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rhearuhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#161

the end ...no nooo..please it was so good i can't tell you please one more chapter...

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Sarah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

Control Vs. Chaos Part 4

Mature Readers Only Please

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humairak09

@humairak09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#163

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wow! wow!! wow!!! trust me dear cudnt find any word to describe such HOT & SIZZLING Shot👏👏👏 OUTSTANDING...
Woah!! m still sweating after reading all the parts... i wish i wish i wish!!! we cud see such sizzling chemistry on them but...😉
now i m dying for the next parts...make it fast hun...😳

xoxo

Edited by humairak09 - 13 years ago

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YOUR FACE

@PersieV

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Posted: 13 years ago

#164

Awww That was so hot LOVED IT

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...Penknife...

@...Penknife...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#165

love it...!!!!!

awesome as always :)

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velangini

@velangini

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Posted: 13 years ago

#166

that was hawwt

shyam is planning to do something very bad

he already has a mistress

update soon

Edited by velangini - 13 years ago

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nareshSV

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Posted: 13 years ago

#167

That was hot...very well written...u r brilliant...

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

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Posted: 13 years ago

#168

it just became a few degrees hotter in here! loved the update, especially khushi's presence of mind in throwing the spanner at the goon and arnav immediate reaction to protect her... his fear of losing her was a living thing! the most poignant lines were: "I...I've always been yours Arnavji...You just didn't want me before..." "I wanted you Khushi...I wanted you more than I could admit..."

one can't keep that creep down! is he planning to send khushi a bomb? but don't understand why he would let his sidekick leave unscathed when the latter knows his secrets!