OS : The Knife's Edge Part 2 on Pg. 12 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
i closed my eyes plz cont
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
I closed my eyes..n m waiting..n anticipating a lot..wat nw??😉😛
"So do you think we'll get arrested for this?" His gravelly voice was low...
With every ounce of her strength she replied..."For what?"
"Making love in public?"
Shocked into the moment, she tried to pull back, but his vise-like grip held her steady...
"What are you talking about!? We're not doing anything!" her voice waslouder than she had wanted it to be...
But Arnav didn't care who heard, or who saw...
"We already have...We've been making love with our eyes since we first saw each other..."---awww so swt!.watevr arnav said to her is one of most romantic thngs i've evr heard..lovely!..absolute gorgeousness!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank you for the pm... I've always enjoyed seeing the naughty side of arnav and here we have it in ample doses! loved how he 'makes love to khushi in public'... no wonder she's not immune to his charm and devilry... really enjoyed that whole scene, and her acknowledgement of her own feelings as well as her final acceptance of his command and thus, of his love!

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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
plz plz plz conntinue...
waiting
waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
Loved it. My eyes are closed now what? Please continue. It's a beautiful OS.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
I really loved this one...so intense and passionate!! I really hope you continue this one.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Wow really nice ... I closed my eyes too.

I do wish you would have another part to this one just to know what happened next😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
luved it
wonderful os
thx a lot for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
ohh sarah! 😉 I want MORE! do you hear me? MORE!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
Beautifully written, The way you described both feelings and effect on each other was awesome ..

Are you gonna continue this?? Pls do so...

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