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Meera

@MirageSwaron

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Posted: 13 years ago

#311

Cute update . Finally KR cried & shared and made up to each other...luvd the way Rey ran when he heard Swayam was at the door 🤣

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

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Posted: 13 years ago

#312

ok maggie i start reading this i like the concept

give me some time or this

after reading all update main comment karti hoo k ...

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

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Posted: 13 years ago

#313

ok finally i finish this

i love this

each nd every part

u r such a great writer ha ...

kash main b itna asha likh pati but main ekflop show ban chuki hoo ...

i hope i got some these kinds of ideas ...

nd congo for this great sucess ...

hope u get more nd more sucess ...

nd i love every one in this swaron was too gud ...

that choclate scene injection meri halat b jahi hoti hey ...

kriyaansh ki cute bate all this lovely ...

or rey ka pics lena thats great ...

megical

kya baat kyaa baat kya baat

keep it up

update soon ha

nd do pm j bolne ki jroorat nahi hey muje i hope ...

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can call me Mrs Enrique Iglesias

@enrique

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Posted: 13 years ago

#314

Thanks aro I am nt dat great like u but thanks for liking my post dear . . .

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

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Posted: 13 years ago

#315

Originally posted by: enrique
Thanks aro I am nt dat great like u but thanks for liking my post dear . . .

hey u r great u know muje lagta hey ki main apni stupid stories sey sabka time waist karti hoo 😭

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#316

awesome update...loved it very much

rey's reverse theory worked hahhaa awesome idea

and kriyam bonding aweee they are soo cute

and finally kria and rey become kriyansh...superb

waiting eagerly for next part

continue soon

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can call me Mrs Enrique Iglesias

@enrique

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Posted: 13 years ago

#317

*****part 8*****

Rey: lo aya gaya tumhara bhaiya ...now wat will i do? (& was jumping around in the room and was scared from him and den kriya gave him an idea to hide in the closet and he went in and hid himself der and den neha openes the door...

sw: wat happened neha y did u opeed the door...

ne: i...i.. was in the room so...sorry

sw: arry dnt be wer is kriya...

ne: she is in...(and both headed in and neha was scared dat he should nt see rey in side both entered and swayam went near kriya and sat beside...)neha was confused dat wer did rey had gone and again and again she was searching here and der for him swayam noticed and asked her...

sw: wat happen neha wat r u searching?

ne: me...mee...nothing ?

sw: kriya how r u feeling now (and he placed a hand on her head and)...(from the closet the god of jelousy was peeping and doing his job to get jelouse ...)

kr: i am fine and how come ur here at this time ...

sw: of course i came to meet my dear friend ...(rey... was mimbling ...ya ..ya dear friend to whom u pick in ur arms again and again every now and den )(after lot of chit chat now ..rey messaged kriya to send swayam or else he might faint in the closet only and she some how managed to send him and den he came out... he was looking like a chicken his hairs all messed up and by seeing him neha and kriya busted into laught and rey could feel that her laught lit the whole room with happiness and den kriya said...(till den neha left for collage withput distrubing )

kr: dnt worry i will nt tell him anything about "US" ...

re: really...(and made a puppy face and bounced on the bed )

kr: ya even i wanna have some fun with my brother and bhabi...(by hearing this he was biwilidered ans confused...)

re: do u no about them ?

kr: ya i no from the day i arrived ...

re: o .o .o . o . i see ..and they made plans dat they will act in front of every one . . .

(2 week passed and he made a routine first to attend the collage den go to her house and take care of her and they use to have lot off fun rey made her practise slowly to walk and took care of her and they became more comfortable with each other ,now she was perfectly fine she could walk on her own she didnt need the support and she had 3 days more left to join the collage..they acted infront of the whole gand dat they dnt care 4 each other and swaron was more confused about der status and they even started talking to rey they forgave him . but they didnt ..left the reverse theory on rey .)

One day in the collage they got a invitation from other collage for a party which wes shivam's friends on shivam's birthday ... the gang denied to go but after lot of manoyfing and butter by shivam they agreed and he gave the invites and said...

shi: its a beach party so no dress codes and all ...feel free . . ..hey ... please even get kriya she will feel good.. its a request( by hearing this rey raised his eye brows looking at shivam )

sw: ok but i cant force her ...and every1 went to their homes and sharon went to kriya's home to bring her also .she reached her home and saw dat she was nt ready so she said ...

sh: wat kriya ur nt ready yet for the party...?

kr: i am nt willing to go please...

sh: common please for me . . . . . we will have lot of fun .

kr: but wat will i ware ...

sh: ok lets check ur wadrob ( and both heded towards her room and open the closet )(sharon was throwing all the clothes on bed and said ...

sh: hmmm its a beach party so this dress will be fine . U will look hot . . .

Ke: no no . . .no I can't ware it . . . I mean some1 gifted me this and it's to short please. i never wore such dress in my life .

Sh: pleas I don't want any arguments ( and she pushed her in and even she got ready) kriya came out and by seeing at her she said

Sh: u look so dam hot. . . . . . . Wow.

Kr: stop it Sharon now I am feeling embarised please ( they both left from der and the gang was waiting out side the party for them and they arrived . . . . .) Sharon got off the car but kriya was feeling shy so sharon said. . .

Sh: come on . . . . come out ( and den she placed her legs out and rey was looking at her like despo and his eyes wer wide open and he gulped in and was staring at her like he have see something out of the world. . .he was frozen . . )

this was the dress without gloves and helmet

Kriya was looking dam hot and den a boy passed by her and complemented her dat she is looking hot. . . By seeing this rey was fuming in anger he wanted to beat that guy and swayam saw this and took the advantage and went near her and gave her a hug and Sharon saw rey's expression and was smiling away there was couple entry so everyone had der partners and rey wanted to go with his love but . . . . The mr interrupter was der and said . .

Sw: o o ...no who wll be kriya's partner. . . And looked at the gang and every1 was about to say ...but..Sharon said . . . .

Sh: u can be her partner. . . Go on she is ur friend ( and rey gave a I will kill u look to swayam . . . . ) everyone entered and was enjoying the evening wen a girl came and asked rey for a dance and he shot a glare at kriya and swaron and den he said . .

Re: y nt . . . ( and went away with her leaving behind all narrow eyeing people . . .) and he stared dancing with dat girl 1 st they was one arm distance den the girl was interested in him so she reduced the distance and put her hands on his shoulder by seeing this swaron was getting angry dat how can he behave like this dat to in front of kriya and now kriya was fuming with "real anger" nt the fack on which they both decided to. . . Sharon couldn't bare this she went and talked something to one boy and came back and stood near kriya and now rey was getting cozy with dat girl just to make them jealous even he started dancing very close to her . now the girl was facing her back to him and he caught her from her shoulder and he slid his hand down from her shoulders . . . The music stopped and every1 started shouting the lights went off and an announce ment was made . . .

Announcement : guys and girls let play a game of random impromptu dance. . . . The boy said wen the lights focus on one couple den they have to dance on the floor . . . So let's start , . . .now Sharon moved and kriyam was standing side by side . . And the light focused on them . . And rey was hell shocked and jealousy dat again they both will be together .( rey was moving close to them before he could reach the moved to floor ) .

The boy : so we got r first couple please come on the floor ( they both wer embarised and Swaron looked at each other and Sharon winked at swYam and showed her thumb and he got it dat it was her plan and den they both went on the floor. . . . . . )

Boy : let's start . . . . . (And the music started the song was "u got a girl" by Enrique iglesias . ). .

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8LdE55bB0_c

Sw: forwarded his hand and she took it and they started dancing salsa and swayam took it intense and was glaring shots at rey who was the "god of jealous" at that moment and was fisting his hands and was busting away in his anger and . . . On 3:30 sec swayam pulled her and lift her in the air with one hand fron her side waist . .

and everyone was like shocked dat their position . . . ( rey said mera saath to kabhi aisa dance nahi kiya ...y with him?) . . . den dey ended it in a really sexy position swayam's 1 hand on her waist kriyas legs wer some thing like this

. . And they was looking smoking hot the dance was appealing by seeing their position rey mumbled ( how dare u touch her remove ur hand - and shaaron noticed this and smiled )and den the host entered . .

Ho: dat was a smoking hot performance wat do u say guys. .??????

And now rey went away in his anger and swaron was laughing like maniacs and kriya slightly took the chance and slipped away from der and went to search his nt so happy boyfriend . . . ...and found him standing near a tree in an angry mood . . .

Kr: aap yaha ho? I was searching the whole place . .

Re: Y ur so called friend is nt der . . Dat u want to talk to me. . . .

Ke: arre baba wat happened . . .

Re: wat was u dng on the floor with him ?

Kr: I was just dancing . .

Re: o ya. . . ( and gave her a narrowed eye look . She said in an angry tone. . . )

Kr: so wat was u dng with dat chipkali wen u wer dancing with her . .

Re: me. Me... wo..ooo

Kr see no answer . . . . ( and she turns away with anger and he hugged from Behind and places her chin on her shoulder and says. . Re: I am sorry I didn't mean to hurt u please I love u . . . .please maaf kar do?

Kr: o. . . K but next time ?...

Re: pakka I will nt dance with any 1 ..the way i dance with u ...

Party was over and every one went home and at kriyas home she places her phone on the table and found her moms diary and bill and papers she pulls the diary and start. Reading. . . .

On whom she was shouting wanna no so please scroll down . . .

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@enrique

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Posted: 13 years ago

#318

*****part 9*****

She pulls out the diary and sits on the bed with it and den start readings it's quarter to 11 and she reads the diary and den starts crying and wat was written made her numb out off shock and den she remember dat her mom told dat the music shop person called . . . Same thing was written in the book . . .

Diary: Kash uss din who shop se call na aata aur mai Meri beti ko na rokti and nothing would have happened my daughter happiness would nt have been ruined and she would nt be in such a pain she would be happy with him only for me she left her love . . . Wat did love gave me . . . Nothing but I thought the same for my daughter but I was wrong her love and friendship wer only the relation she had and I snatched dat also. . .(she wrote wen they wer in deheradon ) . . . ( after reading all this she was crying and screaming . . Dat y did u leave me mom . . . . . )

One thing stuck her mind dat who was the person who called . .and remembered the bills wer lying on the table . . She checked the bill lying over the table she took telephone bill and den checked the date before elms and she knew all the number's except one . . .

So she thought to call that number it was now 11:45 and she was hesitating but she had to call . . . She called

Kr: (ring . . . . Is on)

Pe: ( was in sleep coz he was a normal one so in sleep) helllo...

Kr: actually I wanted to mix some songs for my marriage so can ur music can u helpme do dat . . Pr: sorry this is nt music shop . .

Kr: o o o sorry by the who's no is this

Pe: "SHIVAM" I am mr SHIVAM any prob. .girl . ..

Kr: (hung up and was helll shocked and the phone droped from her hand she said ) u r gone . . . U bloody moron . .

Next day in collage everyone was in atrium kriya was gonna join collage tomorrow but no one expected her. . . Every 1 was busy in their work SHIVAM was sitting on the stares and every1 was just rooming here and der den every1 here a loud voice. . .

Kr: (facing towards SHIVAM ) U BAS*****D how dare u. . . . ( and moved towards him )

(ps. . SHIVAM had really fallen for tanni. He could do anything for her but she don't no .)

Every1 was hell shocked specially reyam and den she moved near him and slapped him hard and said how dare u she was hitting him and on kriya seeing this rey caught kriya and pulled back . .

Kr: leave me rey I will kill this moron leave me ( & tried hard to get to SHIVAM ). . And by see this . . Sw: stop it kriya wat r u dng ?(& now every1 gathered near her and circled around her coz she was out of control . reyam was standing infront of her like bodygards . . )

Re: wat happened tell me wat r u dng?

And now kriya couldn't handle and threw her arms around Sharon and cried and said . . ( some one was watching all this from behind nt vp but someone else)

Kr: he is only the one who Called my mom and said about my dance and. . he was the one who spoiled my dreams , he was the one who ruined my life. . .. . ( she couldn't speak but wat she told gave a hell shock to every1 and reyam)

At a time the gang spoke "What" . . . He called ur mom?and now reyam moved a side and gave a signal to kriya to move on and she understood and she came in front and asked SHIVAM. . . . . . .

Kr:( she shouts in a loud voice she caught his callar ) Y...Y did u do dat (and now she hit him once more . . . . .and now it was out of control for him to bare and he roses his hand on her but this time rey caught his hand and kriya moved back behind rey . . .

. And rey was hitting him hard den vp interrupted

Vp: stop it . . . Enough this is nt ur home mr singhayna . . . This is collage property . . . . . Nt ur's

And a voice from behind said "Yes he is right this is collage property "

Every one was happy and said Rdx sir aap. . .

Rdx: yes kids I am back and mr rey he is right this is collage property u cannot creat violence . . . . . . .( and he leaves his collar and now Rdx catches Shivams collar and says. . ).

Rdx : u cannot create violence in collage but this rule doesn't apply out of the collage and (literally drags him out of the collage and the

whole collage follows him out side and den he says to the vp)

Rdx : now I hope u don't have any problem . . . (giving him an angry look which could easily let girls drool over him ) mr SHIVAM u have to pay for ur sins and beat him 2 to 3 punches and now reyam join

Rey catches him and beat him like an beast and screams on him . .

Re: how dare u do this to "my kriya" ...( by hearing this every1 gets shocked and kriya shouts from behind . . )

Kr: rey leave him or else he will die. . Please ...

(and swayam catches him and speck to him )

Sw: now. . . . Agar kabhi bhi kriya ya kisi ke asa pass dekha to . . . ( points a finger towards him& gave a angry look ) now rey speaks

Re: don't even thing to harm kriya or any one . . . . in my group or else I will kill u ...( and now Shivams all friends have entered the collage by seeing him his friends caught Reys collar and said. . .

1st : how dare u hurt my friend I will nt leave u. . . .( by hearing this Rdx said)

Rdx: if u did such thing I will make sure dat u get suspended from ur collage and I will take care of one thing at u don't get admission in any another collages ., . . . . . .

( by hearing this his friends got scared and took Shivam and went away) . . . . Now the whole gang wer in RE .hall. . .. And was asking kriya how did this all happened . . . . .and she explained them . . . After all the drama every one was happy dat the problem was over and they wer going to canteen and they saw Rdx sir and all of a sudden the whole gang bounced on him and all

hugged him at once and he was breathing heavily coz of the shortage of air but no one left him and den swayam said ,...

Sw: guys leave him he is nt getting air . ."( & every one left him and all wer saying something or the other at once...)

Sharon: thanks u sir...

vicky:we r happy to see u...

dharat:ha sir ...

Neha: we love u sir...

Rid&sim : welcome back...( every one was blurring something and den he shouts . .) .

Rdx: stop it guys . . . I can understand ur feelings but one by one tel me wat u wanna tell.. . And guys I wanna invite u for a party to my farm house it's Nichols birthday after 2 days ... and she wants u guys to come so. U all r welcome . . . , as its holidays

for 5 days u all can spend quality time witth us if u dnt mind ... so get ur luggages ready ...and the gang was shouting like manaic...The gang thought by hearing Nicole's name nilesh will behave like an idiot but he was just staring at simmi and (llhh section) and he was so busy looking in her eyes. Dat he didn't looked at the gang which was staring at him like despo...and every1

said ooo nileshhh... Yeee .. Every1 understood dat he is In love with her so...every1 was excited to go der ...

Now every1 no's dat nil and simmi wer together , amer and rinni , vicky and neha and bharat and Vish... But no 1 knows about Sharon and kriyansh ...they thought they liked visa versa...after the collage every one went to their homes and still Swaron thought dat rey should confess to kriya so they wer on their mission . . . . Rey went to kriyas house first time through the door ..

Re: hi . . Kriya...( and hugged her from sideways )

Kr: hi rey . .

Re: wat happened u didn't get ready

Kr: no I am confused wat to ware...but my bag is ready

Re: ok let me solve ur problem ( & handed her a gift )

Kr: ( excited) 4 me . . (. She opens and finds a dress )

Re: no this dress is 4 me I will ware it . . . . .(& made a puppy face) u should ware tomorrow night on her birthday...

Kr: ok... now u go I will get ready as swayam is coming to pick me ...

Re: arre yaar . . . . Y don't ur bro leave u for me ...fine & he goes away in anger ...

Kriya gets ready and den swayam came and they all went to rdx farm house...it was 7 at night and every1 reached and had dinner

till 9 and went to sleep in different rooms girls in 1 and boys in other ...

That's it guys and now