FF : I Am...FREE (Part 12 cont. Thread 2)

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Veena

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Khushi n NK?!?! wat??? 😡

ohhh okk i agree tht Arnav dsrvs t=dis, bt d ArShi fan in me dsnt accept tht!! 😭

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Jammy-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

khushi free of arnav... and she is with NK??!!😲! I like where its going... its a great plot, very well written... looking forward to your updates... pls send me a PM. 😃

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Sarah

@Desi-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

FF : I Am...FREE Part 2

His house was cold.

There was no laughter.

No one spoke.

Everyone walked past each other silently.

Grief, and sorrow shrouded the very air...

His heart weighed more than his body, his eyes were burning from the pain of weeping...

"Chote...?"

Arnav couldn't bring himself to look at her...

"Chote...please..."
His eyes finally made contact with his Di...

His feet had taken him to the only person who would accept him, the only person who was left for him...

Falling beside her bed he brokedown..."I'm sorry Di...I'm so sorry..."

Anjali's face was pale from bloodloss, her mind in tatters over the missing life within her...but her hand slowly crept onto Arnav's head and tried to soothe..."Chote...This isn't your fault...You have tried to protect me, sheild me, and put me first in everything...You are not to blame...and...neither is Khushiji..."

Arnav groaned as though someone had stabbed him...

"Where is she?" Anjali said...

Arnav shook his head...he couldn't speak...if he said the words, he was sure he would die...

"Chote, I'm not okay right now...but I will be...I'm stronger than you perceive...but you, it's time for you to stop being proud, stop being angry, and let your heart feel...you've been hiding for so long..."

Arnav stood up fast and slammed his hands over his chest...

"Chote?! Nani!! HELP!"
Nani rushed in with Akash in time to stop Arnav from falling through the glass door...

Akash quickly shifted and laid him on the floor...

"Has he eaten at all? Has he taken his medication?" Anjali asked frantically...

"Anjali, you STAY in bed! You don't want to make him worse by having something happen to you!" Nani said firmly

Akash had already run to get Arnav's medication...

"No, he hasn't taken anything for 2 days now...no wonder..."

Akash crushed a tablet and mixed it with waters to make a paste and slowly helped Arnav to swallow...

Finally coming to, Arnav coughed and tried to breathe...

Instead of being thankful and appreciative, Arnav hatefully looked at Akash..."Why...did...you...save...me...!?"

"Chote?!" Anjali was now in tears...

Arnav quickly stumbled to his feet and ran out of the room...

'...

"Khushiji, please just sit down...take some deep breaths...I hate seeing you like this..." Nk said trying to keep calm himself...

Khushi sat down and complied...

NK watched her in awe as she took deep breaths...

His eyes wandered to the rise of her chest as she breathed in...

Then his eyes roamed to her soft plump lips as she puffed the air out slowly...

When she finally lifted her eyes to his, they became lost in a world that she had once been captive of with Arnav...

But now...NK's eyes held a power that didn't frighten her...that didn't threaten her...

A breeze drifted past and blew her hair lightly across her forehead...

As her hand lifted to swipe the strands away, it meshed with NK's gentle fingers...

With her hand atop of his, he cautiously stroked her dark hair out of her line of vision...

"Whoa..." he murmured seeing her long lashes blinking back her shyness...

"I...I have stopped crying..." she breathed...

All urges to lean forward and press his lips to hers hit him at full force...

But he quickly lowered his hand...

Because she was still married to Arnav, and there was no way he would disrespect her any further...

"I care for you Khushiji...but I won't besmirch your name any further...I am here for you as a friend...until the time comes where we may be more..."

Her eyes glistened with hope...

Her smile returned with honesty...

And as she lifted her hand to her chest, she felt a familiar beat, one that she never thought would play in her heart again...

Their eyes locked again as their friendship birthed trust...

Part 3 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3020981/ff-i-am-free-part-12-cont-thread-2?pn=24

Part 4 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3020981/ff-i-am-free-part-12-cont-thread-2?pn=38

Part 5 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3020981/ff-i-am-free-part-12-cont-thread-2?pn=47

Part 6 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3020981/ff-i-am-free-part-12-cont-thread-2?pn=54

I know it's short...longer next time! Sooo busy today!

Edited by Desi- - 13 years ago

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Aarti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

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*EDITED*
Yess!!.1st!! :)
i just caught up on part 1 and 2 and i love where ur taking this story! nk.is such a good friend and im glad he is there for khushi. she deserves a shoulder to cry on after all she suffered through. and Arnav wanted to.die? aww he really repents his mistakes! cant wait to.see where u take this FF! do.PM me please :)

Edited by --Aartzz-- - 13 years ago

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Aliya_hzsn

@Aliya_hzsn

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Finished both Parts In one Go!!!
Felt sorry for Arnav..but anwaz Khushi cant forgive Him too soon na!
Anwaz dont make khushi kinda too close to Nk..and Nk developing feelings for her...Thatll be eww!!

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ayushma

@aycma98

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

..umm NK and khuhsi...????? what the...

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Shivika23

@Shivika23

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

just finished reading both parts

i feel sorry for arnav

what is khushi doing with nk????

continue soon

can't wait to read more

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boreddamsel

@boreddamsel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Loved the story! Can't wait to read more!! thanks for the pm!

Can't believe Arnav fell for Shyam's lies AGAIN! Dude.. she risked her life to find you! You need to repent now.. and NK is the only one who can make you jealous and make you realize what you have lost!

I honestly hope this doesn't happen on the show though! I hope Arnav will trust Khushi! I can't handle any more MUs between them!

Edited by boreddamsel - 13 years ago

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Bibliobibulus

@Bibliobibulus

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Just caught up with this.. Interesting concept.. Loving it so far.. Can't wait to read more.. :)

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deviarshi

@deviarshi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#60

I loved this new FF . Yes Arnav have to repent 4 all his mistakes but y r u making NK 2 fall for Khushi & she is also feeling something 4 him. Just bcoz Arnav had made mistakes that doesn't mean Khushi has to 4get him & her love. I'll prefer if NK juz stay in his limits as her best fren.

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