mehnat ki thi

Abhi ' guys mere ghar pr chale'aunty ki ek baat right thi ki we should not create a scene here

R ' lets go'

Everyone ' WHAT

Vi ' rey hum kuch sochte he na

T ' right hum kuch karenge

Sw ' rey tu aese haar mat maan

Everyone was speaking and speaking and speaking and were not letting rey utter a word.

R ' shut up

Everyone immediately became quite.

R ' kya bole ja rhe ho'main baatcutter ke bina khi nhi jaunga. Main to bas abhi ke ghar jaake baat karne ke liye bol rha tha.

Everyone in unison ' ohhh'.

R ' ha'pta nhi kya soche jar he ho'chalo ab

Abhi led them towards his house which was adjacent to kriya's place.

They entered abhi's room and were sitting there and thinking about some plan. Rey was standing near window pane. Sharon was sitting on the arm of the chair where swayam was sitting. Taani was on the bed with a pillow on her lap while abhi was leaning on the wall admiring taani. Others were also there in the room.

Nil ' oye bhukhad'hum yha itne preshan hai aur tu chips kutre ja rha he

Vi ' oye tujhe pta nhi khane se dimag tez chalta hai.

Nil ' bhukhad khi ka

Si (whispering to rinnie)- hey dekh na abhi kese taani ko dekh rha hai

Ri (whispering back)- hmm. I think something is cooking b/w them.

R ' guys galti meri hai'

Everyone stopped thinking or talking and seriously listened to rey.

Sh- what do you mean?

R ' maine socha liya ki aunty mujhe unse baat karne ka chance dengi jo koi bhi aur parent deta but aunty koi bhi parent nhi hai'she is the Jhansi ki rani. So'

T ' so'?

R ' so unko manane ke liye there should be a wild and crazy plan

Sw ' tere dimag me koi dangerous sa idea he na'

Rey smiled and turned around to face them.

R ' lets dil dosti dance guys'

Everyone stood up straight- WHAT!!!

R ' DIL ke liye DOSTI ke saath DANCE ke through

Everyone ' WHAT !!!

Rey grinned evilly'.

Do see the note in next post'its important.

great update
loved it poor rey hope he succeeds in his plan
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Part-11

Thank you for completing my demand especially kanchi01(sorry dont know your real name). Love you all. I just now saw the demand completed so posting it now.

R – lets dil dosti dance guys…

Everyone stood up straight- WHAT!!!

R – DIL ke liye DOSTI ke saath DANCE ke through

Everyone – WHAT !!!

Rey grinned evilly….

After listening to the plan everyone were shocked to hell. (you have to wait and watch…I mean wait and read for the plan)

Sw – tu Mazak kr rha hai na

R – bilkul bhi nhi….i am serious…dekh mujhe main has rha hu kya

Sh- tu to nhi has rha but yeh plan sun kar mujhe hassi aa rhi hai

R – really…?

Sh- actually nhi but…but you…you sound umm…a

Sharon said looking for a right word.

Sw – insane

Sh – right…you sound insane...have you ever thought ki tu bol kya rha hai

R – ya offcourse….i thought about it…tabhi to btaya tum logo ko and I think its superb

Sw- no its not….yeh bahut hi ajeeb idea hai aur….guys hum hi bole ja rhe hai….say something….bolo ise ki its not good

Vi – ya…rey I think swayam aur Sharon shi khe rhe hai….this is not a gud idea….hum kuch aur sochte hai

Nil – ya dude….i thought kit u samajhdar hai aur aese stupid ideas sirf vickey ke dimag me aate hai but I guess sangat ka asar hota hai

R – kiska kya hota hai…

Vi – he means company matters….wait a min what do you mean stupid ideas vickey ke dimag me hi ate hai….

Nil – sach hi to bola maine…

And here nilesh v/s vickey boxing match was about to start when vishakha interrupted

Vish – chuck the fight guys….and rey agar yeh plan kriya kop ta chalega to use bhi acha nhi lgega…haina abhi…?

A – yup she would not like it

Everyone started arguing that the plan was not good, dangerous and a flop whereas rey was repeating again and again that the plan is nice and would work.

While all this two individuals were quite and thinking hard. Those two were Taani and Rinni. (I know rinnie was a surprise)

Ri – shut up guys

Everyone became quite.

Ri – I think yeh plan acha hai….thoda dangerous hai but acha hai

T – I agree…I think we should give it a try.

Rey – thank you…thank you kriya ke universe ji…koi to samjha

Rey said excitedly.

"kriya ke what" everyone said in unison eyeing rey.

R – baad me samjhaunga… philhal is plan ko execute karna hai.

Sh- I still stick to my words…this plan is insane

Sharon said folding her hands over her chest.

Rey now was fed up and he shouted on top of his voice shocking everyone.

R – what insane ha….insane tumhe yeh plan insane, ajeeb, bakwas aur pta nhi kya kya lagta hai aur tum log use kya khoge jo kriya ki ma kar rhi hai….bina kuch jaane, samjhe, doosre insan ka point of view jaane decision le liya…kisne kisne diya unhe right meri life ke decisions lene ka

Si – technically unho ne kriya ke life ka decision liya…

Rey stared at simmie and she instantly became quite.

R – kriya ki life me kuch bhi hoga to wo mujhe bhi affect karega….mujhe chodo kriya ke bare me socho apne dil dosti dance ke bina kese jeer hi hogi wo…I know kriya ki ma uske life ke decisions le sakti hai par yeh unki responsibility hai ki un decisions se kriya khush ho and I know kriya apne dance ke bina kabhi khush nhi reh sakti…

A – actually she got her dance back

Everyone- what!

A – ha wo yha ane ke baad kriya was really a mess…aunty ko lga ki kriya is missing her dance that's why she gave her permission to dance but she never danced…she said ki wo dance nhi karti...dance to romaira karti hai aur agar romaira dance karegi to sirf apne chabilal ke saath

Instantly a smile crept on rey's face while else didn't get a word what abhi said except taani.(remember guys usne kriya ki diary padhi thi to use to sab pta hi hai)

T – that's so sweet…

A – I know

Vi (whispering to nilesh)- ab yeh kya hai…pehle baatcutter phir wo universeji and now romaira and chabilal

Nil (whispering back) – how would I know…chod yeh sabh kuch…bahut complicated hai

R – sweet nhi hai yeh pagalpan hai….zaruri hamesha khud ko pain dena….khud ke bare me bhi soch liya kare

A – main bhi use yhi kehta tha phir usne mujhe btaya ki use khud ke bare me sochne ki koi zarurat nhi hai kyunki ek insaan hai jo hamesha kriya ke bare me hi sochta rehta hai and today I completely agree with her

R – chalo meri ek tension to khatam hui…use at least apna dance to wapas mill gya.

Sw – guys pura topic change hi ho gya….kha se kha pahunch gye yaar

T – right bhai…the plan…aap bolo what do you think

Sw – dekh rey tere saare plans super ghatiya hote hai…

Rey instantly glared swayam angrily.

Sw – but they always work…so I am with you but I hope you realize ki this can back fire.

R – I know but I seriously wanna take this risk. Baaki jo hoga dekha jaega

T – Sharon…?

Sh- if swayam is ok with it to mujhe bhi koi problem nhi hai.

Everyone instantly looked at Sharon.

Sh- what….kya dekh rhe ho?

Si – tum

Ri – swayam ki

Bh – baat maan

Ne – rhi ho

A – kriya to keh rhi thi ki swayam Sharon ki har baat manta hai par yha to…

Sh – so what….swayam intelligent hai, smart hai and rey aur kriya ko mujhse jyada jaanta hai to yeh shi hi khe rha hoga.

Vish – yeh tum khe rhi ho….sharon rai prakash

Sh- nhi…yeh Sharon rai prakash nhi balki sharanjeet rai prakash khe rhi he…you know what ab tum sab ko sach pta chal jaana chahiya

Sw – Sharon you know what are you saying…

Sh- ha swayam I know what I am saying….

Sharon holds swayam's hand.

Sh- guys we are in a relationship…

Everyone stood there still for a minute except rey and swaron.

Sw – inhe kya hua??

R – zor ka jhatka zor se laga…

Sh – say something guys…

Everyone came out of their trance and started hooting and congratulating the couple.

Sh – ok now finish this all and lets get started with our mission kriyaansh

Everyone hooted.

Vi- but I hope you know its risky.

R – I know

T – stop saying this guys…aur wese bhi dar ke age jeet he

Abhi (in mind)- kitni positive hai yeh…

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Smriti and kriya were coming out of the building.

Sm- aaj se main tumhe roz college chodne aur lene jaungi. I am sure woh shirtless wonder tumse milne ki koshish zarur karega

K – ji ma

K (in her mind)- ma aap unhe nhi jaante ek baar jo dhaan le wo kar ke rhenge…bahut bde wale ziddi hai wo…lets see aap unhe kab tak rok paoge.

They suddenly saw a tent and our fabulous 11 and taani and abhi led by rey standing in front of it in the garden.

Rey came towards smriti and kriya.

R – namste aunty

Sm- tum…yeh sab…what the hell is going on here??

R – maine decide kiya hai ki jab tak aap mujhse shaanti se baat karne ke liye ready nhi ho jaati tab tak main yha se nhi jaunga

Smriti and kriya- what…?

R – yes…main apne pyaar ke liye ladunga

Sm- tumhe jo karna hai karlo…bethe rho yha par mujhe kya farak padhta hai…

R – actually aunty main chup-chap yha bethe-bethe bore ho jaunga na….isliye maine socha hai ki thodi-thodi der me apne pyaar ke liye dance karta rhunga…you know dance ke through apna pyaar jataunga

K –rey aap kar kya rhe ho…?

R – apne dil ke liye dosti ke saath dance ke through protest…

Sm – protest…

R – ha waise bhi aaj kal yeh kaafi in hai…

Sm – yeh shi nhi hai

R – jaanta hu par aap jo kar rhi hai wo bhi shi nhi hai...aap sirf mujhko hi nhi kriya ko bhi bahut pain kar rhi hai….aap uski life use cheen rhi hai aur yeh main aapko nhi karne dunga.

And then smriti and rey share a tashan-tashan look.

Finally done…ok guys I don't know how this turned out….i am really hesitant on this one.

Please do like and comment. Next update will be on pg.110 and after 40 likes.

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Edited by dazzlingmanavi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update
rey ka plan dil ke liye dosti ke sath dance ke through protest was supab
n sab ka reaction is so...
dont have word to express
then vickys dialoge
pahle baatcutter fir universji n ab ramaira
swaron scene ws suerpb
kya idea h rey
uski building ke neeche tent lgaya aur dance bhi karega ...nt a bad idea😎
tashan luk woh bhi apni future sasuma ko vry bad rey 😆😆

Edited by angel_luvkreya - 12 years ago

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