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Posted: 13 years ago
Today
i started the new ff i was talking abt yesterday
and my already existing ff ka part 10 too i almost finished
I forgot to save it aur
mere donkey bhai ne mujhe pareshan karneke liye laptop bandh kar diya
so sari mehenat ganga meh doob gayi
ab pure 17 pages kaise likho phirse :(😭😭😭

So i will be doing all night now
I m very tierd guys so plz understand
but pakka kal tak update ho jayega
Edited by ShonaSparkzz - 13 years ago
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Its ok we will 4 it😊
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it is k we will wait yaar
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Shona unwaah 😭

main itna wait kar rahi thi update ka 😭

its ok chill bas ye bata de ki kal toh mil jaayega na?

aur mil jaayega toh kab milega pls tell it
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shona update ready nahi hai kya?????? 🤔
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shona i unresed answer to de de
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Chapter 10: Innocent Sleep

Kriya was lost in his eyes and her thoughts resting her head on his shoulders''''''''''''..


KRIYAAA''

Hearing someone shout she opened her eyes just to see Sharon before her eyes.

Kr: Sharon aap''

Sh: Ha toh aur kise expect kar rahi thi

Just for your kind information

Yeh mera room bhi hai

Aura b kya tum plz mera bed chodh kar apne bed use karogi

Gautam decided that Kriya and Sharon should share a room. Sharon was against it but didn't want to create a public drama so accepted it. Gautam thought this was the best way to bring them closer to each other.

Kriya was surprised, she looked around she was in her room but well on Sharon's bed. She quickly got down.

Kr:(whispered) Dream

Kriya(pov)

Woh sab bas ek sapna tha

Kya sach meh aisa kuch nahi hua

As she was walking her ankle hurt but it was to little pain before the pain her heart was facing

Ha aur kya ho sakta hai

Sirf sapne etne sundar ho sakte hai

Matlab kuch bhi nahi hua

Rey nahi aaye

Woh dance

Woh kiss

Sab kuch sapna tha

Sharon then got into her bed, wished Goodnight and slept coz she was really tired. She didn't notice Kriya's condition.

Kriya lost in her thoughts was already in tears, she walked out lifelessly out of her room to the outer sitting area which was deserted.

It was dark only dim night lights of the ship.

She went towards the railing and rested her hand upon it looking at the dark calm sea.

Kriya (pov)

Kya agar mai sach meh iss

Sea meh gir jau toh

Mera sapna sach ho jayega

Kya rey sach much aajayenge'''''''''.

Kriya in the lost in her thoughts, did what her thoughts asked her to do. She held the railing, placed all her weight on it and almost jumped over it.

When someone caught her hand and pulled her back causing them to fall back on the floor of the yatch.

Kriya realized it was a guy as his shoulders were wider than hers. He was stronger than her.

She was on top of him.

Her eyes were red from crying, she wanted to cry harder when she felt him pull her closer towards himself.

She tried to push him with all force but he was stronger.

Her head on his chest, she could hear his heart beat.

His heart beat had calmed her down.

Voice: Kriya'''''

She didn't respond she was lost in her thoughts, she wanted to die buy she couldn't

Voice: Baatcutter'''''''''

She opened her eyes wide

Kriya (pov)

Yeh perfume'

It was the same perfume that was there on the jacket, his jacket.

She slowly pushed him a little to get up and look at his face

Kr(gasped): REY'..

Rey: (in a calm but stern voice) What the hell

Tumhe kya chahiye

Kya karne ki koshis kar rahi thi tum

Tairna toh aata nahi hai tumhe

Par pagalo ki tarah pani meh kudti reheti ho

Lagta hai aapke sath rehne ke liye life guard banna padhega mujhe

Bevakoof, beakal, baddimag ladhaki

Tumhe mujhe pareshan karne meh mazza aata hai na??

Actually rey had already figured out what was going on in Kriya's, so instead of getting mad and making her feel guilty he decided to make it look like a normal comment to a normal prank. But inside only he knew how scared he was for her when he saw her almost jump of the railing.

The thought of loosing her twice was enough to kill him.

Only he knew how he had managed to talk so normally.He knew that right now, he had to first calm her down.

Kriya was overjoyed to see him, he spoke like it was so normal, nothing serious had happened between them. Like it was only a small fight that they had and nothing more. The suffering didn't show in his voice at all.

She probably didn't hear a single word he said.

Her tears rolled down her cheeks and fell on his lips which he slowly licked with his tongue.

Rey: Salty''

U know baatcutter tumhe apne khane meh kam namak khana chahiye

Kr: Thik hai '''''still crying

With her big watery eyes she looked so gorgeous

Rey: thik kaise hai, tumhe pata hai ki namak kitni important cheez hoti hai diet meh

Kr: Rey aap pehele decide kar lo aap kya chahete ho

With a cute pount on her face she buried her face in his embrace and clung to him like a cute little kid

He too in respose tightened his grip around her but lightly so that she could be comfortable.

Kr: rey

Rey: Ha bolo kriya''.

Kr: Aaj jo bhi hua woh sach tha na

Rey: Kya hua'.

Kriya's got up and looked at him and saw that smirk on his face. Now, she was back to normal. She folded both her palm into fists and started hitting his chest lightly.

Rey( acting): Ouch''..

Kriya got all worried and hyper

Kr: bohut zoor se lagi ,

Bohut dukh raha hai

Aap thik ho na

Rey was so pleased seeing the concern in her eyes so much so that he tears rolled down his eyes,

Kriya noticed

Kr( more worried): Itna zyada dardh ho raha hai ki aap ro rahe ho

Rey realised he was crying then he pulled Kriya into a hug and burried his face in her hair so that she couldn't see him cry.

Kr: Rey, aapko bahut dardh ho raha hai Mai doctor ko bulati hu

Rey: Doctor ko bulaogi

beech samundar meh''..

Breaking the hug, looking at kriya's who was making face

At her own foolishness and self talking no actually talking to her universeji

Kr: Jhalli kahiki

Pagal beech samundar meh doctor kaha se layegi

Universeji kya mai sach meh pagal ho gayi hu

Jo muh meh aata hai woh bole jarahi hai

Rey:Dancer hai tu jadugar thodi hai(completing her sentence)

Kriya surprised to see how in the world could Rey know what she was about to say. She smiled thinking that is the reason she loves him, because he understands her like no one else can.

This smile rey couldn't resist, he felt an urge to tie her to himself. What he had gone through, how much he loved her he had to tell her, he had too because there was no guarantee for anything, no one knew what life had in store for them. He wanted her to know everything.

He pulled her tightly in a hug like he would never let her go '''''..

Kriya felt droplets fall on her shoulder which made her realize that he was crying again.

Rey: (in a shaking voice)

I missed you a lot

Everyday ,every hour, every minute , every second

In these 6 months, 24 days, 5 hours and 15 min

I missed u like hell

( just assuming guys)

Kriya was surprised he was counting, counting every moment he had spend without her in loneliness.

Kriya was touched to see how much could he love her, maybe not even her own parents loved her so much.

Kr: (also in tears) seconds ka kya hua

Rey: pata nahi count nahi kiya

Aur tumhare sawal ka jawab

Jo bhi hua woh sapna nahi tha

Sab sach tha

Woh dance, woh kiss

Sab sach tha

(Kriya was blushing like hell now, she looked as red as a tomato)

Saying so they half parted from the hug, he kissed on her eye lid and slowly both put their fore heads against each others and gazed into each-others eyes.

Flashback:

Rey: Swayam'''..

Sharon''''''..(shouting from the water trying to peddle hard in water with all his strength to keep himself and kriya who had comfortably dozed off on his shoulders on the surface)

Swaron heard him shout and ran towards the railing to see Rey and Kriya safe in his arms.

All of them looked down from the yatch and sighed in relief.

Swayam and few other guys and members of the yatch service pulled them up.

They were now on the yatch, Rey sitting on the floor and Kriya in her deep comfortable slumber being tired of the entire adventure.

Kriya's mom came to her side and looked at her with love and concern in her eyes.

Smriti had observed a very noticable difference in her daughter. Her smile was back, the smile which Smriti had craved to see on her daughters face was finally back. She looked up at Rey who was still looking at Kriya.

She tried to take kriya but kriya clung on to rey.

This time it was like she was determined no matter what happens she would never let him go again.


Rey then looked up to see his sister, who was in full mode of taking a viva. The siblings shared an eye talk


(viva: an exam conducted by spoken communication)

Alisha: Bro aap yaha kaise

Rey: Woh sab baad meh jao towel leke aao

Al: Par

Rey: Par war kuch nahi ''.kaha na baad meh bataugga

The conversation of eyes ended and she walked inside to get towels for them.

Rey slowly got up on his feet carefully picking up kriya in his arms in a princess carrying position.

Rey: Kriya ka room kaha hai( looking at swaron)

Swayam observed that Rey's hand was injured and bleeding

Sw: Rey mai''

Rey: No dude its ok, tu bata kriya ka room kaha hai

Swayam knew why Rey had denied, coz the happiness of holding his love in his hands was more than the pain of the injury. So swayam, backed off coz others had not yet seen his wound and if they would they for sure would have taken him to attend to his wound instead.

Swayam thought he should not take away this chance from Rey of spending time together with her so he showed him the direction to kriya's room.

Rey went to her room and slowly placed her on her bed (sharon's bed without knowing obviously)

He put her down and was about to leave when he realized that she was holding his shirt so tightly.

He bend down, sitting on his knees beside the bed trying to loosen her grip.

The minute he pulled hard, she flinged with fear showing on her face. He immediately held her had in his and with his other hand he gently patted on her head calming her down. He saw her face and got lost in her innocence like that of a new born baby and smiled at her.


Sharon came in and saw her best friend, who finally don't know after how many months had a genuine smile on his face. She hated the fact that she had to disturb the beautiful moment but then she didn't have a choice since she couldn't leave them wet like that, they would fall ill.


Just then Alisha walked in with the towels in her hand, seeing her brother smile a painful but happy smile looking at kriya

Alisha (pov)

Yeh bro Kriya ko aise kyu dekh rahe hai

Bahut ajeeb lag raha

Aaj se pehele toh bro

Kisi ladhaki ki taraf dekhte bhi nahi the

Sh: Rey, I think tumhe change kar lena chahiye

Then seeing Sharon and Alisha, he got up and left

Flashback over

Sh: So cute

Sw: ha woh toh hai, pata nahi mujhe aisa mouka kab milega

Sh: kabhi nahi

Sw: dil todh diya

Sh:(naughtily) Toh iss meh konsi badi baat hai, abhi jodh deti hu

Sharon went towards him, got on her toes, reaching to his face and gave a quick peck on his cheek

Sh: chalo enhe jagate hai

Sw(dreamily looking at Sharon): Haa'..

Sh: Kriya, Rey uthoo'.

Sw(came back to senses): Arre Sharon rukko

Unhe sone do

Sh: Par swayam

Swayam placed his finger on her lips and smiled

Sw: Sharon soone do unhe

Pata nahi kitne din baad finally dono chain ki neendh soo rahe hai

Agar koi aaya toh utha dengge

Waise bhi subah ke pach bajhe koi nahi aayega

Ab sab ko aapki tarah subah subah uthne ki adat nahi hoti na

Sh: For your kind information Rey mujhse bhi jaldi uthta hai

Sw: ok fine

Koi rule hai kya ki usse humesha tumse jaldi uthana padhega

Ek din bechare ko soone do

Aur tum rey ki uthane ki baat kar rahi ho

Hume toh ye bhi nahi pata ki woh etne din so bhi paya hoga ya nahi

So plz dono ko sone do''( in a stern voice)

Sharon knew swayam was right so she backed off after all she really didn't know how many sleepless nights both must have spend.

They both turned towards Kriyaansh who were sleeping on the couch in the outer sitting place

Kriya slept in complete peace with her head resting upon his chest, her hand on his shoulder and the other crushing between both their bodies.

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(imagine rey and kriya they have full dress k)

Both had a cute and inoscent smile on their faces.

With the rays of the rising sun falling on them and reflecting on their skin. The cold breeze'''''''''..

Here the two lovers lie comfortably in each others arms breathing each others scent fulfilling the emptiness within them.

In each others arms, wrapped in the warmth of their each others love, they slept their Innocent Sleep.

Okiii

Finally chapter khatam

Its a sweet and cute chapter hope u guys like it

( 60 likes and next update page 140)

Sorry for the late update

Love u guys thankx for supporting me

Edited by ShonaSparkzz - 13 years ago
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dat was a outstanding and a beautiful update loved it and yeshhh i am d 1st to comment yipieee
Edited by pkriyaansh - 13 years ago
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*phew* finally got d tym to unres before going to my uncles house tomorrow!

ok dear here u go!

Really shuru mein mujhe bhi laga tha ki kriya sirf sapna dekh rahi thi

Aww but it wasnt! Kriyaansh moments were soo nyc!

Aww rey is such a sweetheart that he even kept a record for how much tym he was away from kriya! 😳

I really luved it yaar!

Overall

The cutest and an amazing update!

Sorry isse bada comment nahi de sakti!

Till den jaldi se pm bhej (u know for what) 😉
Edited by abhiyakreya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏👏👏👏👏
kya update hai!
firstly! krisha relationship was sweet!
the way sharon spoke just to make kria feel better was cute!
then kria ka sochna that it was all a dream!
kuddos
And then rey ka kria ko "BAATCUTTER" bulana!
was so tender !
and then the way u showed his helplessness!
hats off gal!
And then the whole kriyaansh sequence!
hayye mai kya kahun!
i am flying in heavens after reading that!
then flashback!
bro sis talk was commendable!
awww the way swayam understood his pain was really sweet!
that smile on her lips must have been the most beautiful smile rey has ever saw!
the fear in her for loosing rey!
awww poor her!
Edited by aditi061 - 13 years ago

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