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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

thank you for the pm... an os that really tugs at one's heartstrings! each loves the other but can't say so... the sad 'rabba ve' has been beautifully incorporated into the story!

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Risha

@LivingInPajamas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Wow! That was absolutely beautifully worded! I loved how you put in the rabba ve lyrics in between :) it almost made me feel like crying to finally see the last day! And it is so like these stubborn creatures to not say anything until the other does :P Lovely piece!

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kaira101

@kaira101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

too good

it is a must continue😉

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Amanram

@Amanram

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

very gripping! I hope it will be followed by an OS : the day after!!

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mali

@mali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

beautiful, loved how you portrayed their emotions.

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Prasanna_dhanu

@Prasanna_dhanu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

WOW! very nice OS, you can't leave it hanging, please continue...

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Avi64

@Avi64

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Paridhi7250
It was pretty good...

Yeah definitely do continue...😊
I'm waiting for the part you hinted at...😳

and i hope you get it as well as we imagined...😊

hopefully... but its not coming soon... 😛

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Avi64

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Maddy1270
thank you for the pm... an os that really tugs at one's heartstrings! each loves the other but can't say so... the sad 'rabba ve' has been beautifully incorporated into the story!

thank u 😊

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Avi64

@Avi64

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Risha_ipkknd
Wow! That was absolutely beautifully worded! I loved how you put in the rabba ve lyrics in between :) it almost made me feel like crying to finally see the last day! And it is so like these stubborn creatures to not say anything until the other does :P Lovely piece!

thanks Risha 😊 and i agree.. it is so like these stubborn creatures to not say anything until the other does 😛