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@AdorableTrouble

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#191

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Goin out, will edit later

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#192

Awesome update
Sharon mom n sharon convo was hilarious 😆
Swaron romance at store room it was really beautifull 😳
I really loved it sharon want to listen swayam's heartbeat n want to dance with him too
How they just lost in each other their talk was simple yet amazing.their moment was perfectly beautifull n it was just amazing 😳
Precap nil letter 😆 haha
Waiting for it

Edited by sadiyaswaron - 13 years ago

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Gunpreet

@gunnu1

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#193

wow! luvd it! SPEECHLESS! thnku for d pm! ufff cant stay away from this! pls update soon! enjoyed reading it!

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@--Rumeli--

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#194

you wrote dis part exceptionally d bestest!!d whole swaRon part having deir own tym togethr..was just beyond "awww"
u described d height thing very well..it was a soothing update..loved it!!update soon..u wrote d romance part sooo flawllessly deep!!

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#195

Well written Sravani...the storeroom part was maturely romantic...their emotions & feelings brought out effectively...classic dialogues esp Swayam 😊 ...update soon

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oindrila585

@oindrila585

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#196

I loved the romance in the store room...Love it...Keep writing...

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shaani2209

@shaani2209

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#197

This update was a soothing one...just loved evry bit of it...the store room part was written just the way it should have been in natural...really a beautiful update sravani...and "tumse milke aisa laga" song in my playlist just made it all the more lovely😳

thanks for the pm...update soon...

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swa-ron

@swa-ron

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#198

i just dont knw hw to put it in words
i mean im speechless
it was super awesome
n i loved it sooo much

btw tnx for the pm

n waiting for ur next part so update asap

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#199

Damn, that was really romantic...I loved how the whole time Sharon kept listening to his heart beat !!! I can't wait to see how the note confusion is going to come to an end in the next chapter...I'm sure it's going to be hilarious !!!

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#200

Wow this update was just out of the world. The store room part was one of the best romantic moment i ever read in any SwaRon FF so far. Superb update.