JAANeman JAANeDO!!(KRSS)lastpart+epilouge pg56 - Page 31

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Posted: 13 years ago
rey came 2 no tye truth n he is angry wid kria


n wat is kria gonna do...y is swayam telin tat he can't loose her?
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice teaser...rey ko pata chal gaya kriya hi moksha hai...plss update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
har jagah teaser de kar mujhe pagal karne ka iraada hai...

mujhe update chahiye
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Posted: 13 years ago
heck man i'm now reading it shit...i'm such a stupid how did i even missed out this FF of ur even by mistake...bollywood queen u know seriously...why are u limiting ur just soo great ability rather a talent... i mean u should just take the place of all other stupid writers now days who have there imagination limited to just saas bahu serials and if sum1 gets sumthin' new they surely turn it into 1 such saas bahu but rlly deetha u have a treasure of imaginations...girl u have it god gifted u are a bliss to us we have such an ausum writer on IF like you...guruji gimme some brains ov urs how do u do it???????? n about likes u obviously deserve even more and if ppl are not liking it here they surely don't know the meaning of a fabulous mesmering out of this world writing...i just read all the parts and i'm reading them yet again...love u soo much deetha keep giving such great works of urs in...and part 5 was i have no words i soo loved MOKSHA's and DHRUV's fight to out of limits...each and every word n even sentences were like soo damn professionally written...i don't know how to stop muself from praising ur work...ok i'll try stop (hope i don't get another point to write...) yup i'm successful now cum on jaldi update karo warna i'll come up with bombs here to explode...

P.S. - i won't explode ur work neither u cuz we need the update hahahaha but wud explode the page i'll comment (i'm crazy) accha now update soon n at no cost forget to pm me...warna...

And what teaser is this what id kriya gonna do and will rey save her this time do somethin' i'll tell u what update soon this teaser is killing...
Edited by sachiarsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing teaser
finall rey ko sach pata chal gaya
and wat is kriya upto??
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
I knew this was coming 😭
rey ko kriya ka sach to pata chalna hi tha . . . 🤢
& his reaction is justified... 🤔
swayam is a helping frnd . . . . Gud 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
uunnwwaahh
yeh kya promo tha di
updte soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
so finally im back...this chapter dedicated to my dear lappy...which i missed a lot...really aaj wapas lete waqt aise lag raha tha i got back my lost baby...hehe...bohut jyaada hogaya na.???? but kya karoon...mai apni cheezon se itna possesive hojati hun i...yahan tak ki jo scooty papa ne mujhe gift ki wo maine papa ko kam se kam 1 n half yr tak use karne nahi diya...so im really happy...my baby is back...literally i cried jab kharab hui thi...love u my baby...

kk...ab aur meri lappy ki baat ki toh tum log mujhe aise hi kha lenge...mai toh seedha update mei ghus jaun?????? sorry sorry...mai bhaaging and likhing...

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"kria!!!!!!!umm...moksha..."swayam fumbled...

"swayam plzz...tum sab ki kria hi rehne do na..."she said pleadingly...

he smiled...

"ye ...wo..."he handed her ring...

"nahi...tumhare paas rakho...jab mei paas nahi hoongi toh rey ki raksha tum kar sakte ho..."she said...

"mai????kaise???????"he asked confused...

"agar koi problem aayi toh agar tum uska solution poochoge toh wo dikhadega...and chaho toh ispe haath rakhke mera naam loge toh mujhe pata chal jayega..."she said...

he was seeing her with open mouth and looked at his finger...

bhagwan ji itni imp cheez meri ungli pe????? koi meri ungli kaat ke legaya tho????

he thought caressing the ring...kria burst out into laughter...he was confused...

"swayam...swayam tumhari ungli koi nahi kaatega...kisiko pata thodi hai ki ye anghhoti mei shakti hai..."she said...

swayam was shocked..."tumhe ...tumhe kaise????"

"offo...tum uspe haath rakhke jo bhi kahoge wo mujhe sunayi dega...isiliye dhyaan rakhna...sharon ke saath romance karte waqt samahlke...mujhe doosron ki romance sun na pasand nahi..."she said still laughing...he made a baby face/////////

then after sometime they realised all were lyk statues...

so swayam sat back as before and kriya from back made them normal...

all shook their body as it was still for so much tym...

all said..."kuch hua kya????"

sw: kya hua???? movie hi toh chal rahi hai????


soon all ignored and were seriously seeing the movie...it was a dreadful film...even rey was feared but swayam was too cool...

rey: dude dar nahi lag raha?????

sw: *mind* jo maine kuch der pehle usse jyaada toh kuch nahi ho sakta...waise bhi ye fiction hai...maine real dekha...toh ab reel se kya darna...

sw: wo ...pata nahi dar nahi ag raha hai...

sharon ran and sat beside him holdim him tight of fear and seeing with a single eye open and biting her lips...

as the end reached it became a boring film...

rey cursed for destroying the story at last...so he thought of enjoying sometime...he slowly slipped from there ...but swyam saw and smiled...

he touched the ring ang thought...

"kriya sab tumse darte hai...ab tujhe darane wala aaraha hai dekhle..."he thought and removed his hand...

kria was confused ...suddenly someone pulled her and kissd her wildly...

she was shocked...infact feared of the sudden attack/...she pushed him and was abt to call rey/...

kr: re...

she was shocked...

it was rey himself...he was looking at her as if he would just eat her up ri8 now...she shivered...

she thought of escaping...she just ran towards the door when he caught her dori...she just stopped immediately before it would loosen up she banged her back into him...but to her bad luck rey was too quick...

she caught her choli and was abt to move when he spoke...

"aise hi rahogi toh mai kuch nahi karne wala...agar mujhse alag hui toh baad mei mat poochna maine aise kyun kiya..."he said very seducingly...

she was not left with any option...even if she goes away he would not be away from her ...if she stays there also for sure he wont keep his hands to himself...but it would be worst if she goes away so she stayed there itself breathing hard...

rey passed his left hand around her waist ...encircled it and pulled her more into him...

she gasped ...

he just passed his hand on the edge of her blouse touching her uncovered sensitinve flesh...

she was not able to take it...so she moved away but he just pulled her and pushed her on the bed...

he had already locked the door so he pounced on her trapping her under him...

"maine kaha na ...door mat jaana mujhse..."he said on her face...

she closed her eyes tight and was continuously biting her lower lip...

he looked at her sometime...

he was totally lost in her...he lost all his senses...all he knows is ...the beauty in front of him...better to say...his love...he just wanted to love her as much as he can...and the best way was the physical interaction...

he licked her upper lip...she freed her lower lip which was now shivering...

"u know...its too sensitive tumhe inhe aise treat nahi karna chahiye tha..."he said...she opened her eyes and looked at him confused...he just took her lips into his and kissed her with all the love he had...it seeed as if he was taking care of her lips...then it clicked her what he meant...

she blushed as soon as she realised...he was examining her each expression...as soon as she blushed he groaned and kissed her wildly...

she wondered whether it was he that who was kissing her two seconds back...but her thoughts didnt last for long as the room became dark...yes he already switched of the lights through the main switch of the room//...

she feared what was he upto...she sensed him removing his tee and his bare body crushed her...soon his hands went to her choli and in a blink of eyes she was out of it...she breathed hardly ...she for a second thought they were dng wrong...but the way he was kissing her and carressing her body she was not able to control loosing her senses...

she too joined him nad kissed him back fiercely...soon they were kissing each other so badly that the third person if sees thinking they are gonna kill each other just by kissing...


rey pulled back finally totally lack of oxygen but he never went away from contact...he just kissed her neck and bit her collar bone leaving his teeth maks on them...kriya moaned in pain...

he looked at her...he was sweating badly...and she...not to mention...she looked as if she was under the shower...he thought/...

shower ??????/ not a bad idea...

he quickly stood up gathering her in his arms...she just placed her hands on his chest still breathing hard with her eyes closed...she never dared to open...she was feared to see what he was doing with her...

but suddenly she snapped her eyes open breathing very high ...

there she was under the shower...in his arms...in the dim light...with her choli off...she thanked him for atleast not making her total nude...but she was angry...she glared at him...but he was just looking at her intensely...she lowered her eyes just to see another dreadful one...his bare chest that too wet?????? she felt her insides heating at the maximum level ...she can feel the pain of the heat...but she was more lost in checking him out...

he slowly made her stand...she was still checking him out...he smiled looking how she was gaping at him...he just turned her bumping her back into him with his palm on her ribs...she was breathing very hard...she felt she would die anytime...there he was just having the best tym of his life...he was just sucking away the drops of water which fell on her neck and nape...

he slowly started to pull down the strip on her left shoulder...she looked at him nervously through her ri8 eye corner...

"trust me"he replied in his the most seductive tone...
his one look is enough for her...after hearing his voice she just closed her eyes and placed her head on his chest and just leaving herself for him ...he walked back with her pulling her strap off her hands and by the tym she was ut of her cloth they were in the bath tub totally ccovered with foam...he turned her towards him who was just there closing her eyes and breathing hard...he could literally see her red face...he can feel the heat from her body///////...

as soon as her curves touched his bare chest his eyes closed automatically...their breaths went with sink making them crush once and lightly part once...but he doesnt want this...he pulled her more closer pulling her into a kiss...his hand moving on her back as if massaging...she hugged him tight...crushing her more into him ...he slowly caressed her side slightly touching her curves...she slowly cried and and soon was letting moans not able to take the pain more...he saw her ...then he realised the have crossed the limit already and were very few steps away from getting one...he wanted it now badly but she may regret...so he just pulled her close and sat in the tub with her cuddled in his arms...soon she was asleep coz of the stress...they layed there for god knows how much tym...but suddenly she sprang up and looked at him with wide eyes...

there he smiled on seeing rey going into his room where ri8 now kriya went in to keep his shirts which were dry now...he informed her through his ring...

he thought they should get some private tym...so as soon as the first movie completed he played the second...

he waited...till now he already had shown them a total of four movies ...he strted the fifth as both priya and sharon asked not to play...he however convinced them for the sixth one...

gosh it was midnight 2...they still didnt have their dinner...sharon was dying of hunger...but to his luck...or to say to their(kriyaansh ) luck the sixth movie was aromantic one and damn intresting...sharon who was a romantic movie freak sticked to the screen stopping her mother too to see ...tell"how romantic mom!!!!!!!!!!"😍 this will also end in nearly 30 mins...he had no choice...he just slipped away went to the garden placed his finger on the ring and shouted at it...

kriya !!!!!!!! dammit bahar niklo donon...

she looked how they were...she was shocked but blushed in next second...rey was smiling on seeing her blush...but suddenly he was confused...

he spoke then...

kriya dekho mai au nahi rokh sakta sharon aur aunty ko...agar pakde gaye toh mujhe mat blame karna...keh raha hun...rey ko control mei rakho aur tum bahar niklo...

he said and went inside...


her expressions changed from some attentive to tensed...he was confused...he placed his left hand on her cheek...

"kya hua pari?? tum itne tensed??????"he asked with all love...

she was pleaced at his concern...she smiled heartfully...

"rey wo hum yahan bohut tym se...agar kisine dekhliya toh..."she asked tensed...

"toh kya ...agle min mei hamari shaadi...tab toh mai ekdam free hojaunga...i will get my total rights on u..."he said...

she was just blushing to the core...

but rey too was tensed in his mind ...coz he have to face a lot of teasing...

so her kissed her once ...got up took a quick shower and went out asking her to take a bath...

he handed her his clothes...she wore them and came out...he was shocked to see her...she looked too cute in them...he quickly gave a peck on her lips and said her to go and change...she slowly sneaked out of the room and rushed into her oom...but she was caught by swayam...he saw her...was shocked to seee her in rey outfit...he smiled mischeiviously...

"aaj toh bohut maza aayega...he said to himself and went to rey...

he was just dancing with her wet lehanga which was dripping water...

" wah!!!!!!!!!! donon geele...woh teri kapdon mei???????/kya baat hai?????"swayam said leaning on the door...

rey was shocked...he throwed the lehanga back which fell out of the window...rey looked at it as if kriya herself fell out...

swayam burst out into laugher...

rey realised his foolish behaviour...he stood ther looking down with a pout...

sharon and priya called them for dinner...

they sat for dinner at 4:00...

coz sharon was literally dying...infact everyone...

sh: ise toh breakfast kehna chahiye/...nahi...dinner...nahi ...aur kya kahun????

sw: tum jo kaho wahi...

swayam said...

priya: ahem ahem...mere hi saamne meri beti se flirt kar rahe ho???//

swaron blushed...

kriya served the food and sat b/w sharon and priya...as usual to have her food...

swayam suddenly noticed the teeth marks on her collarbone...they were too deep...

"lagta hai rey ne apna nishani chod di tum pe"he said caressing the ring without anyone knowing it...

her eyes went wide...she thought for sometime...she slowly checed her colaar bone...she covered quickly with her dupatta...

"hua kya hai andar??????"he teased her...

she choked her food and was coughing very badly...

rey sat quite looking at her tensed...but she coughed too hard ...he just ran to her...fed her water hugging her side wards and rubbed her back...

swayam was smiling naughtily...

sharon and priya were shocked...

finally kriya calmed down...

"kaisa hai ab??????"he asked totally worried...

"theek hun"she replied looking at him

"sach mei theek hona??????"he asked still tensed...

she smiled sweetly and nodded a yes...

he kissed her forehead...she was shocked...

everyone coughed hard ...rey came to his senses and went back...

kriy was looking down all going red...

all alughed hard...

rey silently sat and ate his paratha...

but sharon was making it hell for kriya ...she was teasing her very badly that kriya was blushing to the core...






no prcap...coz...already teaser dediya...

and haaa size mat poochna...

i think the ramance could compensat it...

so plzz do lyk and cmnt...

lov u all...😳


Edited by deetha - 13 years ago
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Sorry pura update nahi read kar shakti

But I loved the part where swayam teased them

Poor Kriya swayam made her cough badly
Edited by Himaniahir - 13 years ago
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deetha ki bachi tu kisi din mjhe blush krwa krwa kr maregi ☺️
pta h tjhe maine kaise pada tera update...mom samne n phone mere hath mai...mai kbhi blush kru kbhi hasu...mere liye itna embarising moment tha ye 😳...bt 4 ur update i cn do anythng 🤣 🤣

dam ye idea kaha se lati h...romance under shower...n bath tub...☺️ ☺️...hahahaha 😆

love wen swayam tease her
poor kria 🤣 🤣

n Aww rey is soo concern 4 her
n he kissesd her forehead in front of evry1...wahhh!!!!! kya baat h

love da update alot
bt badi mushkil se pada re
n look mai abhi b blush kr ri hu ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
Edited by shaffy_arsha - 13 years ago

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