FF: ASR Junior's SECRET DIARY! Part 18, Page 130 UPDATED! - Page 27

Originally posted by: nav_bat

Heya Fari,🤗

Okay, so I am preety late at editing this post, but anyways, I was having a bit too much getting to write down the next chapters of my FF, so really sorry for the delay dear.😳

So, coming to the chapter, and sparing you from the torture of my useless blabber, The update was an absolute knockout.👏I loved it to the core is a very cliche expression to give in your praise for something, so I wont use it instead, I would gladly say, yes surely you have the best writing talent, and an absolutely hillarious baby, whose got even more amazing thought processes.🤗

The Khushi-Payal Pregnancy jitter thing instantly cracked me up, and I knew If I wanted to laugh this is the right place I am in.🤣'Ladoo', seriously? Baby Ashar has a very bright future turning into a halwai.🤣OMG! that 'Is Halat Mein' dialouge brought bakc memories to me, even when I was 3 and my mom was expecting my brother, people and reletives in the house kept saying them, and I use to go seriosuly mad thinking about what exactly in the world were they reffering to by saying 'Iss Halat Mein', my thoughts, were identical to his exactly, Gosh! Is there any chance that he is a Kumbh Ke Mele Mein Bechara Huwa Bhai off mine, who has a different mother?🤔(Sorry, I know this is lame humour).🤣

OP and HP,I have no idea what work do they actually have other than asking Anjali of how much masala to add, and delvering Juice to mami, thats about the only thing I have seen em doing.🤔And, I dont think they do any productive work in the kitchen at all too.😳Haha, 22 and a half hours? Does she cry at night too?? 😉 Aakash and Arnav being their pet dogs, would be an hillarious, die for scene if shown in real.🤣

And I was thinking, Ok, Calm down Mum! I may not be the nicest guy to get along with but I won't eat my own sister!


This was the most epic dialouge ever.😃I literally use to feel the same way, when my mom use to unjustly blame me for every single tear that my anooying brother shed, now how is it my fault, when I didnt even pick him up once at all!

Haha, striking a deal with the hospital? Getting the baby daughter, was your Dads responsibility baby, not the hospitals.🤣

'Asmara' is such a beautiful name.❤️I loved it so much.☺️Arnav, has seriosuly got absolutely great choices,and the alliteration of A, in dad-brother-sister duo, is alsoso cute.❤️

'Anser', is a really nice name too, but its no way near 'Ashar' is.🤣Thats a lovable one.❤️

OMG!! Dad has totally lost it! He has started calling my Mum's fat tummy 'Asmara'!! He even talks to it sometimes while mum just grins like a fool! I don't know what's happening in this house anymore!!


For me this was the highlight of the update, how adorable can Arnav get, seriously?☺️I use to have my dad doing the same thing when he wanted another daughter, he kept calling it like that, and my mom would stupidly grin.😆</font>[/DIV][DIV]

Altogether, I jusssttt adored the update.❤️It was soo awesome.

Thankyou so much for giving us this SS, you are a wonder with it.🤗

Originally posted by: nav_bat

Never mind that, and I absolutely grateful to you, more than that preety haappy that you though of adding my name into the list, Thankyou so much.🤗I being a writer myself can understand how difficult it is to remeber things and names of every of your reader. And yes I read your Pm, ask me I have 300+ people to Pm and almost 30Pm's everyday, about a 400 Pm's to catch up too I am going to crazy now.🤪

Haha, I know that, but its always good to think that it wont, atleast I cna escape the depression of it ending that ways.😳

Well yes, I heard alot about it from my friends, and I have catched up to it, its an absolutet wonder seriosuly.❤️I wish you would have Las baby named Khirad instead of Sara.😆

Originally posted by: pakpearl

so here comes Anser after Asher...the beautiful names of my real brothers...thanx FARI 4 promoting my family😆...d update was superb...i m anxiously waiting 4 my sweetheart Asmara😛

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum

Originally posted by: Aliya_hzsn

AWWw...can it get any cuter!!!??
Love this Part!!
Im soo in love with your style of Writing!! Keep it up!!

Certain lines Cracked me up especially..

it would seem like Payal Mausi had spent the entire day crying! This way at least she only crys 22 and a half hours a day...🤣

and..

Akash looks up to arnav so much that he wants kids in the same order as well..that was EPIC!!🤣

IM soo In LOVE with ASHAR now!!!

You make him sound like a Double ASR!!

Originally posted by: chandana.s

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#660000" size="2">Hilarious...😆Wonderfull update...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#660000" size="2">Arnav dont wanted Khushi to cut onion because he cant see her tears...soo sweet 😳😳n nani told Op to do it ...n that way payal cries only 22 n half hours a day..lol🤣</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS" color="#660000" size="2">The way he thought about the situtation of Khushi n payal n 'is halat me' was fantastic</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS" color="#660000" size="2">Arnav n Akash were doing more work than HP n OP😛😆</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#660000" size="2">N he thought Asmara will be perfect because the way his mum dress her,she probably end up looking like a butterfly😆... Too smart ha...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#660000" size="2">N the last paragraph was superb... Bubblymight be relative of shyam!!... oops i'm mean shyamo monster🤣</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS" color="#660000" size="2">Oh god man!!I cant stop laughing😆</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#660000" size="2">U r simply Amazing.very well written👏...Loved it🤗</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#660000" size="2">Continue soon</font>

Originally posted by: sanjeewi15

"is halat me yeh... is halat me woh..." poor Ashar...

i can imagine his face when Arnav calls Asmara looking at Khushi's tummy... this is hillarious...

ur soo talented dear... glad that i started reading this SS... :)