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Posted: 13 years ago
Eagerly waiting for the next update anu...

jaldi update karo na
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Posted: 13 years ago
i was so much waiting for this update...

thanks for updating!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update.

Maan promising Geet as well as Sam
To take them out.
But Sam is witch.
N Geet is so so cute.

Maan taking Geet to Casino.
Ab Geet waiting n waiting for Maan.
Bechari Geet.

Continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago

I am so happy and thank you all for it. You all made me cross 300 + likes. Please keep doing soo. It really encourages me so so much.

Thanks to ALL

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Part 14
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"Geet, you see the board' Above 21 can only enter this zone' you have a look around and we will get back after few games" Geet made faces but Maan said her that this is why he did not want to bring her and then she had to agree.

Maan turned to look back at her to confirm if she was OK, Sameera did not like this. Geet looked worried, Maan came back

"Geet just few games and I will be back' why don't you go around shops, they are really nice and you will not know how time flies.. OK" he consoled her and she half heartedly nodded'

"I will be OK' But be back soon" he assured her and went to Sameera

"Maan she is not a kid that you have to be so worried' " All those care in Maan's eyes for Geet was getting into her nerves.

"No Sameera, she is a kid' bilkul bacchee hai and this place is all so new to her but she will be OK"

Sameera again did not like how he was treating her like kid' she felt some age complex too as she was same age as Maan's and Maan would never treat her like this. But this only made her more determined.

She again got some evil plan in her mind and she smiled inwardly.

Maan and Sameera started with the card game' It was getting interesting and they were involved in it while on the other side Geet tried to entertain herself in the lavish Beauty shop.

It was really nice and she was enjoying the new kinds of stuff' she thought of buying some but then stopped thinking

"Maan will soon come, I will buy with him" she got excited at the thought of doing shopping with him and started looking in more stuff.

After an hour while in the middle of a game Maan remembered Geet.

"Ohh Geet must be OK na"

"Off course Maan she must be. Please Maan I brought you here so that you can enjoy yourself and you are stuck in between of game"

Maan could not leave the game in between'

"Yeah bus after this game, I will check on her"

But after that game Sameera got him lost in some college stuff and got him started another game. Offcourse he was winning and thus the greed to play one more held him. This was his weakness and Sameera was taking full advantage of him. Not even liking him thinking about Geet.

While Geet after selcting things from the beauty shop went outside.

"Abhi tak nahi aaye Maan' kya karoon" but then she saw a dress shop. There were beautifull western dresses.

"Maan stays in London, unhe to aise kapre pasand honge na'but Geet you have never wore these "

"Tou kya hua' If Maan likes it then I can try na'." she felt shy "First you will feel shy but if Maan praises then every thing is worth"

She saw some dresses she liked "But I don't know much about these dresses' Maan se he pasand karwaoongee" and again an hour passed by and Geet came out of that shop but by now Maan was too involved in game and Sameera did not let him remember anything by diverting him with different talks and mainly of Game'

Maan actually had habit of playing almost whole night whenever he came here and thus he came only seldom.

So as hour passed by he went into is original playing mode and forgot if he was here with someone.

Now Geet started worrying "Did Maan leave, no he cannot without me, how can I think so' maybe he is looking for me."

While she was in thought one of an English man and lady saw her worried.

"Looking for someone young lady?? "

"Yeah, actually my husband went inside to play while I was looking at the shops" she said little worried.

The girl laughed a little "You look new' from India??" Geet nodded in yes.

"Your Husband from here" "No No he is Indian but stays here from long" "He went in with someone"

"Yeah with his friend' but they said they will soon be back"

"Hey' you are really naive, they are sure having fun inside.. they are not coming so soon lady"

He turned to his girlfriend "Wow see an Indian women, sending her husband with his girlfriend to have game" Geet felt bad but not getting good vibes from these people excused herself and to feel secure went inside some shop'. Ohh she how much was wishing she had a cell phone.

Though she was in shop, she was looking at things but her mind was all the time going into their words'. But then denied

"Aisa nahi hoo sakta' chi Geet, how can you even think of Maan like that' please babaji.. don't make me do sin with these kinds of though'"

But again after a while "Per Maan abhi tak kyun nahi aaye" she started gettig little scared too and with how much she could think, her women sixth sense, she felt she should not stay in one shop or again some crazy people may come.

So waiting and waiting she kept on going to different shop and then the casino was so big,she forgot her way' It was also so dimly lighted that she got confused..

"Abb main wapas kaise jaoo' I think Maan must be back now, its almost 4 hour, he must be looking for me'"

But Geet was there with him almost went out of Maan's mind and he was involved in Game, while Sameera very well remembered Geet but kept her mouth shut. She was enjoying.

Then Geet went around the casino and now completely lost her way..

"Geet tu bhi na' itnee dur aane ke kya jaroorat thi' Maan kaise dhundhe ge tujhe'"

Then somehow she found the way to original place but Maan was nowhere. It was almost five hours now' it was 2 am. Geet thought Maan must be looking for her and must be worried not finding her. She cursed herself for going here and there but then decided to be at the same place'

More half an hour passed and then the old lady in the shop came

"Child' you are waiting for someone" Geet told her that she is waiting for her husband and may be he is looking for her'

Old lady gave her the glass of water and took her to the casino inquiry.

There she got the announcement done for Geet

"Mr. Maan Singh Khurana, where ever you are, your wife Geet Khurana is waiting for you at the inquiry"

It was aloud announcement and this brought Maan in the real world..

He checked his watch " "Ohh God Sameera, six hours we left her all alone in this big place"

"Maan it's Ok'" but before she could say anything Maan left everything and ran out to the enquiry'

Sameera had no option but to run after him irritated.

Geet saw Maan and Maan saw her. Geet ran to him and hugged him tight. Maan hugged her tight too' the moment she hugged him she poured out all her fear in form of tears'

He caressed her hair' he was feeling so so guilty'"I am here Geet' calm down calm down " and took her out of enquiry still hugging her. Sameera saw this and burned inside but now Maan was all concerned about Geet and his guilt..

How could he be so irresponsible and then to increase his guilt Geet said

"I knew you must be looking for me'. I got lost in casino" Maan closed his eyes in more guilt' he have to take the blame'

"Geet sorry, actually you are here just went out of my mind" Geet suddenly loosened the hug and left him'

"You forgot I am here with you?? " Maan held her wrist to say further but she removed his hand from her wrist and jerked him away ' she was so shocked. The words of that couple rang into her head'

"Geet suno tou" but she turned to other side, pained the tears flowed from her eyes'

"Geet try to understand" Sameera said in strong voice but Maan stopped her with signal. He knew how wrong he was.

But Geet had no option but to follow Maan outside.

But Sameera was fast when they reached the car, she causally went to the seat beside driver as Maan would drive.

Maan was busy trying to make Geet talk as he could feel how shocked she was hearing he had forgotten her. He brough her to the passenger side but found Sameera sitting there

"Sameera, if you don't mind can you seat back please.. Geet is bit disturbed"

Sameera did not like this at all' here everything was going opposite' Maan was even more concerned about Geet' but she said with plastic smile..

"Sure, why not" But Geet opened the back door and settled there and closed the door hard before Maan could say anything. Maan had no option but to get to drivers seat.

Next:Manofying'. Its not that easy this time

Part 15
Edited by tellyme - 13 years ago
tamanna1391 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
sameera real bi... maan idiot forgot geet por geet ek slap to maan ko padna hi chahiye idiot



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Posted: 13 years ago
omg!hw can he just forget her..
sam s the real player..she noes his weakness...
i think maan vl never step into casino part...
geet's trust in him was so touching..
but he broke that trust..but i liked when he admit the guilt..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb..it will be interesting 2 see Maan manofying Geet.. Please update more frequent..
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update..
maan how could u forget geet and sameera... she is such a ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome
poor geet
hope that she doesnt forgive maan so easily
crap sameera
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow, awesome part dear
loved it so much...
this evil sameera...grrr... really wants to give so much gaaliyaan to her...
poor geet.. she was searching him here n there and thinking he much be finding her but
when truth came out... she shocked... maan was also so irresponsible... how can anyone be so engrossed in thier play...
now manofy time but it's not easy...

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