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Great work!
Finally clearance!
Nisha and sharman met!
When does Arhi get he oppurtunity?

That was a nice update. Finally Khushi in Delhi & OMG Arnav still can feel her presence. Now u know y I only Want ArHi & not NiAr bcoz they r made for each other. Akash advice was really a good one yeah he was right, sometimes what u c with ur eyes can't be the entire truth. I think u must make ArHI 2 meet & I strongly feel that Khushi has all rights 2 know the truth.

Oh!

The ending left me a little confuse, so someone kissed someone?

I dont know whom I feel sorry for most-
Kushi- Who loves Arnav so much that she is willing to not fight for her love if its means a lifetime of happiness for Arnav.
Arnav- Although I'm still a little pissed is willing to give up a life time of happiness and pine away for one woman he cant have
Sharman- Whose guilt and remorse will do no good to the promises and the love he broke
Nisha- A woman who dared to fall in love only to be taught why she shouldn't.

Akaash and Kushi's interaction was brilliant so was Nisha and Sharman's. When I read FF like yours I can only wish that the CVs could atleast capture 1/10th of the subtle intensity and strong characterisations you have in your story.

thanks for the PM.

"Arnav Singh Raizada could feel something...different...in the air and all of a sudden too - it was'sweeter, fresher, more hopeful...and it reminded him of a past he repressed everyday, more often than not with a peg of single malt whiskey - a peg or two or four."

I love these lines. Both of them are so physically aware of each other. I could imagine the wind blowing as Arnav looked around trying to figure our what caused the change in the air. :)

Oh, loving your Akash. He understands tha pain of both Arnav and Khushi, wants them to solve things between them yet he won't force anyone. I really do want them to explore the Akash-Khushi relationship in the show. Seeing a glimpse of it in this update made me really happy! :)

Undoubtedly, the Nisha-Sharman interaction was the highlight of the update. The underlying pain and anguish could be easily felt. Tugged at my heartstrings. Great writing! :)

Originally posted by: meera30

Res for comment :D

Sorry for the late comment, Rae but I fell asleep with my tab in my hands. I think I even dreamed of Armaan and Nisha (Yep she is still Jennifer Winget in my head!)

The chapter

Can pain be graded? Can one ever really say one pain is greater than the other?

Yet I constantly wonder who is suffering the most in this story.

Khushi who loves her Arnavji so much that she built herself a life where she would be no more than a memory to him

Arnav who has handed every possible aspect of his life to others and yet pines away for the only woman who has any real control over his heart

Nisha who is struggling with betrayal and broken promises of a forever that never happened

or Sharman who loves her to death but for some reason couldn't live up to her expectations. Was it really his fault? I don't know. Maybe it was, maybe it wasn't

It clutches at your heart this story. But if there is one thing I can say with confidence it is that you are doing an excellent job with it!

A brother, an estranged wife, a forced fiancee, a guilty spouse...characters that jump out of the words that you write so beautifully!

You are a gem, Rae! And this chapter was beyond brilliant.

Originally posted by: mistyrains

-MINE 😉-

The title, so beautiful:)

And then the song, pure bliss :D

Needless to say I love the insight to Aakash's thoughts on Khushi being bought there, and I admire that man for his...what do I say, the way he thinks, or perceives things. And the amount of levelheadedness, sheer understanding, intelligence when he wants Khushi and Arnav to talk, is wonderful.

And I could literally imagine the winds blowing, and that familiar sensation coursing through them, when Arnav felt her presence. But all that, if it was a show 😆

And the Nisha Sharman scene, beautiful Rae. Too good, steals the limelight from Khushi /Arnav effortlessly. The underlying longing, sadness, perfectly described. I could almost feel being right there inside your story while reading that part. A girl can wish, right ? 😆

Umeed pe duniya kaayam hai. :)

It was beautiful from the first word, from the first touch of Sharman's hand to the But, I love you, I literally feel like crying. That scene was so powerful, effortlessly written.

Thank You! :)

This part of the story is what I have been yearning to write for a very long time and I am glad you liked it.

Phase 3 is officially about to begin. :)

You shouldn't have left it there, and I bet you know that. But still, it makes the wait more thrilling. The end has me wondering now, great chapter Rae !:)

That was the place to end because that was the turning point and we all know that. :)

TOF helped, really? Wonder how though.

It did. Dunno how to explain.

Loved the chapter, 🤗

*Hugs*

Originally posted by: appy_12

Ooh la la! For once! Thank ya, Devi Maiya!

RES!

*EDIT* After reading thrice! :P

So Nisha's visit to Mumbai is an escape of sorts.. Sighh.. What is with this beautiful girl's plight that my heart always goes out to her? I guess, the character is just so.. mysterious, and beautiful..

And Khushi is at last in Delhi. And I still say the same thing, I don't know if I want them to meet.. Why, you ask? If they meet, there'll be accusations thrown, explanations given, tears triggered and rolled, heartbreak to both of them, and wounds reopened.. I don't know if I want this for them, Rae.. Yes, I am selfish, maybe! (:P) But that is how I feel.

That is not selfish at all. That may be the opposite of selfish because here you are thinking about the characters and not the fact that you just want to see ArHi in one frame. I like that a lot. :)

And Nisha-Sharman meet. Even they are like that, and see what happened. Exactly what I said above.. What did Sharman do? He left without protecting her -- from whom? from what?

And what's that last part? Who are they? i thought all secrets were revealed! Raee.. Don't do this, come on! Okay.. At least update soon, yeah? It's 2 am, and I have to sleep... Not happening! Hmph! :P

Thats Nisha and Sharman. Her name has been mentioned. :)

Oh, Edit again:

I realized I missed this important part..

She said he didn't fight.. Fight whom?? Fight what? And now she can't fight? Whom? What?? Tell!!

The next few updates has many answers. Many.

Maybe I'm drunk..

Arent you a little too young to drink? :p

Hand me over that bottle right now. ;)

And I need it after the disappointing response to this chapter. Sigh. :p