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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#421

*EDITED - The rest is on a restricted blog due to blatant plagiarism of my work.

Edited by AngelTeen - 12 years ago

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#422

Res :)

Am off to watch the show. Will edit after in case your updating now! :)

*edit*

You've made me maha depressed now. Poor Nisha. Was her father a Casanova kind of person? Why dont we see mentions of her mother? And damn! Her grandparents sent her off to Boarding and did not even bother to visit regularly and now they want to collect payment for having "brought her up". *sigh* And even though she left Sharman, she wanted him to follow her and bring her back. That hurts!

How confident her grandma seems that Arnav wont leave her. What does Nani know or why has Arnav given Nani the power to dictate his life! :( And whats with the inform before leaving thingy?

"Aisa nahi howat hai...ab." ? Naya rule? What exactly is Nani trying to prevent? And she knows her decision was wrong? I'm conphused!

Am glad Arnav was there to support her. making up for his actions of the previous night! He apologises!! Effect of Khushi on him?:) Arnav torturing himself is painful to read. Knowing his suffering for his actions but not rectifying them. Him searching for a hint of Khushi in everything but acknowledging that Nisha is different, that she is also a victim under the circumstances, even Sharman featuring in his thoughts and finally trying to live up to the promise he made her. I approve of this friendship. Loved how you summarised their relationship.

..a very strange, almost not there but still there, friendship - marred by silence, marred by lack of understanding but not marred by misunderstanding so prevalent in the other relations of their lives.

Khushi in Delhi!! Oh I hope she is able to handle it if she meets Arnav and Nisha together! :(

I love when you write just dialogues. They seem so powerful and the message gets across very smoothly! Superb update Rae! :)

The pace is perfect and we are getting answers! :) Cant wait for the next update! :)

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...Doctor...

@...Doctor...

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#423

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Rae! 🤗

Itni mehnat ke baad you finally updated. 😆

The chapter was lovely!

Perfectly written.

When nisha said Arnav in the beginning I was like "Oh no she'd regret this"

And yes I was so right. He yelled at her. Really Arnav? Go get a life. 😡 Poor Nisha!

At least something was going right in his life - he could still scare off people.

This was the best line. Apparently nothing is going right in his life except this.

Awww I feel so bad for Nisha. Everybody literally forced her to stay with the Raizadas ^& now nobody cares about her. Infact she can't even speak to anybody. And the one she knows is busy yelling at her.

OMG! The flashback was heart wrenching. How cruel of them to literally force her into this marriage. I hate Nisha's grandparents & I hate nani. Nisha is such a strong girl still she's so helpless. Dammit! 😡

She married Sharman, compromising on her views, and got burned.

She was marrying Arnav, compromising her independence - the call of which had made her leave Sharman in the first place, and she knew a crash awaited her.

This broke my heart yet again. Take care Nisha!

Nisha sacrificed her everything in both the relationships. What do they want from her?

Nani!!! I hate her. I don't want to break the forum rules so I'm not gonna comment on her. *breathes in breathes out*

Arnav Nisha convo was awesome. It was a bit humorous too.

Arnav was admiring her? 😲 *faints*

They are not falling in love..are they? Rae I'm gonna kill you if you do that. And yes I'm damn serious when I say that.

And he actually felt sorry. It was not as if he was blind to the fact at how she was treated in his house by the members of his family. For Nani, she was the scapegoat, for Di just another person but for Maamiji, Mamaji, Akash and Payal - she was the enemy.

How true. Poor Nisha has done nothing. Hell she doesn't even know them still she's the enemy for them. For the first time I support Arnav in this FF. He's at fault & he's the cause of everything. And the best part is that a even a tubelight like Payal got it. *shrugs*

Khushi is coming to Delhi? I don't know whether I should be happy or sad, since this FF & it's writer both are so unpredictable :P

I'm gonna wait for the next update & then decide.

Edited by ...Doctor... - 13 years ago

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insanelycrazy

@insanelycrazy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#424

res! :D

aaah the broken arnav! he just doesn't know who to feel bad for, himself who lost everything in his life or Nisha, who lost just as equally. At least something was going right in his life - he could still scare off people its like arnav's living in a shadow of who he use2 be, wishing to be that person just so he could get away with the pain :'( 😭

i loved wat u did with the diner table seat there. one a head and arnav like the rubber stamp, he's the head just for the name of it, even though nani makes her decisions, and arnav kind of succumbs because of the love he feels for his mom. gosh! its gonna destroy everybodies life!! :'( first i thought arnav is doing all this cus Nani is sick and she might die, but now i think she's sick and any big blow will kill her.

i don't get y mami hates Nisha? she hated khushi plus Nisha is just the kind she likes, gorgeous, rich, well known family AND her wardrobe! hmm.. there's more to this too!! aaahh!! or is theree?!! 😉

I have a Nisha theory!! okay so what i think is that she was dissapointed in him or something? all the things he promised to be with her and, he couldn't he either got caught up with his work and started ignoring her OR maybe something with the mother. Nisha and mom didn't get along, he trusted his mother, broke her trust and then SHE left him? 😕 Or they were fighting, he got drunk and accidently cheated, and she was all crushed, and she had trust issues and that's y she cut out armaan also?! yes yes i know i got it all wrong :'( :P i feel so sorry for nisha and arnav though! they have problems and they know the other person has it to, but they just have NO way to understand each other, because that place has been taken by other people in their lives'.. aaah!! its like all twisted. but i like their new found friendship. it will give them some solace.

AND KHUSHI'S COMING!! yayyiee.. i hope they meet, and arnav just hugs her and tells her what she thinks is all wrong and nothing like what she believes it to be! they don't have 2 get back abhi, but i don't want khushi to be all broken and lifeless, gosh i feel for her.

i know i've already told u this, but again, i love the different layers to each character, they've got sooo many sides to them! today when Nisha was all broken she still thought of calling sharman, and arnav being this head strong guy who always wants to be in control, lost control of his life and is leading his life on the whims of his grand mother, and is desperately wanting somebody to take him out of his hell hole but he has no idea who's gonna do it and how they're all stuck in this situation and they wanna get out, but either its their own stubbornness or their families or something which is stopping them and they're all helpless in the situation they created long back, but are stuck in it now.😒 the story is beautifully writen and thought and all those things! i seriously love this thing and a big hug to you for writing something sooo amazing!!🤗

p.s. ohh sorry i forgot to add the PMaccount! first i got lazy and i was like naww, i'll do it later, and den i compltely forgot! 😳 and thank you btw. :)

Edited by insanelycrazy - 13 years ago

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Ritu

@.khanak.

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#425

reswa😃

-edited-

The chapter was amazing.I loved the flashback.Poor Nisha.

I can't believe how everyone forced her to marry again.And her childhood...She never got the love from her parents which she deserved.And in Raizada she doesn't even get much attention but Nani...She should know that Nisha is a doctor and that she needs to attend conferences all the things which doctors have to do.Okay...I will not try to bash Nani...Need to relax.

But the line at the end of the first paragraph:

At least something was going right in his life - he could still scare off people.

It made me sad.Somehow It always maked me sad when I read about an depressive and broken Arnav.I just can't imagine him like this.

Khushi is coming to Dehli??? I thought that Arnav might go to Lucknow...Don't ask me why but your are really unpredictable.So I won't try to predict anymore and enjoy the surprises😆

She will see Arnav and Nisha together😲 But I really hope that Arnav and Nisha will become good friends.

I think that she will think ( what a sentence! ) that Arnav loves Nisha.

Is there any chance to read about Sharman's situation right now?

Edited by Ri_luvs_ArShi - 13 years ago

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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#426

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That was a spectacular update Rae !! Finally I found a new word , ok not new but is diferent from amazing atleast !!

Thanks a ton baby, for making my wish come true... The beginning of I guess the strangest friendship Im about to witness !! Nisha and Arnav, finally do undersatnd each other, not the inside out kind of understanding but enough to be friends !! And I guess as of now that is acceptable given the fact that they both were fighting throughout phase 1wa 😉 !!

Aww !! Nisha !! She seriously was forced into this because her granny wanted to redeem her son ?? I dont quiet get it !! Just to redeem her ailing son she pushes an already broken fragile Nisha into more ??!! I somehow dont think that's one of her wisest decisions, but I guess sometimes love for others does blind people enough that they seem to see nothing at all !!
And thats what happened with Nisha's granny !!
edited : OK she wants it done for her hubby which is even more selfish now !! and sorry for the mistake and thanks for pointing it out !!

And the part where Nisha defends Sharman !! I was like man , she loves him she loves him and she does love him madly, but being Nisha Oberoi she just wont accept it at all !! And then when she cries on, she could have called Sharman , she didnt !! Cause she thinks its her fault that she left him ?? I guess Nisha remembering that at this point, shows a little hope !!
Edited* : Ignore the previous part, I guess I got it wrong and thanks once again for poitning it out !!Nisha seems pretty strong for some time, but she isnt all that strong as she supposes ?? Crying out for Sharman does mean that she misses him inspite of her putting up the strong faade in front of others , doesnt it ??

And Arnav bitwa and Nisha know that both of them are being used just cause they were vulnerable !! But they do make a perfect friend jodi !! Together they are pretty strong haan !! No one cxommands over them anymore !!

And the ending, Khushi coming to Delhi !! Aww that poor girl pleading Payal !! She must be hell scared, scared that seeing them togethr might just break the little bit of sanity she's holding onto !! The life she's holding onto !! Bichari Khushi !! But I dont know why, but I have a feeling that probably this time Khushi might emerge stronger after Delhi !! And I hope it happens !!

Loved the update rae !!

PS: Sorry for bothering you with the RESs !!

Edited by -Shobhu21- - 13 years ago

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maryam

@Audrey.h.

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#427

awesome update 😊...hope arhi meet soon

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#428

Res

So many questions answered and yet so many more revealed. You evil tease, Rae!!! :P

Kidding woman.

This chapter was bloody brilliant.

I have said it before I will say it again. Nisha is one hell of a character you've created. Such a traumatized girl. So much like Arnav and yet so unlike him. Being played against her will while he has allowed people to play him willingly. Two people caught and now trying to make the most of it.

I have to say it now in the public forum that if I didn't like Khushi as much as I do, I would have said Arnav and Nisha have a lot of potential!! :P

Poor Nisha..the girl has faced so much angst in her life. Paying for her father's sins. No child should be asked to redeem her parent. It is unfair. Yet it happens all the time. How much longer?

And where does Sharman fit in the picture? What happened? Her insecurity destroyed a beautiful relationship or he couldn't understand her need for isolation? Or both.

Wonderful story telling, Rae

Cannot wait to read more! Especially now that Khushi is coming to Delhi!

Edited by meera30 - 13 years ago

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multifaceted

@multifaceted

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#429

Ahh so Khushi will be in Delhi...Amazing update...I am thoroughly confused about how things will shape up...but I am definitely waiting for the next update..thanks for the PM

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#430

RES

-YAYYA, you upadted, will be back in a jiffy and comment :D-😆

You are on a roll with amazing MJ songs, good good 😃

At least something was going right in his life - he could still scare off people...This line makes me oddly sad, don't know why though:/

And Nisha is as much a scapegoat as Arnav is , though Nisha's story, about the Boarding school, is touching.

"I left him. He DIDN'T leave me. Get it?!" This lines are heart-breaking though my favorite was the para that followed later he first truth, the first selfish truth of the night from the girl... brilliantly executed, perfect words :) Nisha's father, god, my heart breaks for her, I don't think anything more worse could happen with her, can it? And I'll say this again and again , you are a terrific writer and this chapter was exceptional, and so were the following lines-

She married Sharman, compromising on her views, and got burned.

She was marrying Arnav, compromising her independence - the call of which had made her leave Sharman in the first place, and she knew a crash awaited her.

Bloody amazing, *salutes*

Uff, Rae, I should have just quoted the whole chapter, every line is so perfect *sighs* I hope you don't mind me quoting out half the lines from the chapter 😆

Here goes-

But he was Arnav Singh Raizada, he didn't say these things and she wasn't Khushi Kumari Gupta who would pry to get them out.

And she was Nisha Francia Oberoi, she didn't understand his silence because he wasn't Sharman Singhania.

I like how you have built an easy or at least a comfortable understanding between them:)

And I confess, I am a little, just a teensy bit excited, that Khushi is coming to Delhi 😉

But, but, great, great, exceptional chapter :D

Edited by mistyrains - 13 years ago