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part-4
agar sach mei rey ki jaan ko kriya ki wajah se khatra hai toh uskeliye aur aasaan hojayega kyun ki rey toh uski jaal mei fas hi jaayeg aasani se...par ye kyun rey ki peeche padi hai??? agar aisa nahi hai toh kya mai kuch jyaada hi soch raha hun??? mujhe kuch toh jaldi karna padega...agar mai galat hun toh mai rey ki love life barbaad karke uski guilt sehni padegi agar nahi hai toh mujhe rey ko khona padega which i can never afford...
the day passed...
..next day night ...
everyone are sleeping peacefully when swayam heard a noise in the hall ...he took his cell and checked the tym ...it was 1: 05...
"ab koun hoga??? "he rubbed his eyes and sat on the bed ...through the half opened door he saw kriya in white night gown walking out...at first he was shocked to see her but then he thought may be now all his confusions may be cleared so he silently followed her...she seemed lost in her own thoughts ...suddenly her hand hit the counch and a black stoned ring fell down from her finger ...but kriya was soo lost that she moved on...he silently took it...it was a normal single big black stoned ring...he slipped into the pocket and followed her...finally she stopped in middle of the garden...he hid behind a bush...suddenly she lifted her hand above her head and showing her index finger she turned her hand in a circle...
the next thing swayam saw made him have goosebumps...a thin layer of smoke started to form lyk ball ...he quickly tried to enter but he was thrown back...he was tensed ...he have to get in...then it struck him...he wore the ring and tried and as he expected he made his way into the ball...he was shivering on the thought ."if she sees me???" but she was lost in her thoughts...for a second her felt lyk his head became light...he closed his eyes ans as he opened he was in another place...it was a bare land...the mud and the sky all are of the same colour...light brown...he wondered where is this place ...he felt extreme hot along with extreme cold ...he didnt understand what he was feeling...he just hugged himself and followed her rubbing his arms...the place looked endlless...he was totally confused ...but never his gaze left her...he followed and to his utter surprise she dissapared...he became tensed and ran to the place where he last saw her...soon he entered into a whole different world...he looked back...no more land...it seemed as if the land never excisted...he felt as if he was in a cave...there he saw her ...but wait...something changed...he checked her then it hit...
"dress"he thought...she was in a nice lehanga choli...he wondered is it she ...
.
but he left his thoughts aside and followed ...then he found a big door in front of him...the first thought he got was...
...
" ppl say hell ...is it this????"he wondered...he never believed in superficial stuff...but 4r the first tym he felt he should believe...as he stepped onto the bridge he felt very hot...so he tried to rub his arms but his eyes widened...his mouth fell open...he saw front ...and againg tried to touch his arm but it just passed through his body and his ri8 hand finally came back to his ri8 side...he strtd sweating...he tried to wipe but in vain...his hand passed through his eyes and came out through head...he thought he became smoke ...he gulped hard and saw at her who was walking slowly with total royalty...as she reached the door 20 members who were at the door came down on their knees and bowed their heads...and looked at her...she turned her head sidewards ...and gave them a smile...
"yeh toh kriya hi hai..."he thought...even he lost his voice...he again gulped and looked around...atlast at her...she already entered ...he thought he would miss the track so he ran but was thrown back and he fell down b/w the 20 ppl who looked lyk man eaters...he gulped hard ...he thought that ...
"rey ...chal bhai mai toh mar gaya aaj..." he again gulped hard and looked around ...but to his utter surprise no one was looking at him...he stood up slowly with lots of difficulties and stood before one of the door keeper...but he was just looking past him...he waved his hand but no reaction...
"matlab they cant see me...yippee!!!!!!"he jumped and again tried to enter slowly but he cant go in...suddenly he saw the doorkeepers sensing something trying to enter...so he just stood there and looked in...
it was open inside...long way and to the end stood the throne of a king at a height...
..and many ppl are sitting on both side according to their positions...she walked till middle ...and stood there...all along the king stood ...and took their seats...they strtd talking something...but he cant hear...but by the bodylanguage he can say the king was a bit angry on her ...and one man ...a young man ..
(imagine him in some royal attire lyk a prince)...with muscles was frequently loosing his temper and was abt to talk when the king stopped him and she was lyk she was explaining infact convincing them...after sometym the ypung man stood up and said something ...he could noe hear the voice but not clear abt the words...he saw her arguing with the prince...both went on to very angry state ...the prince once shouted at her...thats it swayam could see her face colour change to slight pink...and and faint red but before that the king called her...she looked at the king...again they spoke...and again the prince shouted ...
"tum se kuch nahi hota...hamne aapse pehle hi kaha pitaji ki sar pe mat chadayiye ise...ek kaam dhang se nahi aati ...hamari behan bangayi warna hum ab tak ise khatam kar chuke hote..."he shouted...and he continued...
swayam was shocked...
"iski ek bhai hai ...papa hai ...i mean whole family hai phir bhi isne kaha ye orphan hai...par ye jagah kounsi hai??? uski dress kaise change hui?? mujhe kya hua??? mai invisible kaise??aakhir ho kya raha hai???" but his thoughts were cut by her voice...swayam feared at her shout and flinched back ...infact everyone flinched back in their seats except the prince who stood up glaring at her...
"BAS!!!!!!!! " she glared at the prince...and looked forward and strtd raising her both hands up...( lyk how kangana raises in marjawan song...
)
she was raising hr hands when her bottom colour of dress strtd changing...here swayam was sweating on seeing these all ...he gaped at her back with fear...he saw the king ...he was telling something continuosly...she raised her hands till her shoulder height when the king shouted...the whole place was shaken slightly...
"MOKSHA!!!!!!!" he shouted ...standing up ...the whole crowd there stood up...
swayam felt as if she was shaken slightly as if coming out of trance...she stopped and placed her hands back and glared at the prince ...her eyes were red with anger...the prince was abt to tell something when the king shouted...
"yuvraj aap abhi mehal me jayiye..."he ordered...
"lekin pitaji/..."
"humne kaha jayiye...ye hamara aadesh hai"he again shouted ...
the prince went in glaring at her after he left the king came down and stood before her and bowed ...all the court members went on their knees at their places and bowed her...she just bent down touched the kings feet and swiftly turned and made her way out...swayam stood aside as she crossed him and again he followed her...and finally he again entered into the bare land...
...but he saw her walking through the second route which was oppisite to which they came...he just followed her...after a long walk he saw something amusing...he felt lyk two pics were kept aside ...one of the side with brown sky and mud and the other lyk earth...as she stepped into the bright world her attire again changed ...
...his mouth fell open as he saw her dress turning itself into another just as he saw in barbie movies...she again seemed lost.she walked some distance and sat down
...he thought of entering but afraid what would happen so he just sat down there itslef hugging himself...he was seeing her...she was expressionless but after sometime a faint smile played on her lips which disappeared in max of 30 secs...he sat there for god knows how much tym...then finally she walked back...he hid behind a wood piece...his lucky day she was totally lost in her thoughts...finally they reached the spot where they landed...and again in the same process they came back and as soon as the ball strtd opening swayam hoped out and ran to the entrance...she came slowly ...he hid inside ...she closed the doors ...wait...
"again she is in white gown???"he wondered,...
she soon went into her room and locked ...swayam too went in ...he checked the tym to his shock it was just 1:07
"what??? omly 2 mins??? swayam tu paagal toh nahi hogaya??? kahi ye tera sapna toh nahi ??? "he looked around and took the glass water and emptied on his head ...
"sach hi toh hai???"he wonderd that he spent a hell lot of tym sitting and her its just 2 mins...means he just walked to garden and walked back????
he thought to confirm so he went into hall and dropped the water jar...soon all the family members came...
"swayam kya hua yaar??"rey asked in sleep...
"woh paani keliye aayatha toh wo fis.-a-l..."he stoped...he was shocked ...she was in sharons black track and black tee...
"kya hua???"sharon asked on seeing his shocked face"
"kuch nahi fisal gaya ...bas"he told making himself normal...
sharon gave him a jar filled with water and rey pulled him back to room as he was feeling hell sleepy...
bechara swayam ki toh neendh ud gayi...😆
ab soch te raho aage kya???
sorry shaffy ...woh wala sequence next part mei...actually ye bohut lamba hogaya...
precap:
rey took kriya out ...
to the same place where they first met...where rey saved her...
they sat and spoke 4r hell lot of tym...suddenly thunder...kriya hugged rey...heavy rain...kriyaansh fully drenched...both looking hot in black ...rey loosing senses...both ...ahem ahem...
a deep cut in hand...blood oozed out...rey shouted...
hehe...ab socho romantic thriller...😛
rey ko kuch hua???
rey bachega??
kya sach mei kriya rey ko maarna chahti hai???
akeli raat...akele donon...and finally the grand dialouge...😆
socho socho tab tak mai enjoy karti hun...
mujhe lyks chahiye warna no update...
sorry...🤢
plzz lyk and cmnt😳
Jhanak
