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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: drmaha

wow wow wow...


it was mind blowing update... i keep falling in love with again and again he is shoo cute ... the way he tease gunjan lolz... love dit...


how mch he cares nupur and bechari tai jaan ...ahahhaha...

yar fiza u r too good...
aur nupur ka mayank ko utanai ka way 🤣 ufff kia demagh lagaya hai...


now m eagerly waiting for the nxt part...

love ya🤗




thanks alot dear
glad u liked it...

u all are in love with him and i am loving it
thanks dear for liking this ff this much.

will cont soon


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Posted: 13 years ago


thanks alot dear

Originally posted by: vinan2050

awsm update yarrr jst lvd ths Mayank so caring fr Nupur and tai jaan ki jann ka pyasa :)




thanksu so much
ya he is..atimes i feel chesy..

lol..yeah acha tha tai jaan ki jaan k pyasa



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Posted: 13 years ago

thanks to u all...rply to u all...Congrats we completed 100pages



Chapter: 19 B

Past

Nupur: mil gaya waqt ghar anay k…

Mayank: nhi majbori ana parta hai bus kya baatain…

He smile n said.. as she took away his briefcase and jacket..

Nupur: khana khaya hai ya woh bhi kahin aur khana parta hai….

Mayank: he chukled folding his sleeves up and removing his shoes.. wch were as soon as placed on floor were taken by her to place at the desire place….

Nhi khaya hai .. nupur tum mjhy tu spoil ker hi rahi hoo..khud apna kam bhi bahra rahi hoo.. roz rekhti ho sari chesay phir niklati hoo..yahin rehny do nah..subha yahin se pehn lo ga….

She looked back at him …smiled…

Nupur: ur such a mess… koi baat nhi…

It seems to be life always have been part of his life… from the morning, till the night he is loving the way he has her to share every little min, threw tantrums, evry little of his bad n good times to share with her… the little wifey authorities at times she show, the feeling he has to go back home she will be waiting, to have a companion on late night dinners, and sum mischievous mornings… it was all adding bliss to his life…

just when he came to his room he is free from any things to take care of.. she will took them away and place them neat at place…the little things of his from placing his blazer to shoes to giving him water, arranging his things, heating up dinner for him..to making his bed perfectly. But not only the materialistic things yet also his emotional side to….from his anger to his sadness to disappointment she will take all from him and can so easily spread smile on his face….. she has sumhow taken the whole commend on his work and life..

It was sweet, a pleasant feeling to have sumone who take cares of not only u but the smallest detail about u, she knew his so weel that even knew at wch type of meeting wht he is gonna wear, so he nevr once has to thing about wht she must had pulled out for him..

It was great feeling, sumwhere he was feeling his life's puzzle being placed at the perfect placed to make it have a perfect picture….he was liking her to be the owner of all the rights..he was loving the fact she is making the picture perfect..

His slight smile and continues following gaze was amking her nervous…they was these days aura around them is changing it is making her nerves in very weird feelings… his eyes has strt potraying things differently and she cant deny the fact that she is liking it too…

she took the glass from him and was about to go away..when he hold her hand stoping her to move away from here…

He donot know why he did it, yet he want to stop her from going n wanna talk…anything..but he want her beside him for sumtime..it give him a feeling of home…

Mayank: tumhara din kasa tha.. he asked looking keenly at her and she looked back with a little frown..this so unlike him, he is hungry and at tht moment he wants food no matter wht… and here he is delaying it.. and sat beside him..making him smile a bit

Nupur: acha tha…

Still holding her hand he placed his head back and close his eyes..

Nupur: kam bahr gaya hai kya …tum roz itna late arahy ho aur subha bhi jaldi ja rahy hoo

Mayank: haan thora bhar gaya hai,.. ek tender mila hai… us k kam bhi hai phor new collection k..samrat abhi cheesa seekh raha hai tu kam usko pori tarha se shift nhi kiya…

Yeah log kahin bahar jany k soch rahy hain..

Nupur: han.. roz deiced kertay hain kaha jana hai roz dono ek chees per agree nhi kertay..aur phir larty hai..he chukled…

Mayank: pehcaly ek mahina se jarahy hai…

Nupur: han wohi tu.. almost do mahinny hony ko arahy hain shadi ko aur yeah abhi tak soch rahy hain…

Mayank: Samrat fasly lainy mein hamesha se kamzoor hai aur gunjan bhi kafi confused hai…

Nupur: hum decided kerain…

He opened his eyes and tunred his head to look at her..

Mayank: hm.. acha idea hai..wasy bhi hum ny un ko shadi per kuch nhi diya… tum socho…

Nupur: sab mein hi socho tum kya kero gay

Mayank: achay shoor ki tarah tumhari baat mano ga.. aur zara jaldi as 15 din mein yeah nhi gaya tu us k baad mein itna bussy hony wala hon k is k kam nhi dkeh pao ga…

Nupur: kaun se nai baat hai tum tu wasy hi kuch zayda busy hoo..

Mayank: hmm so meri bwi shikayat ker rahi hai… he looked intently at her…

Evreytime he addres her as his wife it makes her cheek boil..god knows why but she cant help it and he love tht ..

Nupur: han…. Weekend per sab ny movie dekhny k program banaya hai…tum tu phir busy hoga…

Mayank: Saturday..abhi tu 3 din hain…mmm…chalo dekhty hain… chaltein hain kahin… wasy bhi kafi din hogay hum kahin gay nhi.. haina..

Nupur: han..she smiled widely reflecting on his face too…

Mayank: mjhy bhook lagrahi hai…

Nupur: han tu mein yahin layoo kahna…he nodded in yes and again closed his eyes… yet nupur was stills sitting there…. Mayank mjhy kahna lana hai…

The fumble in her voice made him abit frown ye the didn't opened his eys…

Mayank: han tu lao nah…

Nupur: mera…hath..

He opened his eyes and looked at her hand abit worried and than try n hide his smile… it was still in his grip and he was actually enjoying holding it… he let her go and she speedo jet out…

Looking at the path were she as just few sec back, he smiled whole heartily he knew his heart has taken leaps towards her, and he has strted to realize wht all this warmth, and demands and desire are..yet he has to be slow…as maybe she needs time…

Nupur went down to warm dinner for him, but already she was feeling evry cell of her warm with his gaze, his tocuh, his protectiveness, his aura all around her…

She can still feel her heart thumbing if she remember the moriing were he pulled her so close to him and asked her to say sorry for her wasy to wake up, she can deny the fact that she was enjoying looking at him so closely….

Though it is strange she never thought she will feel any such thing for him, but than when her cheeks turn red and her soul warmth with his affection care and protectivness, u felt that between them it has cum so naturally so naturally tht it seems that these feelings were always meant to be for him ..only him..

These two n half months and his showering of affection has turn evryting so beautiful, his little ways of making her believe she belongs to him, care freely holding her hand at times… patting her cheek or touching her head lovingly before going anywhere out.. all were causing so many butterflies to be part of her evey min…and how can she forget the morning when she found his hand around her shoulder..that almost made her breath stop..

She can never mis read his eyes and these days wht she is reading in them, is telling that the future days are bring many more bliss moments, together to make life more than just life….

The night when she was sleeping and he turned to his side, the only think was shining in moon light was her sound content and smiling sleeping face…he move towards her a bit, and sofly slighiting his hand in her, he hold her and slept too..

…………….….

Present:

Lawyer: mayank sehab, ap k case clear hogaya hai, woh papers kafi thy yeah proof kerny k liyan k ap sahin hain

Mayank: shukriya ap k buhat shuriya k apny yeah sab itna jaldi kerdiya….ap mera pls ek kam kerdain ap is ki sari detail meray client ko bhi bhej dain pls..

Tu.. dekha ap ny ek kam aur saaf hogaya… cheesay sulhja rahi hai nupur.. dheray dheeray sari musklain hat rahin hai… bus tumhi sath nhi day rahi hoo..

There was a sharp intake of breath almost making her breathless…

Mayank: nupur… nupur…

He hit the buzz to call the doctor…she opened her eyes and the went wide , yet her breath wasn't stabling…

Doc: mayank pls go out …pls..bahr jao..

Mayank: magar…

DR. Nadir: kya hua…mayank bahr jao beta plss…

He went out and he was just pacing around and was juts praying to god for her survival…it cant happen right now no way ..this cant happen…it shouldn't how can lord be so curel…he cant do it ..

Few mins later dr nadir came out and found him siting on chair with his head in his palm…he placed his hand on her shoulder ..he raised his head to see the dr..

Dr. Nadir: he smiled.. tum usko dekh sakty hai jao…

He didn't get the smile yet rush to her room…

Mayank: nupur… nupur…tum thik ho nah….

She opened her eyes weakly..

Nupur: hmm…a faint smile appear on her face…

He felt his breath caught in his throat…he kept standing there until she loked and than closed her eyes again… he rush.. he sat beside her, and looked at her fanatically…did he really heard his whisper.. did she..he was looking at her keenly just wanting to hear it again… the more time she was taking the more sumthing was breaking inside him

Mayank: nupur…. He could only uter this with his choking voice…

Nupur: han….ma..ya..n..k…

His name came as broken word from her mouth yet it felt the whole of the world cums alive right there at his moment.. he just donot know who to react..what to say.. wht to do… he flet liking shouting in pleasure yet his voce betrayed him completely… he took her hand in his, and smiled … she kept opening her eyes to see a little blurred image of his, he was looking pale, yet wht mid his shuddered were the tear the slip from his eyes… he is dam strong person …tears are not part of him…in all those hard days even tears were not part of him but today he left his all inhibitions…

He diped his head on the side of her bed, placing his head in her plam..and let her tears flow down, it was breath of relief…it was feeling like life cuming back to him…it was all he needed all he wanted.. it was so complete…

Looking up he wiped his tears….

Mayank: tum thik ho na ab… bukul pershan nhi hona..sab thik hai yaha…

Nupur: hmm…

Mayank: zayada strees nhi kero kud ko rest kero…

Dr.Nadir: really jab woh rest ker rahi thi tum us ko jaga rahy thy ab ja rahi hai tu kahty ho rest kero…

He smiled despite of the feeling that was immense insdie him, and he didn't know how to channelize it…

Dr.nadir: mayank nupur bulkily thik hai..weakness bhi ek do weeks mein chali jay gi… han per nupur..beta ab koi stress nhi..itna zayda nhi.. apna kayal rekhna buhat zaroori hai….

Mayank: lay ker tu dekhy yeah koi stress….thanks uncle..

Dr.Nadir: aray mein ny kya kya… yeah mera kam hai… n sumhwere u made it possible… relax tum bhi… she is fine…nothing to worry..khud k bhi kayal rekho,…he nodded

Little he knew that life will not give a chance not to worry…

Man: madam apki beti ko hosh agaya hai….

Tai jaan: thik hai….she smile wickedly….. mayank ab tum dekho…

Man: madam meray pasay

Tai jaan: mil jay gay….she smiled fully knowing now is the time… finally

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
AwesomestTT update...
n Heavenly too...hayeee 😍
i loved it from the very starting...it was sooo damn Adorable.😍😍😍
now toh i love this Mayank totally officially!!! 😆 bt han WWU ke Mayank se thora sa kam 😳😆 ab kya karu 1st love rmmbr...😳
Awww...i loved Mayank n Nupur here...
They were Actually Meant to Be with Each Other Forever!!!😍😍😍
Wow!!!!!!! i sooo loved MN moments here...hayeee
when Mayank hold her hand i was having goosebumps lolzzz n even when he teased her as meri Biwi...Awww it was utterly Beautiful...hayeee
i love him sooo much here...😍
Srsly!! holding hands wala scene was sooo Adorable n Vute...i loved it.
n han loved everything in it..
so they are moving forward pretty perfectly...Mayank is jaan 😳
His gestures n everything shows his love n i love that...😍
looking forward for more such parts...but srsly! somewhere i was feeling bad that noe their present is like this...when it should be something Beautiful...Sigh!
n OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Nupur thik ho gayi usne baat ki...srsly API!!!!!!! mujhe yaqeek nhi ho raha ke itni jaldi woh baat bhi karne lagegi...
meri halat bilkul Mayank jaisi ho gayi thi pata hain...😲😳😍
Awww...i loved it sooo much...u know i was actually being able to to imagine that too sooo clearly...n my eyes got Teary...Sigh!
it was Beautiful...😍
bt what snatch my content smile n make me angry was that Disgusting Woman...arhhh
kitni ghatiya hain na woh...arhhh i wanna kill her...😡
beti thik huyi hain yeh ghatiya aurat lag gayi chaley sochne...arhhh
i hope Mayank iss bar bhi Nupur ko uss "GA" i.e Ghatiya Aurat se bacha le...
loved it sooo very much bass last 3lines ko chor kar...:P
n han m excited ke wht is in the papers i hope it will make help.
loved it.
love u lodsss API.🤗🤗🤗
i want an update jaldi lolzzz🤣 i know i know m lalchi 😎 so no need to mention..😳🤣

ps: n han rahi baat alarm clock gift karne toh uski kya zaroorat hain woh Khud bhi toh utha hi sakte hain...hain na...😳😆
Edited by -Anila- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsm update sooo sweet yar
Mayur emotions were potrat so amazingly by u awsm yarr MJHT is really l;ucky to ahve a writer like u
aurr ye tai jaan abb pitegi mere hatho se amazing update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Interesting update
Loved Mayur moments
will wait for next update
continue soon:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful mayur moment. now Tai jan will plot again a evil plan. plz atlast mayur ko mila do
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Posted: 13 years ago
That ws jhakkas update dii...
LOved it specially the alarm wala part...and hauuu when he pulled her against him that part ws so cute...loved that part...
And vo shirt wala part too...
Par yeh kya shilpa aunty is leaving with mayank's father...im scared now...pata nahi lag raha hai kuch bura hoga unke absence mein...hope nt...
Amazing part dii..
Cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful update lekin ye tai muje kush nahi rehne deti :@
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Posted: 13 years ago
Zroor api aur ap b dua krna mere rezlt k liye graduation k

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