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Navna Mahajan

@KriyanshOnly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

Yipeee... 😃
SwaRon together... 😃
and kal toh dance sequence!!!
sooo happyyy 😃 😃 😃 😃

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Shweta

@Shweta-kriyansh

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#92

a full electric filmy shocker deetha...the beginning was awesoem...

poor rey...kria apne pecks se sone hi nahi deti...hehehe...

the sam-kria convo...loved it...rey ko kria hot aur cute lagi...way to go!!!

finally the shield melts...his hatred turns into love...the office scene was cute but damn those gals...even i was shocked for a second that kria had signed the papers...

i was like ab kya hoga...maybe he wud again hate her...

but all thanks to u ki aisa kuch nai hua...quick and fast move rey... love u nahi...directly kiss...loved each and every bit of it...superb update...but itni jaldi khatm karne ki kya zarurat thi...i wanted more and even more...😉

Edited by Shweta-kriyansh - 13 years ago

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annie mathias

@anniemathiaskr

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#93

hey deetha as always ur update was hawtt
it was awesome
the way he caught her and kissed her and said jaldi tayyar hokar niche aajao waiting for u was awesome
and he realised his loved was terrific loved vicky a lot a fully supporter of kriya he supported her in all the way he was standing with her as a real brother
i just loved the way rey express his love to kriya
it was full of romance and hawtt

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Rimsha.khan

@Rimsha.khan

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#94

i just love ur ss👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

.its jusssttt awsummm...love it...i hve knw words😊😊😊😊😊...superb...happy ending...i wish k kabi tum hpna old ss b restart kro us ki ending b asi happy endind ho

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achuAR

@achuAR

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#95

The end??😲

Aise kaise??😭

Jo bhi dat was a super Duper update👏

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: achuAR
The end??😲
Aise kaise??😭
Jo bhi dat was a super Duper update👏

sorry yaar ye maine shaffy keliye bas ek raat mei socha so itna hi aaya...actually ek hi update denewali thi par thoda sa extend karna pada

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Puja

@puja_arsha

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#97

Awesome update...
Luvd it...
It ws full filmy...i lyk it...
Atlast rey ko realise ho hi gya...his lu fr kriya...
N ya black mai kriya hawt to lagti hai...
Luvd vicky's part in dis...
N rey's way f expressing his luv 2 kriya ws amazng...
N d luv making part ws intense..
Beautiful OS...
I also think u shud trn in2 a writr professionally...

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#98

amazing update,poor rey thik se sau bhi nahi paya
Finally then rey realizes his feelings
Vicky is really a awesome bro
Then kriyansh kiss..all were shocked to see kriyansh together
Pyaar ho hi gaya
All in one it was cute,hot n amazing update

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#99

deetha am left speechless... thanks for such a beautiful update

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ekiholo

@ekiholo

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#100

just loved it!!but this is the end!!😭not fare deetha!!just loved ur ff!!wish ki tum isse yaha pe khatam na karte!!par kya kare...but promise me aab koi aur naye aur khubsurat ss/ff lekar awongi!!l
truly its pleasure to read ur writings!!
love u dear!!🤗