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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful update! oh I so wish Arnav and Khushi to meet and see their reaction! i m falling in love with this Nisha chick!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks to dillmillgaye(member) who mentioned this Amazing FF in her must read list. she sure as hell was right!! This definately is a must read..
You've done a fabulous job! This FF is probably one the best I've ever read!

When I started reading it I had soo many questions.. by part 2 was I was like who the hell is Arnav getting married to?!!
They way you've described Nisha, her image burns in my retina.
Questions like why wouldnt Arnav try to bring her back? why did he just let khushi go? Why in the hell is he getting married?! it had been 5 years and yet it seems like it was yesterday..
All my questions are getting answers in your update. Everytime I came to next update I was praying to God, please let this not be the last update.. please let there be more! and I successfully read 14 parts in one go!

There are soo many lines that reached my heart and it skipped a beat! I wonder how someone can portray emotions so beautifully!! Every update is so descriptive that I had it all playing in my mind.

part 7 is my favorite till now.. I read and re- read. The conflict of emotions that Khushi is going through in that update is just fantastic!! The pain she got from falling in love with Arnav Singh Raizada- A man who had her soul in his hands and yet he managed to tear it apart not realizing, he was killing himself too.
Part 8 - when Akash yelled at Payal- tum nahi jaanti ke bhai ko- and he stopped, just like my heart!! Inside I was screaming why did you stop?! but then you soon cleared that up in the next few updates . that he was quite because of Nani.

I have been rattling about Arnav and khushi alot.
coming to Nisha and sharman-
Sharman seems like a good guy. He promised to stay with Nisha forever, what happened huh? Forever over so soon? ( not that I am judging either of the character)
I am liking Nisha too... when the scene with HP happened I saw the similarity between her and Khushi.. they are similar when it to comes to considering others emotions and yet somehow they are so different!!

Arnav trying to hold on to every memory of Khushi. not letting Nisha come anywhere near his Khushi's memories, well thats all he's got!

The whole Nisha and Sharman thing is very intriguing. We know what happened with Arnav and Khushi, or do we?! :S

Armaan- Nisha- According to me , losing a friend hurts much more than losing a loved one. You need to have someone to fall back on. And the whole thing with Nisha she desperately need a friend that will stand by her, hold her hand!
Though Nisha is at fault for cutting of all ties with 'Her person' , Armaan should forgive her now. She needs him badly. I agree she wasnt there when he needed her but cant they let go. They shouldnt let go of everything they had so easily. Come on, fight for it.
(I am emotional because I cant see two best friends falling apart no matter what the reason might be!)

I am in love with this FF!I am sorry for rattling like a maniac ;)
The words in my mind for your work are just jumbling up, so please excuse any typos :)
Could you please PM me with further updates. I'll buddy the account you've mentioned :)

*edit*
I just saw that you've updated Part 15. Thank you. Will be right back :)
Edited by Jameelah52 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh Nisha... Poor, poor thing..Bless her poor, heartbroken soul.. Beautifully written, Rae.. This chapter.. God..
I'm sorry Rae, I can't comment properly on this one.. I almost didn't comment at all.. Had to turn away for a few minutes and pull myself together. This chapter touched me in ways I can't begin to explain. Hit a little close to home.
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Posted: 13 years ago
i feel sorry for nisha. ufff.
yay! khushi is back. uff not more heartbreak
xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
This is wrong! Completely wrong. Somehow you've managed to show the face of society here. Its no different in the elite class white people in americas or every next person in subcontinent!

Nisha's condition is more clear now! I feel for her! And Arnav! I could almost feel his anguish and burning pain!

Brilliant update! I love the payal and khushi equation!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yay!
She's coming to Delhi!
Please make them meet!
Please! I can't take this sadness anymore! :'(

I am sorry in advance if I am not able to comment on the next few updates, as I'll be out of the country till the 10th of July!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow... sooo much has happened since I last came here.. I wish I had come earlier, but I am here now.. and here to stay :):)

Hi AT.. long time.. sincere regrets on the absence, but office year end pressures...baby visitor's at home.. baby 1st birthday celebrations all took me away.. it was awesome fun!!

Coming to your baby - YNTOO!!

I love Arnav and Nisha now.. I love how he tries to look for his khushi in her every action and word.. compares and contrasts and concludes that Khushi is one of her kind.. I miss Khushi almost as much as he misses her, but more about Khushi later.. ArNi (is that right??).. I love their non-existent conversations.. i love their fights.. gives me the faith that Khushi is the one for him.. not some Nisha.. i love how he stands up for her.. and I love how she stands up TO him.. muah!! The scene in the car was rather cute :)

Nisha and Armaan.. whats the deal there..I dont agree with Armaan at all.. best friends dont get soo upset over the disappearing act.. best friends dont let you disappear.. and if they do, they know you will come back.. because lets face it.. everyone needs that shoulder some day or the other.. but let me wait and see.. i am sure now that she has come back, he wont be angry with her for long.. lets see...

Nisha and Sharman.. do me a favor.. and I dont usually talk about what i want the story to do.. but i really am impatient now.. tell me more about what drives Sharman.. i dont like him one bit right now.. spineless.. wierd.. ditcher.. i dont like people who can be described by the above words.. give me some good words.. didnt he have friends.. didnt he have a family.. whats his story.. let me like him plsss..i'll wait for him to come... Because he may be all that I wrote, but Nisha still defends him in front of her grandma.. he must have done something right..

Nisha.. obv she doesnt want to get married.. but boy was she rude to grandma.. what happened.. what has grandma's son done??? why does he need redemption.. why doesnt grandma think he has done some wrong..

Arnav and Akaash.. great scene between them.. unsaid words.. unsaid consolation.. but pls tell me what has made Arnav hide the truth from Nani... pls tell me its more than she is my Mother's mother.. why cant ppl just say what went wrong.. clearly the damned "MU" has found its way here as well...Arnav, dont be a prick.. tell Nani Khushi is awesome :):) but i am sure that calls for a dramatic scene later.. i will wait :):)

My fav for the end.. Payal and Khushi.. have I told you i love this Payal... her hatred for the Raizada clan is inspiring.. sisterly loyalty huh.. awesome.. how can ppl not believe her as well.. how can they let their son (Akaash) leave his home.. how can they not see that such defiance has to be backed by the truth.. we need some answers here.. and Payal is bringing them to us.. Khushi on her way to Delhi.. yay!!!! finally we shall meet..

All in all.. I am glad to be a part of this journey till thread 2 and beyond.. Congratulations on that btw.. happyyy for you and you cute friends who got you here in the last few pages.. hilarious!! I will definitely be here till the end :):)

Hugs!!


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Posted: 13 years ago
Rae I am so in love with this story and I think it's my most favorite from your collection. You've revealed alot today and the story has definitely progressed a lot. Nisha is truly a broken girl and she did not know how to be one with her husband. I take that from her statement where she said she left him because she could not be independent with him but she is about to marry into a family where her wings will be literally clipped by nani. The way she defended Sharman tells me she desperately loves him just as Arnav loves Khushi. She left and he did not stop her, Khushi left and Arnav did not stop her. Sharman and Arnav believed that their love were better off without them, but instead both these women are trapped within themselves none of them are free. They're both in bondage of the heart and bounded by family loyalty. I really felt sad for Nisha with the way her grandparents blackmailed her. The fact that they locked her away in a prison of a boarding school and then had the audacity to call in a favor from her was just disgusting. A favor for a father who seem to have not been a dad at all but just a sperm donor. He as well had has a part to play in her cold demeanor. This girl has been unloved all her life until she meet Sharman. She's like some people; when you love them they become un-attracted to you.

Arnav is definitely no longer ASR as before saying sorry was a big thing for him. Atleast there is some progress and remorse on his part and I think that is a step in the right direction. Nani is truly pushing her luck and authority. I am glad Nisha and Arnav has started behaving civilized with each other. I don't think they have a choice in that really. That is a good start because now they will maybe start learning more about each other. Even if they will never love each other at least they can be friends. Rae I really think the surface has been scratched as the anger is slowly ebbing away and they can now start focusing on other things than being at each other's throat.

Why do I sense Khushi going to Delhi will lead to some home truths being exposed. I am longing for an ArHi confrontation...I know I am holding onto a thin thread here, but what the heck, a girl can wish...Can't she?😉 Khushi seem to be more emotionally damaged that Nisha. The girl is locked in a major state of depression. I really want here to get over her hurt and start being bubbly again...Arnav is living rent free in her head and heart, that she has no room for anything else.

Another brilliant update 🤗 Congrats on the New Thread

"I want to break free
I want to break free
I want to break free from your lies
You're so self satisfied I don't need you
I've got to break free
God knows, God knows I want to break free"


Edited by april2003 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update/...
wow khushi in delhi..
wonder wht will happen now...
continue soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
I couldn't help but laugh at the situation. Half-truths and lies iterated to oneself never made this twisted life easier. Although Nisha's father hasn't entered the story physically, he interesting.😆

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