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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey yaar. .. . .tatz nt done. . . .plz plz plz . . .dnt end ff soo soon. . . .plz plz plz. . . . . .
Dnt do tat. . . . . .
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Posted: 13 years ago
oyi aisha don't be so angry re
relax now...
and plz plz don't end this ff...next time send pm for oli those who have commented and liked the update...but plz don't end this😭😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
yr dekh ya toh naani pagal ho gyi hain
ya tu MJHT wala scene krne wali hain
toh bta humein kis cheez ke liye ready rehna hoga... :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
Don't end the FF yar plzzz...

I can't give long comments cz i dont have time. :( As soon as i get time, i will give lamba lamba comments okay?

End mat karo plzz!
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Posted: 13 years ago

hey hey hey! pls aisa mat kro ?? pls ?

pls pls pls pls ????

Pweeshhh??


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Posted: 13 years ago
guyss demand still not complete oh welll no prob i will updte 2mrww
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry di for late comment

was busy

awsm update!
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Posted: 13 years ago
nooo😭😭😭

pls don't do this aisha😭
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey guys here is my update hope you all enjoy it...

Part 22...😉

Kriya went to her bedroom and she fell on her bed crying : hey universe ji yeh kya kyaa aap ne pehe aap ne mujhse rey ko cheen liya aur phir se appne usko mujhse cheen liya akhir kyun universe ji meine esa kya kya kyat ha ke uski saza aap mujhe phir se derahi ho kyun universe ji kyun over here she was crying so much that her tears would just flow like she had no control over them .😭

On the other side rey was happy he was with the gang

Rey : yes guys finally mein apni baatcutter ke saath hounga ammm so happy guys you don't believe it😆

Nilesh: guys the real rey is back ! finally but dude yeh tu kya baatcutter baatcutter bolta rehta hai uska naam hai yaar kriya us naam se bol na use

Rey : shut up nilesh woh meri hai and she likes it when i call her with that name tujhe itna kyun bura lagraha hai ?

Nilesh: ohh posseisve and all huh?

Vicky: hoga toh sahi woh ab kriya uski biwi jo bane gi , rey was blushing, dekh dekh kaise blush karaha hia

Rey : enough guys ! Sharon i have a work for you?

Sharon : bolna rey anything for you man? Waise isse pehle tu kuch bole im telling you from nw that am going to be your wedding planner an thats final no ifs no buts ok

Rey : wahh Sharon tum ne meri dil ki baat bol di i was just going to say that to you !

Sharon : really! and she hugged rey.

Kriya thought she will have to ring rey and tell him the truth she picked her phone up ready to tell him she rang his phone, rey never heard his phone ringing .

Vicky: rey tera phone bajraha hai!

Rey : swayam tera phone bajraha hai!

Gang: abbe tera phone bajraha hai!

Rey : mera! he took his moile out and saw it was kriya guys kriya hai kya karoon ?

Vicky: toh utha na aise kya dekh raha hai?

Rey : guys she dosent know that the guy is me who is going to see her tomorrow and im telling you she probably crying and i cant see her cry am i just end up saying the truth to her !

Tani : what kriya ko pata nahi hai but kyun ?

Sharon : rey wait just don't answer it shell prob ring you once not more then that

Rey : are you sure?

Sharon : haan yaar am a girl i know yaar!

Kriya was waiting for rey to pick it up but he never : kriya leave it jo hoga dekha jayega but rey o agar mein nahi batungi toh unhe bohot bura lage ga i know mein unhein tex karti hoon : her rey please ring me when you see my message !

Rey was waiting for kriya to ring again but she never did : waah Sharon your too good but just then rey got a text : he read it out loud please ring me when you get this message , dekha Sharon she wont ring but she will text kya karoon shall i ring ?

Gang : NAHII !

Kriya fell asleep crying for god knows how long but she couldn't do anything about it she just never wanted this night to finish but she knew that universe ji would never let this happen the night had to finish one day !

Kriya woke up early in the mourning cause her nani had made her wake up early and she was really hating it

Nani : jaldi come on kriya jaldi tayyar ho joa woh ek ghante mein ate hi honge

Kriya without saying anything got ready ayush came running in : wow kriya di you going to get married, phir aap mujhe chod kar chale jaugi

Kriya had tears in her eyes: mein tumhein chod kar kahi nahi jaungi ab tum bahar jao mujhe tayyar hona hai

Ayush ran outside nani came up to kriya : kriya tum meri baat mano you will love the guy woh tumhein bohot khush rakhega , kriya wiped her tears and gave her nani a weak smile.

Finally the boys side arrive nani welcomed them in , the guy came the dad came and one of the friend came .

Dad : please agar ladki ko bulaya jaye toh accha hoga

Nani smiled she was so happy kriya was getting married well near to getting married : ji abh lati hoon

Nani went upstairs to get kriya , kriya didn't want to go at all she had made a plan in her head that she will tell that guy that she likes someone else not him. She was all ready now to face the guy.

At first se went down looking down trying to cover her teary eyes she took ashirwaad from the dad

Dad: waqi aap ki beti bohot khoosbsurat hai beta tumhein kasie lagi ?

Rey : umm dad i have to talk to her first!

As soon as that voice reached kriya ears she couldn't believe she was hearing rey , she thought to herself nahi mein paagal hoon how can i hear rey voices , but just for her satisfaction she looked up and in front of her she saw him she didn't know what to say the only word that could come out of her mouth was : REY !😲

Tadaaa! Finished bas mein thak gayi still got 1 more to update don't feel like doing it but will try and do it. Pata nahi itna acha tha ya nahi but please do let me know and please give me long commnts and like for this

Precap : a bit of kriyaansh romance and wedding prep going to start!

Prob will give 1 or 2 updates more and finish it off! That will be the end of this ff

Pms on the way😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update


Plz don't end it


Thanks for the pm

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