OS : The Remaining Distance (On PROMO)

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staryeyes

@staryeyes

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

"AWESOME" is a short word...I'll have to coin another word to describe it...do continue it and pls pm me when you update...Thanks

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jenshad

@jenshad

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Of Course Continuee 😳

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Samana Dahar

@samana

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Beautiful OS.
Pls continue.
Thanks for the PM.

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..Kritz..

@..Kritz..

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Loved it! Please do continue😊

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aisha_ranbir8

@aisha_ranbir8

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

hey beautiful part ...loved it...amazing ...pls continue soon... thanks for pm...take care...love aish...

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blurey

@blurey

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

wowwe so awsm
perfectly writtn
lvd it

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Simran

@Sim1234

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

that was so good!😳 i really wished that happen, but i hear that he's going to get re captured so now i have lost all hopes of anything intimate happening! 😒 but still please do another part, its superb!

thanks for the pm😉

Sim

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

very realistc: khushi's shyness and hesitation on being overwhelmed by arnav's yearning for her and her own desire for him was nicely brought out... his consideration for his wife just makes one respect him all the more: But when he saw her nervous attempt at escaping, he knew that his precious wife deserved all the romance, love, and passion he could give her... what a guy 😍! this is far more romantic than detailed descriptions of consummation... and this next part was as if he were asking for her permission to take the next step: He waited...hovering...and finally whispered..."Khushi..."

lovely to see their trust and love... the concluding lines were just so poignant : His heart pleaded with God, that if she would trust him like this with her body, then maybe she would one day entrust him with her heart' truly made my day! a wonderful piece of writing!

😕 a slight confusion: it was arnav who confessed his love and asked for forgiveness, wasn't it? or was it khushi?

Edited by Maddy1270 - 13 years ago