SS aRhI: Once upon a Secret CH 4 updated pg 73- 28 NOV 2014

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Piya dhaliwal

@Piya.D

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Posted: 13 years ago

#131

It seems really Good i can not wait till the next Update!

The prologue and the chapter was Amazing!!

The characters were Really Good i was like actually imagining them In front of me!

They were all hiding more than what they revealed!

Secrets that could break hearts...

That lines really caught my attention ! I loved the phrases!!

I like the suspense in the story!

I can not wait for the Future Updates!

Btw: I love both Your works Individually and i love the fact you guys have

joined together to write this FF!

Thanks For the pm !

Update soon!😃

Edited by maanviluvzvirat - 13 years ago

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Targaryen

@Targaryen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#132

I love this concept!!! they can actually create another MU in the show and clear it the next day 😃 I am eager of what happens next!!!

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-zozo-

@-zozo-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#133

man, all the couples have problems in their relationship...

everyone has a secret...

Edited by -zozo- - 10 years ago

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#134

this is a very promising story!

it has a lot of depth!

do continue soon :)

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Frances

@Punkin22

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#135

Hello Lyraa and Harshita, Outstanding beginning girls. So many twist and turns and all a mystery as to when, how and who. Simply refreshing. I loved that the MU is taking care of so quickly, I look forward to your update. I know you said no pm but I very faithful to answer each update. If not I understand and I will find you...

Thank you dears, splendid job...

Edited by Punkin22 - 13 years ago

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mankhush

@mankhush

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#136

this is awesome .. u guys are superb

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littlemoi

@littlemoi

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#137

Loved chapter 1!!

Thank you so much for the pm!

Please continue soon!!

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#138

beautiful!! i loved how you showed everyone's feelings in one chapter.. very impressive! almost like watching a movie... like one man's fraud has shattered everyone's world...

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tina

@cpervaiz

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#139

jeez, so many secrects and suspicions, gosh my mind is like twirling in all directions

great start, got me hooked

can't wait to read more

thanx for the pm:)

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Glimmer

@Glimmer

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#140

That was a very promising first chapter !!!!!! Loved it !!!!
Poor Khushi !!!!!!
Happy that she has her brother to confide into !!!!!!
Who is Anjali meeting ??? Is it khushi's brother ??? Glad that she knows about Shyam !!!!!
And sooo happy that Arnav got to know the truth !!!!!!!!
PS: sorry for commenting so late !! Am going on vacation so comments might be a bit irregular !!! Will try commenting as often as I can !!
Can't wait to read more !!! Thnx for the pm !! Update soon !!!