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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: clustersofstar

i hope mayur ke beech divirce na hui ho

warna un ko milne ke hallala ho ga that i dint want
aur bina hallale ke mil ge tou jaiz nahin ho ga




sigh
mein kuch bhi nhi kah sakti
halala aur meray ff mein sochna bhi maat no way..
milny k maqsad sirf..wohi sab kuch tu nhi hota jo hum sochty hain

Originally posted by: arhi_maneet

NICE UPDATE! BEAUTIFUL!!



thanks alot dear



Originally posted by: drmaha

ohh god yeh tai jaan ki tu...

kia chez hai seriously i have a doubt on her is she her real mother?
wtever mayank did wow it awsome...
now the story is moving on a interesting note ..
i so loved it...




han yeah tai jaan nah

lol... she is unfortunetly...
glad u liked it
yup it is



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Auroni.92

I just loved this update..
Offcrse cuz Mayank did make tai jaan shut her mouth and also it had some cutest MN scenes...
I cant blv mayank himself designed the saree for her...nothing cud get more special than this...and nupur too realized that...plss dii make nupur wear that saree some day...she'll look so elegant in this...
And the way nupur's closeness ws effecting mayank took my heart away...he actually noticed that...hayee...aur kya kya hone wala hai iss rishte mein lol...
This ws beautiful past dii...
Cont...




thanks alot dear

gald u liked it...yes he did..kerna pary koi help jo nhi ker raha tha nah
okay.. ihave to add it sumwhere kyun k mein ny add ki nhi woh kahin... will try...
agay agay dekho aur kya kya hota hai


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

Superb update fiza... Mindblowing





thanks alot dear...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Thanks.. a lot for ur comment.. rplyd to u all ..and will updated 19 b 2morow..

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Chapter: 19


Past:

Samrat's wedding was the next happening event and both of them as planned it to be after ther wedding, was having a full swing great time.. teasing samrat was their favorite pass time always and wedding gave them so much to tease…

But what nobody notice was tai jaan's hating certain things, one of which was the authority mayank has suddenly strted to show on Nupur, not at allowing anyone to interfere specially her, and for him its was the best part of nupur being his wife.. he will gave all the powers she never got in her life…at times deliberately times un knowingly…

Mehndi was on full swing when the dholi was beating the drums, all of them were dancing with Samrat, nupur who was extremely found of the rhythm was enjoying standing a little away, knowing her mom hates her being doing sumthing not to classy…

Mayank: ap tamashiyoon( public) mein kyun hain bhi… ap k hi bhai ki shadi.. chalo..he hold her hand was dragging her to the crowd..

Nupur: maaynk nhi… nah..woh..

Mayank: woh kya..chalo… mjhy pata tumhain dance ata hai sharfaat se ajao… kya hua …

Nupur: mayank ami..

Mayank: he sigh n move closer to her..n hold her from her shoulders.. kuch nhi khay gi… mein hoon na …

He said in a typical SRK style and both chukled…

Salman: kya hua bhi..

Mayank: baba dekho nah is k bhai ki shadi hai aur yeah apni maa se daar rahi hai….

Salman: aray beta kyun fikar ker rahi hoo…apki ma apky shoohar(hubby) se darti hain…

Mayank: yeah kab hua… socho..itna bara azzaz ksisi ko hasil hai… tum chal rahi ho ya mein Samrat ko boloa..

Nupur: nhi… usko nhi..

Salman: kyun Samrat kya keray ga..

Mayank: woh utha ker lay jay ga…

Salman : tu janab yeah tu ap khud bhi kersakty hain us ki kya zaroorat hai..he giggled n left the two…

Mayank sumhwere was feeling pretty stupid at this, ya he can do it ..though he wont..yet nupur ko tu nhi pata k mein asa nhi kero ga..he looked with a smirk to nupur n raise his eyes brows in chalein…

Nupur: and she was like no way… nhi nah hum chal rahy hain nah..

Mayank: tu chalo….dragging her there..

Both if them reached the dance floor and Samrat was so so happy to see her here, she was precious to him, and having her at evry step of his happiness was a treat.. they were dancing and soon even nupur left the little hesitation and they were enjoying on the fullest…. Laughing teasing n full of life…..

It was end of the beat and Samrat move forward to hug her and she too huged him back..

Mayank: wah wah..behan ko laya mein aur mein hi bahar…

Samrat: tu tu bhi aja…before mayank could resist or think he actually pulled him so suddenly that he almost fall in hug…and he has to place his hand on her back….making it a pretty group hug, and welcoming there first side hug…

…………..

Wedding morning

Nupur: good miring bhabi… she said full on teasing way as she descent down the stairs.. ..making her blush..

Gunjan: good morning ….

Mayank to joined his wife, ya this word or rather feeling has strt to rooted in him, as this whole 10 days so many times he has heard this tht he himself has strted at times addressing her so… and it didn't felt wrong or bad yet actually it feels…hmm… nice…

Mayank: kya baat hai bhabi jaan itna kyun Sharma rahi hoo, hum ny kuch pocha kya…

Nupur chuckled and gunjan droped her jaw…

Mayank: nupur bht bori baat hai tum ny personal life k baray mein nhi pochty …wasy kya pocha..

Gunjan: pocho jasay mein tum ko kuch batao gi…

Mayank: asa kya hai jo tum nhi batao sakti..

Gunjan: Mayank ahmed mein ny tum se pcoha tha..

Mayank: pcoh lo ..poch lo..mein detail mein batao ga…

Nupur looked at him shocked and couldn't help to blush a bit but then she hit her head…wht actually he is goona tell

Mayank: magar pehly tum…

Mayankkk both the ladies couldn't help to hit him

Mayank: aray.. marr kyun rahy hoo mein ny kya kaha..

Nupur: mayank tum jao… nashta kero chalo…

Mayank: yeah cheating hai..

Gunjan: nupur tum us ko kasay bardsht kero gi…

Mayank: hasaty hastay.. donot u need to worry… Dhaka kyun day rahi hoo…

Nupur: jao… she actually oushed him in side and he laughed and went in….and he pronocuse

Mayank: aray samrattt… tumahri biwi kuch kah rahi hti….

Nupur: she laughed..gaya bhai…ab tu woh nhi choray ga…..

Samrat: mayank hat ja meray pass sa

Mayank: kyunnn idahr tu aa kaha ja raha hai daar k …

………………………..

Life has always made a person believe it holds more than one just can imagine. The two people who thought tht living with each other is not a big change didn't knew spacing time 24/7, sharing things, sharing life and taking care of each other's space being within each other space, are all different experience…

Mayank has always been a mess in his routines, though he has been independent yet he was never organized in his personal life, the way he is in his professional one, and nupur was a perfectionist not a single line on her bedsheet, erything on its place.. yet they were adjusting in each other's routine pretty well…almost pretty well..

Nupur: mayank yeah akhir baar hai jo mein tumhain uthny ko bol rahi hoo… tum uth rahy ho k nhi…

Mayank covered his face with the quilt.. he was awake, yet he loves to irritated her to core… it was there evry morning routine, either she has to hide the remote of AC, to switch it off, or she has to open all the curtains of the room and snatch his quilt or to but now he has got use to too all this and it isn't working… throwing water once she did but was a pretty bad idea,…though it made him stod up at once.. but than

Mayank: he was chuckling drying his hairs…. Is ko khaty hain dosray k liyan ghara khodo k tu khud his mein giro gay…

She glared back to him..she has to make the bedsheet, the thrown all the things dry… and so here work increased

Mayank: sigh… nupur chor do woh khud dry hojay ga… kyun thak rahi hoo

Nupur: nhi chor sakti khud dry hoga tu marks choray ga…

Mayank: han tu chorny thy..su k uper bedsheet islyan hoti hai…

Nupur: tum janty ho k mein nhi choro gi… she pouted sadly…

And he was feeling bad..

Mayank: sorry yaar.. kam bhar gaya nah… ek idea hai..is ko khud se dry hony do hum side turn kerday ga.. tum bhi khush kam bhi kam…

Nupur: per..woh

Mayank: nupurrr.. chalo..uth jao…he holded her from shoulder and pulled her out of the room…

But wht to do today…she looked around with smirk, taking his cell her cell, the three alarm clocks tht were responsible to wake him up before marriage she put them all pretty near him and were set on the same time…

All of them rung at the same time..and mayank was shocked out of his wits…it took few seconds for him to realize he is not in between sum life threatening situation..he is under his wifes new wasy of walking him up…

Mayank: Kya hua….he actually look around to check…

as soon as his eyes fall on nupur laughing figure, he stop for a moment.. to calculate wht he is feeling right now… it feels nice…hmm no it actually feel really good to welcum mornings like tht.

Mayank: nupur mein tumhain choro ga nhi… he run after her throwing a pillow and other on her…yeah kaun sa tareeka hai …mejhy lag achanak mein kis jang k maidan (battle field) mein hon…

She was laughing continuously and running in her room…

Nupur: tu mein kya kero… tum tameez se kahbi uth tay hoo…

Mayank: tum kab se kam banada deeemgh tu na hilay..bahr kaha jarahi hoo.. he grip her hand and pulled her to him, turning her hand at her back…. Sorry bolo abhi

Kay bolo abhi… she even cant feel she is dead or alive, she was so numb..he didn't realize how close he has pulled her..Though they weren't crashed on each other but still he was almost hugging her…and she dint have even the courage to estimate how close or not they are.. the look at his eyes..she has never seen his eyes so clearly…they were so expressive, naughty, mischievously so cute…

Shilpa: nupurr….

The voice of his mother made his grip a little loss and she took the advantage and rush out… and stood behind shilpa

Mayank: tumahra kayal hai k agar tum bach jao gi tu ur mistaken..

Shilpa: yeah kya hora haai…

Mayank: pochy apni ladli se… yeah kaun sa tareeka hai uthnay ka.. 10 alram kaan per rekh diya..ab tak deemgh mein ganti bach rahi hai such mein…he actually hold his head…

Shilpa and nupur burst at laughter at his face..

Shilpa: wah.. shabash beta …mery room ko bhi garhi tum hi rukh lo…tameez se uth jany mein ko masala hai

Nupur: meray sath behas ker k time waste maat kero already 8:30 hochukay hai…tumahri meeting hai shayd…

Mayank: kya…oh god.. mein late hua nah tu dekho…

Sticking her tongue out she went to see the breakfast… and mayank was about to turn to his room..when his ear was in firm grip

Shilpa: kyun tang keraty hoo han…

Mayank: ami daard hota hai..chorain..

Shilpa: pehly bhi tu uth hi jatay thay nah….biwi ko pershan kerny mein bht maza araha hai.. ..

He smiled mischievously and received a slap on his head..and went to strt his day…

…………………

Mayank: kya yeah mera hi wardrobe hai….i just cant believe it…is ko tu hath lagty hoay bhi mjhy dar lag raha hai…

Nupur: yeah cupboard mein kis se baatein ker rahy hoo…mjhy tu waha kis ki tasver nhi mili….

Mayank: yeah meray wardrobe ko kya kerdiya…

Nupur: acha lag raha hai nah… neat n clean

Mayank: han kuch zayda hi saaf nhi hai yeah..is mein se tu mjhy kapray niklty hoay bhi daar kagta hai… kuch nikalo ga tu sab mess hojay ga… aur sab hai kaha … I cant get anything yaar…

Nupur in her free time made his wardrobe all arranged and now he is scratching his head he cant believe it his…and she was standing on the side watching his weird cute expressions…

Mayank: meri jeans kaha hai.,,yeah rahi.he pulled it out making that side of cloths down… Oh God…yaar yeah mjh se nhi hoga..nupur sorry tumahri sari mehant waste hogi hai nah…sab gir jay ga… meray bus ki baat nhi hai itna organize wardrobe… 2 din mein barabar ker do ga…

She chuckled at his pout and expression..

Nupur: its okay… mein thik kerti hoon aur asy nikalo ga tu giray hi nah..asa lag raha hai bomb hai wardrobe mein…lol…

Mayank: bomb hi lag raha hai… pls meri shirt bhi nikal do is se pehly k pora wardrobe bahar ajay ga…I cant take it…

Nupur: lolz…. Thik hai ..mjhy nhi pata tha mayank ahmed apny wardrobe se daar jay ga…

Mayank: it isn't funny.. nupur stop laughing…

Nupur: matlab mayank as alga rha tha k mein ny kuch karab kerdiaya…. Tu sahi kerny mein asa ker rahy hoo,..God …lol….

Mayank: OMG… meri shirt…

Nupur: mayank aram se..she stop him to pull the shirt form mid and herself pulled it soflty out…

Mayank : OMg yeah shirt kaha s mili meri favorite hai… kab se talsh ker raha hoon milti nhi hai

Nupur: is umero yaar ki zambir ( mess) mein se tu koi kuch milta kasay tha I wonder…aur mayank is shirt ki jan chordo… 5 saal pehly di thi mein ny

Mayank: han tu.. I love this shirt… itna hot lagta hoon mein is mein…. Aur BTW ..abhi agar koi normal insane hota na tu khush hota… ek dramatic se music hota background mein… aur tum khush hroahi hoti k tumharay shoohr ny tumahri lai hoi shrt abhi tak dil se laga ker rakhi hai..

He took the shirt throwing away the other on her face…

Nupur: MAYANK….

Mayank: normally biwiyan khush hoti hai…

Nupur: shoor k ghizi hoi shirt pehny se.. yaa….

Mayank: aur us k baat k romantic song sequence hota…mera ghar meri janat..yeah mera ashia.

He said reaching the door of the washroom…huming the song dramatically and she was laughing..

Nupur: mayank tum pagal hogay ho…

Mayank: woh mein pehly se hoon…

……………….

Throwing himself on the couch of the lounge, he closed his eyes… returning home early is blessing…

Shilpa: yeah lo

He looked up to his mom, who offers him water..he took with a frown…

Mayank: nupur kaha hai….

Shilpa: acha atay k sath biwi ki shakal dekhni hai… kya baat hai…

Mayank: amiii…

Shilpa: bahar gai hai gunjan k sath..shoping per…

Mayank: phir shopping yeah gunjan kitni shopping kerti hai…

Shilpa: apk valid kal waps jarahy hain janab tu unki kuch chesay thi…nupur ny kaha layday gi…

Mayank: baba ki tabiayt thik hai…

Salamn: bulkily thik hai janab… thora zokam hi tu tha… change of environment ki wajaha se hai bus..aur lay ker huamri aur apki biwi ny kamray mein nazar band kerdiya…( locked me in room)

He chukled

Mayank: acha hai nah..arma keray…waha kaun kayal rekhy ga apk..

Salman: 1-2 months ki baad hai ..hum apni biiw ko sath lay jarahy hain..yaha apk pass ab nupur hai…

Mayank: yeah kya baat hoi..nupur k pata chala na tu asoo k aambar( flood) lag jay ga..

Salman: us se hum ny baat kerli hai… hum akasr us ko bola liya keray ga

Mayank: haha ha..last wala option in ur dreams… hum thoir dair rest ker k atay hain..

……..

Mayank: kaha gai thi … batana bhi zaroori nhi samjha…han..he said playing with her abit rudely….she was dam scared…just when she was coming up her mom said she didn't inform mayank and scold her and now..is mayank really anger…

Nupur: woh ..woh hum..gunjan k sath gay thy… baba…

Mayank: nupur…hey relax…. He came close to her and placed his hand on her shoulder…rubbing it softly to clam her down… mein sirf mazak ker raha tha baba…dar kyun rahi hoo…

Nupur: tum ghusa ho k mein bina batay chali gai…tum se ijazaat bhi nhi li

Mayank: nhi baba… its okay… ijazaat layni wali baat kaha se aagai… nupur tumhari apni marzi hai jab chhay jaha jao…bus han kisi ko bata ker jao jasay aj ami ko bataya tha… ya mjhy bata do…tkay bus pershani nah hoo…thts it… relax hum ghusa kyun hoongay…

Nupur: woh ami ny kaha

Sigh…her mother ..can he just do sumthing about her…can he

Mayank: I am sorry mjhy nhi pata tha tai jaan agi hai aur tum se asay baat ki hai… mein tu bus asay hi mazak ker raha tha…aur tum ny shoping ki kasay…

Nupur: card per..kyun

Mayank: per mein tu tumhain card nhi diya…. Tum ny proany waly se ki

Nupur: porana kiya..mera tu ek hi account hai.

Chukled..

Mayank: tha..yeah rekho…aur khsoih kero is se kero apni shopping ya job hi tumhain chaiy… mein yeah nhi kah raha hoon k tum pora nah card waps kerdo woh tumhary parent ny tumahin diya hai…so u can keep it…but mjhy acha lagy ga agar tum isay use kero… let me do all of that for u…hm…

Nupur: she nodded with a smile… not knowing how to react…it was such a sweet gesture of him..how cum he can think so much about her…every little detail..every samllest things

Mayank: so kya shopping ki…

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Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG!!!!!!!!!!! it was AwesomestTT!!!!!!!!!
i loved it sooo much API...
hayeee...pehle toh Tai jan ka gussa i loved it!!!!!
n Mayank is soo Adorable...the way he always take care of Nupur n want to give her all she ever wished for...its just utterly beautiful...Sigh!
loved it so much...
then toh Salman uncle ki baat...lolzzz
i loved that...han han wahi toh woh khud bhi toh utha le ja sakta hain..lolzzz
n awww...Group hug was sooo Adorable...der 1st hug chahe jaisa bhi ho...😉
OMG!!!!! yeh Mayank toh...lolzzz
bechari Gunjan...😆🤣🤣 n samrat ko chora hi nhi 🤣
n wah Nupur blushed lolzzz 😆
Awww...the waking up session was superb!!! asa lag raha tha meri subha uthne ki scene hain lolzzz
main bhi ase hi bhttt sare alarms lagati hoon uthne ke liye...😆🤣
as its alwaysss heavenly to have more 5mins of sleep...lolzzz
so khud ko irritate karke uthana parta hain mujhe...🤣
hayeee...i loved der lil closeness...😍😍😍
n Shilpa aunty is a Sweetheart...Ma ko sab pata hota hain.😉😳
n wardrobe wala toh...hayeee
waise i do agree wid Mayank han...😉
normally jab koi ase apki gift par itna pyar aur lagao dikhata toh sach mein khush hona chahiye...😉
n ohhh-hooo ghar a kar sab se pehle biwi ko dekhna hota hain kisiko...i agree wid aunty 😉
awww...Mayank is a jaan...loved him for everything...😍😍😍
his all gestures are more than Adorable...Sigh!
loved it sooo very much...
loved it lodsss
love u lodsss API..🤗🤗🤗
Edited by -Anila- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow beautiful part. loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow api best ;) cha gayi ap tu <3 luved it bht mza aya parhne me dil kr rha he dubra parho...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beutiful Part,I loved Mayank's character in this FF,Mayur moments were lighthearted and beautiful
do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was awesome
umaroo yaar ki kahaniyaan mein ne bachpan mein bohut pari thi
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely updt fiza
now loving past more than present..so cont mayur's past story like this only..cont soon
thanks for the pm

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