kriyansh ss-once upon a time in mumbai update pg15 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: shivanivyas

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update soon is all i could say!

thank you shivani...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wat kriyansh dada dadi?? Amazing concept please pm me and update soon !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice one Anki 😊 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awsm concept dear!

Continue soon and pm me too
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsummm,,,,,,,,luv it,,,,plz pm me😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhiyakreya

Awsm concept dear!


Continue soon and pm me too

thank you so much...
sorry dont know ur name...?

Originally posted by: shruthi87

Nice one Anki 😊 😊

thanx shruti...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: LOV_ARSHA_KREYA

Wat kriyansh dada dadi?? Amazing concept please pm me and update soon !!

thank you...
whats your name...?

Originally posted by: poojadworld

awsummm,,,,,,,,luv it,,,,plz pm me😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
#38

Hello guys…thanks for liking the first chapter…sorry for the late update…actually I am very lazy….😛

Here is the second chapter… before starting the chapter I want to tell you that I explain the story as I am telling the story not kriyaansh(like in writer's language not kriyaansh's language)…

CHAPTER-2

Story continues…

After 6 months

New session starts in Saint Louise College… kriya was walking in the corridor suddenly she bumps into someone…

Kriya- aap!!!

Rey- hi kriya….you remember me..?

Kriya- how can I forget you... apne us din itna acha dance kia tha… par aap yahan kaise…?

Rey- maine aur mere friends ne is college me admission lia hai…

Then he introduced her to his friends…

Rey-guys ye hai kriya an awesome dancer and kriya ye hai….then Vicky interrupt him

Vicky-mai apna intro khud de sakta hun…hi kriya my name is Vicky aur ye hai meri Kagu

Kriya (confused)-kagu..?!?!?

Neha (blushing) - my name is Neha… my deewana pyaar se calling neha kagu, and neha calling him babu…

Kriya (still confused) - babu, kagu and deewana…?!?!?

Rey- in logo ki baton par dhyan mat do ye Bollywood movies kuch jyada hi dekhte hai…

Kriya (laughs) - chalo mai tumhe apne friends se milati hun…

In canteen…

Sharon and Swayam were sitting in the table lost in each other suddenly Kriya coughs from behind

Kriya-*ahem* *ahem*

Sharon (blushing)- wo kriya hum log is year ki classes ke bare me discusss kar rahe the….

Kriya (smiling) - I know guys… guys ye hai Rey, Vicky, and Neha… inhone humare college me admission lia hai…. And guys ye hai Swayam and Sharon my best friends…

All says hi to each other

Neha to Vicky- lagta hai ye dono bhi deewani and deewana like us…

All chatted for some time… they discussed about their home city, family, friends etc etc… then they attend their classes and after college everybody goes to their home except Kriya… she was practicing in the rehearsal hall… it was 10 p.m. then she went to parking area…

Kriya- hey universe ji…. Tyre puncture hai… ab mai kya karun… sab ghar chale gae hai itna late bhi ho gaya hai and ye phone ki battery ko bhi abhi khatm hona tha *irritated*…

Ek kam karti hun abhi taxi mai chali jaati hun… ghar se kisi servant ko bhej ke car garage me bhijwa dungi…

Then she tries to looking for a taxi but no taxi was available… she starts walking further to find taxi… she heard some noise from behind, four boys were following her… she become scared and starts running but she reached a desolated /lonely place… the boys who were following her comes near her and gathered surrounding her… one of the boys has a knife in his hand…

Boy- jitney bhi paise hai nikal nahi to acha nahi hoga…

Kriya screamed loud- *BACHAO*

Boy (placing knife near her neck) – agar ab ki bar chillaya to yahi kat dunga…

Kriya started crying

Boy- ab chup chap se jitney paise hai nikal…

Suddenly someone kicked the boy's hand and knife dropped from his hand…

Kriya surprisingly looked at him… he was none other than "REY"

Then the boys started fighting with Rey… one boy attacks him from front and one boy held his neck by his elbow from behind… Rey kicked the boy who is in the front by his leg so hard that he bump in the wall and fainted… then Rey strikes the boy from behind by his elbow… then he punches and kicks to all parts of his body….

Now the rest two boys tried to attacks him… Rey starts running towards them and jumped high in the air and kicks both of them by his legs… they both lied down and unable to stand….

Then Rey goes towards Kriya…

Rey (worried) - tum thik to ho na…!!!

Kriya- I am all right… tumhe chot to nahi lagi…?

Rey- mai bilkul thik hu Kriya… but ye gunde kahan se aa gae…?

Kriya narrates the whole story…

Kriya- but tum yahan kaise ae…?

Rey- mai bike se ja raha tha achanak tumhare chillane ki awaj ai so mai aa gaya…

Kriya- thank you so much Rey… agar tum nahi ate….

Rey interrupt- kuch nahi hota Kriya… chalo mai tumhe ghar chod deta hun…

Then Rey drops Kriya home…

Kriya (in mind smiling) – he is so sweet….

Bas aj ke lie itna hi….

Precap-kriyaansh's dance in terrace

and when kriya returns home she is shocked

Now please leave comments…*puppy face*

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome pm me when you update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
res
unres
awesome anki
loved the updt
now plzz updt sooon
Edited by Kriyansh_jaanu - 13 years ago

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