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jenshad

@jenshad

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

This Is Confusing Yet Interesting 😳

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undercoverhappy

@undercoverhappy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Fab update consumed with fire and flame of anger from both sides 👏

Rapunzel - that he is 😉

⭐️⭐️⭐️

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Dalmuthuya

@Dalmuthuya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Okay I am in love with this! Very well written! Please continue, but how ever I got a question. Does Arnav call her Rapunzal? I am kind of confused there. :)

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Lena

@.Lina.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Dalmuthuya
Okay I am in love with this! Very well written! Please continue, but how ever I got a question. Does Arnav call her Rapunzal? I am kind of confused there. :)

Yep, as a nickname. When they first introduced themselves, they were strangers. And Arnav and Khushi has a silent agreement that they didn't want to state their names. So he called her Rapunzel in a teasing manner, since she has long hair.

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Dalmuthuya

@Dalmuthuya

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

And whats the name of the song in the prologue? I am in love with it!

Edited by Dalmuthuya - 13 years ago

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Lena

@.Lina.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Dalmuthuya
And whats the name of the song in the prologue? I am in love with it!

O Saiyyan from the movie, Agneepath.

Edited by .Lena. - 13 years ago

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Lena

@.Lina.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: undercoverhappy
Fab update consumed with fire and flame of anger from both sides 👏

Rapunzel - that he is 😉

⭐️⭐️⭐️

Khushi isn't really angry. She's more terrified and head strong. But yeah, Arnav is pretty much Mr. Hulk in sleeping mode. 😆
Arnav is not Rapunzel. 🤣

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Lena

@.Lina.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Ati-cha
breathtaking update, can you plz insert that beautiful song with every new chapter, love ur story, ur song choice, thanks😊

Done. 😊

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Lena

@.Lina.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: vish94
omFg Lena! i ahve said this before and i say it again! u write in a very hi-fi manner! my choice of words in saying this even will tell u that i use basic level english (otherwise i wud hav used some big hotshot word to express hw u wrote! ;p). but, you write BEAUTIFULLY!

now i am gettin it a bit.. the story line i mean.. or so i think.

the stranger who was in tatters in the past os arnav and khushi is khushi only. arnav went from rags to riches and khushi somehow went from riches to rags? thats what i gathered!

and to my previous comment, u had asked me 'vague isnt it (the prologue)'.. to that, i say - yes! extremely vague! u have some ekta kapoor genes in you! very active ones too.. u know how ti build suspense and KEEP IT buildin!

anyway, waitin for the next update!

CHEERS!

Trust me, it's not the big hot shot word that expresses the emotion. It's the genuineness of the writing. I hope I'm able to convey that.
Yep, yep. That's the basic synopsis. He returns after five years, a changed and rich man. While her life has turned for the worst.
Ugh, don't compare me to ekta kapoor. That's an insult for me. 😆 I dislike her work. 👎🏼
Thanks for the response! 😃