ArShi FF: Vacation with an Assassin (Ch.1- Pg 7)

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sur91

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

The title and the first chapter sounds really interesting. Looking forward for more of it

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aashshhs

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Love it already...I have to admit I also have a thing for secret agents and alternative missions. Really looking forward to the next post...thanks for the pm. take care :) :) :)

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Nazibah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

So he's a CIA officer...and Khushi some how gets involved...that's gonna be dangerous!!!!

I'm kinda hooked already!!!!! Can't wait to read more!!!!!

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@guggu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Thank you people for the amazing feedback you've given me. I hope to live upto your expectations from the story. Will update ASAP. :)

Cheers!
Swatzz 😳

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Sonia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

so arnav's actual name here is Jason? we'll get arnav khushi or Jason khushi? Hnm! interesting concept and a very nice start, dramatic introduction of Jason and arnav! I like it!

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FarighInsan

@FarighInsan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

wow. I luv the going Holidaying in Goa concept, and the Jason Bourne CIA background. Im gonna get addicted to this, im so sure of it! Excited to read abt d stuff Khushi does in Goa, and how these two are gonna meet! Can u plx PM me the updates too, id love to know when they're up! Gonna buddy u! Thanks!

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@guggu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: Rabzooo
Wow...looks interesting...really looking forward to it...add me to ur pm list plz:)

Ok just read the first part as well...wow...he's a CIA officer...wow! This is so damn interesting!!!!
Can't wait to read the fireworks ahead;D

Thank u so much for commenting!!

I hope u stay super glued to it! 😆

Originally posted by: Rhysenn
This seemed interesting,continue!

Thanks!! 😳

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@guggu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: kitzdoll
nice dear...oh arnie seems like the bad guy but what the heck..loved itn thnx 4da pm dear...

Bad guy or not, we will see! 😉

Thanks for the feedback! 😃

Originally posted by: sarra0
nice start

Thankss! 😳

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@guggu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: bhaktiii
That's damn intersting!! Plz update soon

Thanks! 😃

Originally posted by: Peda
I like the name change cause it offers more intrigue and adventure.ASR is an agent...hmmm will wait and see. I'm already feeling bad for Armaan though cause he sounds so nice.
Thanks for the pm

I know! I was myself bored of that name, after thinking about it an entire day! 😆And mei Armaan ki bhi setting kar dungii! 😉

Thanks for the feedback! 😳