Twist Of Fate Chapter8 Pg 118 27/07 NEW!

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afsha

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Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

Nice chaps

Plz add me to ur PM list

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

Wow, yes happy Birthday IPKKND!! I wish we have many more birthdays to come!

Now to your update, how do I say this, I cant find words to say that I am so overwhelmed right now...after reading this update...

Loving the light hearted moments between the mother and daughter...it made me so emotional to think that Khushi still lives in her memories, like she hit a pause button to that part of her life...even if the time went by, she is still there, I am just so sad for her.

Wow Arnav and Khushi meeting after years and years, cannot wait to read more on how each of them will feel.

Completely enthralled and excited to read this story, you are making me drown into this one with just two updates!!

You are magic, girl, and loving this magic!!

Thanks for the pm

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SpiI

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Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#113

I really love your writing!!! I just can't stand the thought of then being apart for sooo long!!!! :(
Happy birthday to our favourite tv serial!!! Xxx

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Habfa

@Habfa

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#114

Nice update...can't wait to read the next part

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Prakrithy

@Arya1991

Navigator

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Posted: 13 years ago

#115

"A chilling breeze flew washed over her face, as her eyes found his. An excruciating ache, seeped into her veins, as she crumpled the mauve of her cotton kurta. Her knees buckled, as she watched his hands tightly clutch the paper cup, as the coffee threatened to fall onto the floor.

Khushi's feet moved back of their own accord, and she turned back, completely. Her hand flew to her face, covering her lips, scared that he might hear the sobs that would escape at any given moment."

That particular line was just so...I don't know how to describe it... it just made me feel.

The entire chapter. The ongoing scenarios, the associated memories, the resulting emotions.

The way you've described each of those...is beautiful...and the way they flow...is...enthralling.

You definitely have a way with words.

Thank you, more for the update than for the PM.

~Arya~

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shalini_s

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Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#116

loved it.. i guessed the guest was Arnav.. waiting to read more..

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Shobhana

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Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#117

Awww !!

All those wonderful moments written so well !! And the title of the chapter !! I loved it Sona di !! Thanks for making today even more special !! The chapter was perfect !! the right mix of melancholic tone and the perfect amount of happiness in terms of those wonderful memories !!

Aww but well one thing is for sure, its not only Khushi who blushes when the Teri Meri song plays on the radio, cause i know I do blush !! Damn that was an amazing dance !! And finally they meet NK !!
But no one as in NK doesnt know the reason why Khushi shifted here ? All secrets this girl is !

And the guest NK brings along, is it Arnav by any chance or wait, is it Shyam ? It cant be Shyam I suppose !!

Loved the update🤗