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saiqa

@saiqa4eva

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

wow...this is sooo interesting...cant wait for the story to unfold...loved the bridge scene...loved it

thnaks for the pm

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Vishwa

@vish94

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

omFg Lena! i ahve said this before and i say it again! u write in a very hi-fi manner! my choice of words in saying this even will tell u that i use basic level english (otherwise i wud hav used some big hotshot word to express hw u wrote! ;p). but, you write BEAUTIFULLY!

now i am gettin it a bit.. the story line i mean.. or so i think.

the stranger who was in tatters in the past os arnav and khushi is khushi only. arnav went from rags to riches and khushi somehow went from riches to rags? thats what i gathered!

and to my previous comment, u had asked me 'vague isnt it (the prologue)'.. to that, i say - yes! extremely vague! u have some ekta kapoor genes in you! very active ones too.. u know how ti build suspense and KEEP IT buildin!

anyway, waitin for the next update!

CHEERS!

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indy12

@indy12

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

i am a little confused...but perhaps that was the meaning for now at least 😊

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anyabell

@anyabell

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

hmm. I like the way the story is going!!

very well written. :)

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tvbuf

@tvbuf

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Hmm... Sounds interesting.

I want to read more.

Please update and PM me 😊

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YOUR FACE

@PersieV

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Wow this is getting interesting!!

Love it

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Tyro

@Tyro

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

n the boy in the blue umbrella found her...

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Terrific, loving this story :D

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

hi dear

wow that was so awesome, so interesting

loved it, esp the end

cant wait for the next part

take care n plz continue soon

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Damn! This is so intriguing! M sure i wont b able to cntrol my curiosity much..! There's smthn really wrong in their past..wat hppnd dat led to such feelings towards each othr.
"Rapunzel," so tenderly he hummed his nickname for her. --d feeling was so warming..one word dat means a lot to both of them..m seriously vry moved n curious..

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