A Series of Most Fortunate EventsPt11 p115,Note121 - Page 3

This is an interesting and thought provoking way of looking at the terrace episode, one of the most important scenes in the actual story. Your point of view has many of the characters shown in a remarkably different light, one which has not been addressed in the actual serial. Here the story though primarily is about Arnav and Khushi, it takes into account the part the others paly in their lives, importantly Payal, who is greatly ignored otherwise and can be of great assistance to Khushi, which she did here. Sisters are partners in crime and all, which has never been explored, fortunately you have done that, glad someone actually sees the relations as they are and not mere props.

I also liked the feisty nature Payal displayed, she can stick her neck out for her kid sister Khushi and she will do it even at the expense of her impending marriage. That spineless snake Shyam may threaten her all she wants, but she will not let harm come her sister's way, good girl Payal, rarely get to say that about her. NK forever there to support the women, nice lady's man, good fortune indeed, he heard the whole exchange between Payal and Shyam.

Arnav and Khushi are so avoiding the actual discussion, both want to do something about the way they feel and though Arnav is clear about his intentions, Khushi is clueless and wants to stop her acidity at any cost. Arnav's appraisal of his lady and that too in red, Khushi can run but cannot escape Arnav, try my dear, keep trying.

Nicely written OS, what if this had happened?????