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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiyakreya


kaisa dhamaka???

kya gadbad hone waali hai???

just wait and watch😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: damonelena



I'm pretty sure u'll write in an amazing way! 😃


i hope so sneh... that i keep upto ur expectations....
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shenz_kriyaansh

just wait and watch😃


tu mereko daraa rahi hai

chal me w8ing
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shenz atleast res karde meko jaana bhi hai main sirf isi liye ruking pls...
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hey guys I know... bahut zyada gussa aa raha sab ko mujhpar... but kya karu I love this gussa comments as well... I enjoyed it... anyways ab woh gussa aur confusion about the teaser itni jaldi toh jaayega nahi toh better abhi yeh update enjoy karo... neeche update ke ek blast hone wala hai🤣 toh till then enjoy this😃

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Chapter 9:
part (a):


Kria was eagerly waiting for Rey to arrive she was getting bored but suddenly an 'idea' struck her head. She picked up her cell and called someone.
'One sided conversation' (only Kria's side)
Hello...
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Are the arrangements done?
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Make it best or else you know the consequences you might face
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Better make it fast...
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Yeah!!! Thank you...
Call ended.
Someone wrapped his arms around Kria's waist from back and rested his chin on her shoulder. Kria placed her palms on his cheek.
K: uff hottie, when will you grow up?
(Yes it was Aarav.
P.S.: Aarav stays at Kria's place)
A: kabhi nahi, sexy. And why do I need to when you are there for me, hai na?
(He squeezed her palm and kissed it slightly)
K: of course main hu... waise what is up with you?
A: nothing wanted to spend some time with my bestie. Ab kya itna bhi haq nahi hai mujhe?
K: stop this emotional drama of yours and tell me what do you want?
A: haw!!! Tujhe lagta hai ki main emotional drama karta hu... huh!! What a friend I have!
K: ughh!! Please hottie cut the crap and get to the point...
A: fine I just wanted to say, that u better be at home tomorrow there's a surprise for you?
K: now what's that for? And what is it?
A: how many questions do you ask? And can't you just do this for me. Don't forget I have sorted out things with that Mr. Attitude, Reyaansh Singhania just for you.
K: hottie, he isn't like that... so better don't you judge him on your first meet.
A: but Sexy...
Cut off by Kria
K: please no more discussions on Rey's character.
Suddenly her cell beeped. She freed herself from Aarav's grip and checked her cell.
*message*
'jaan, I am waiting for you near the main door... come fast –love Rey'
She smiled and replied back:
'Will be there in some time'
She went back to Aarav and tried to make him (Aarav) leave but all her attempts were of no use. This guy wasn't that easy to convince for anything. Aur yahan toh baat uske sexy ki hai toh how he will let her go so easily after all he is meeting her after a long time!
On the other hand Rey was waiting since a long time for Kria but he didn't mind as he was reminded of the day when Kria waited for him for more than 3 hours in his office. If that girl could wait for him for so long than it's just a matter of some time and today he is sure he won't be disturbed by any stupid phone calls or any important work. It's their time. KriYaansh time.
Finally she succeeded to run away from her Hottie. She came out running and looking back trying to check whether she was noticed by someone.
She reached the main door and bashed into someone more like a wall, aah!! It's him!! Reyaansh. And the very next moment she tripped and was in his arms. The famous LLHH started with their BG 'ohh hoo hoo'
Rey came back to his senses and pulled her into himself and said in her ears, "jaan, baahon mein hi aana tha toh keh deti yeh karne ki kya zarurat nahi thi, chot lag jaati toh?" and smirked while her mouth fell open. She straightened herself and pushed him slightly to get some distance between them.
K: you feel I am that despo? (She gave a disgusted look) Don't you forget I haven't declared your punishment yet, toh I can any time make it tougher.
(Saying this she winked at him)
"I am ready to face anything for you." Rey said meaning each and every word.
"Fine!! Let's go before anyone finds us here. Specially that Aarav" she said looking here and there, she pulled him and made their way out of Ghai mansion.
"Kria, please!! Will you bother to tell me where we are heading and let me take my car, at least" Rey pleaded but she just ignored his talks and was just dragged him taking hold of his arms...
Rey was all the way pleading and Kria finally gave up and answered, "We are going to walk to the places I have decided to visit for our night out."
"But please bother to tell me where are we heading to?" he tried hard to get answers to his questions, as he could just see lonely dark roads and trees surrounded all around.
"Will you please be quite for some time and follow me? Don't worry I am not going to harm you, so relax" she said irritatingly and proceeded to show him the way.
Rey was really getting worried as to where were they heading and more importantly what is she up to? Pehle toh this sunsaan place and then unknown punishment coming up for him. He was sweating badly. Finally he found her stop at a place. He searched around for something that can make it easy for him to recognize where they actually were.
He found them on a lane where there was a stall at the end. A stall of pani puri. She excitedly pointed towards that stall and said with her eyes twinkling, "Rey, I want to have it."
Great now such stalls are open late night to invite trouble for people like him. This girl now wants to have this pani-puri. Huh!!! She really doesn't cares about her health but wants to rejoice her life like a small kid.
"Kria it's not good for your health so please don't have it." Rey tried to convince her.
"Please" she said with a lot of childishness on her face but that was enough to make him melt.
Making such appealing faces should be banned, or else I won't be able to control myself. And if anything such happens then I am not solely responsible for it, infact I am not at all responsible for it.
"Fine" Rey finally gave up and she tugged his arms and took him to the stall.


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scroll down for the next part 😉
Edited by shenz_kriyaansh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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dekh main aa gayi apne comment ke saath . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

update kaisa tha???

arey aur kaisa?

mast tha!

kk as told diff parts mein commenting!




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Part a

who is kriya talking to???/

u know jab aarav ne kriya ki waist ke around apne hands wrap kiya toh meko laga rey itni jaldi waapis aa gay

but den it was written aarav 😭

chal koi nahi!

surprise kaisa surprise dena hai aarav ne kriya ko???

aww kriya being possesive for rey huh??? 😉 . . . 😆

Luv it 😆

haaw aarav kriya ko chodo na uska jaaneman uska wait karing . . . . 🤣

lolz... KR hamesha hi takaar jaate hain! haha luv it!

LLHH aww 😳

Rey came back to his senses and pulled her into himself and said in her ears, "jaan, baahon mein hi aana tha toh keh deti yeh karne ki kya zarurat nahi thi, chot lag jaati toh?"

Koi ise sambhaalo pls 😆

"I am ready to face anything for you." Rey said meaning each and every word.

He is soo damn cute

but hey me not a deewani of him like shivi 😛

haha rey puchna chod do!

wo ni bataayegi! 😆

ab kriya ki jagah rey being possesive

huh! ntn can change b/w dem!

Making such appealing faces should be banned

Agree. agar nahi hua toh rey toh mar hi jaayega kriya ke looks se 😆


Okies part a ho gaya! ab b ki baari!

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Part b

well dis was longer den d part a

ahem ahem!

rey ko khade khade hi treat mil rahi hai huh?

apni baatcutter ko dekh ke! 😛

Those mavaalis! 😡

saara mood kharaab kar diya yaar!

Aww shenz why u made kriya stop rey!

he must kill dose mavaalis 😡

a**#**b

ahem ahem electric current went down her spine!

well no doubt! 😆

rey ka effect hai ye toh 😛

arey waah kya punishment thi! 😆

me likey likey! 😳

dis part is really very hot

koi ac on karo pls! 😆

thank god rey didnt crossed his limits!

naya thread jaldi bana!

finally done with d comment! 😆

arey main toh bhul hi gayi!

Yippie! first one to comment wo bhi part b ke upar lolz... 😆
Edited by abhiyakreya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
chapter 9:
part (b):


"Bhaiyaji, do plate pani-puri, teekhi wali." Kria ordered and was waiting for the stall owner to prepare her order quick, for which she was tapping her foot, while Rey was admiring her. There were a few roadside mawalis standing nearby Kria and Rey. They were constantly staring Kria.
The stall owner served them pani-puri and they enjoyed... aah!! Correction she was enjoying it but Rey was just starring at her and then pani-puri. Kria noticed this and then took one piece and placed it infront of his mouth but he didn't open his mouth. She imitated her mouth open guiding him to open his mouth and have the pani-puri. He had it and was enjoying at her gesture.
Suddenly Rey saw those mawalis drooling at Kria. Rey requested Kria to leave but she being she, she didn't move and said, "I want to have more."
"We'll have it some other day but not now. Please let's leave." Rey tried hard to make her understand that it was better that they leave but before she could react, those mawalis passed cheap comments on Kria which made Rey's blood boil in anger and he clutched his fingers into a fist. Now he didn't care whether a scene was created or not, he would just smash their face and tear their hairs apart.
He moved a few steps towards those mawalis but before he could fight with those people Kria tugged his arms and pleaded to leave with teary eyes, whereas Rey wasn't in a mood to leave those morons on their two feet, at least when they passed cheap comments on his girl.
Kria somehow managed to take him away from that place but he was still boiling in anger and to make him calm she said with teary eyes, "Sorry, this was all because of me. I shouldn't have brought you here at this time; I was unaware that such kinds of people roam here at this time." She had never witnessed such kind of a situation ever in her life but right now she had to make up Rey's mind.
This is all because of me. I wanted to make it special but the result is his spoilt mood. I have to make it up after all I just wanted to spend some quality time with him. And the places were of my choice, I was the one who decided it all. Her inner soul kept on blaming her for being so careless.
Rey cupped her face and explained, "It isn't your fault but you shouldn't have stopped me to teach those morons a lesson. Next time onwards, when a person is about to fight better don't get in the middle, you might get hurt."
"Okay!!! Cut this crap. I don't want to spoil the rest of the night. So let's go to the other place I have decided to." Kria's face beamed with glow and she directed him to walk the way ahead, whereas he loved to see that glow on her face.
He started walking and his hands gently brushed hers making electric current pass through their bodies. He felt her shudder just at his one touch. This time he purposely brushed his hands on hers and took hold of it. She gave a puzzled look to which he just brought her hand near to his face and kissed back of it. She blushed at his gesture. They walked hand-in-hand for the rest of their walk.
They finally reached their next and the last destination. It was a beautiful garden, which had a comfort mattress and pillows neatly arranged with dim lighting. Everything there was perfectly arranged. Well, this was something Kria had planned and got all these arrangements done. Kria whispered in Rey's ears, "so? Did you like it?"
"What are you upto? What are these mattress and pillows for? Don't tell me you are planning to spend the entire night here? And is this somewhere connected to the punishment?" he went on questioning her without letting her explain. She fought back the chuckle, right now she just wanted to laugh holding her stomach. This guy really thought that she would give him such an advantage but she thought of playing.
"Why? Didn't you like it?" Kria asked fighting hard not to laugh. This just made him go more puzzled.
"Kria?" that was all Rey could utter and looking at his condition she couldn't help but laugh, she laughed holding her stomach. This just made his confusion arise to the next level.
"Rey, its nothing to do with your punishment I just wanted to make some arrangements so that we don't have to sit on that wet grass." She said giggling. He felt the embarrassed which didn't get unnoticed by Kria.
She questioned him to lighten up the environment, "So ready for the punishment?" to which he just nodded a yes and unable to figure out what was coming up for him as a punishment.
"Remove this. I don't like it." she said pointing at his T-shirt, which just left him dumbstruck. Is this girl out of her senses? She would regret of giving me such a punishment. That was all he could think about but Kria had something else in her mind. Don't worry, Rey I won't lose my senses as it's a punishment for you and not for me.
Without wasting anymore time he stripped off his shirt leaving Kria's eyes pop out. No doubt girls go gaga on this guy; this guy is really 'smoking hawt'. But he better keeps his shirt on when other girls are around, they go latto on him even when he has his shirt on if seen him like this they'll surely go crazy.
Hold on Kria. Focus!!! It's him who has to face the punishment don't let it be a punishment for you.
Rey loved her expressions, her eyes roaming around on his bare body and drooling all over. She composed herself and she made her way towards him and slid down her finger on his bare chest that made him stiffen a bit. He was confused as to what was wrong with this girl. Is she really trying to woo him? She then said in a seducing manner, "you look smoking hawt when shirtless..."
He was unable to control himself anymore he pulled her by her waist leaving no gap between their bodies; she was hell shocked at his sudden move. He said in a husy voice, "jaan you shouldn't have done this."
He pressed his lips on hers and took her lower lips between his and started nibbling it; she stood eyes wide open but later on she too joined in and took his upper lips and did the same, while massaging his hairs. With his tongue he nudged open her mouth exploring it. Their tongues danced to an unheard music and they tasted each others lips. They initially kissed gently but later on it turned into a passionate kiss. They parted when they lacked oxygen but Rey didn't leave the contact between his lips and her skin. He kept on kissing her all over her cheeks, neck, and shoulder.
He took her in his arms and made her lay down on the mattress, he went upon her and again took her lips in his and kissed until he felt lack of oxygen and then started kissing her forehead, cheek nose, ear, slightly bit her earlobe due to which she moaned in pleasure that made him go wild and he slid the strap of her dress off her shoulder and started undoing her dress but suddenly reality struck him on time and he placed the strap back on its place. This made Kria come back to Earth but respected him for controlling his emotions and not crossing the line. He got up and was about to leave but Kria held his wrist and pulled him with great force that he again laid down next to her.
"Kria what is it?" Rey asked.
"Where are you going?" she said to which he answered with a straight face, "If I'll be here then I won't be able to keep my hands to myself."
She rested her head on his chest and exclaimed, "I know u won't do anything wrong toh be quite and stay here."
He was pleased at her statement, covered the blanket and kissed her forehead and wished her 'goodnight'.
The dim lights went off and the two rested in the arms of their love.

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here you guys go... this was really big enough... anyways the updates now on will be irregular as am hell busy... so please spare me the horror of u guys terrifying me... well do leave your comments, since its long enough toh I want bade-bade comments too and have a look at the surprise blast...😆

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Edited by shenz_kriyaansh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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cholly main bhool gyi thi vo kya hey main bhool jati hoo ki ...unres karna hey
nd ha tuje two part main comment chahiye bohat mehnat ka kaam hey ...
but update main tha kya...
main bhool gyi ...
let me think .. think think.
nahi a rha jaad to itna hi asha tha ok by



























































































































ha ha baby i m a devil u know na chal abhi ankhe mat dikha ....
asha update of
comment for first part ...
kriya kise baat kar rhi thi ha ...
kuj fishi hey i know pakka ...
arey j arnav kha se a gya ...
kabba main haddi ...
sexy nd hotti nd upar sey kriya ka love i mean rey bahar khra wait kar rha hey
lekin j arnev schor hi nahi rha chipku khi ka ...
hwww kitna time ho gya ...
finally kriya nikal hi ayi wha sey ...
kriya rey ko bta hi nahi rhi ki wo log kha ja rhey hey ...
haha punishment k chaker main phas gya rey ...
hey panni punipuri means glgappa i love this ...
ok j part khatam ...


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part two ka comment ...
haye j mawali kese comment pass kar rhey hey ...
haye raam tune kyu roka asha khasa fight scene milne wala tha ...
but koi na unki kismat ashi thi jo bach gye ...
nd after that jo romance kriyaansh ne kiya hey haye main to mar gyi ...
rey shirtless me faint ...
upar se shirtless hey to kriya to cleanbold ho hi jayegi ...
wahi hua jiska dar tha ...
haye kriyaansh ka kiss ...
now bas main or nahi likh sakti i feel shy ...
but wowww
megical kriyaansh ...
u roke it ...
kya baat kya baat kya baat ...
ok mera kaam ho gya happy me going now
by by ...
Edited by aromakriyaansh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wen will u update the next part ????
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sexy_cute_hot

wen will u update the next part ????

abhi toh kiya... n next part may be in next week... pakka nahi hai...

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