Shaadi Ka Ladoo ' Kriyansh OS '

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Heya guyz.. its me and Asma di aka asmaju..

this is a OS created by two of us..

hope u will like it..

plz post ur reviews if u like it or not..

and any kind of suggestion or juttis and chappals are warmly welcomed here




After marriage, husband and wife become two sides of a coin; they just can't face each other, but still they stay together.


Women hope men will change after marriage but they don't; men hope women won't change but they do.


Rey was totally mad on her after their marriage..

She always behave like a typical bahu.. rey was going crazy...
she was busy all the time..

whenever he tried to get close to her, she interrupt him by saying she has some work or she is tired.. she was always busy in taking care of his parents and didnt give even a minute to him..

this drama goes on for some months... Now rey was out of his mind.. he didnt even get a minute with her..
they only meet at lunch and dinner time.. at night she comes late and sleeps as she was always tired..

Rey was very much pissed up with this behaviour of Kria.
He wanted to do something.

Suddenly he heard his cell ring.
He noticed who has called him at this part of time.
Seeing the caller id he smiled and answed .

Rey:Hi bata yaar kaise hai tu?

Swa:Mai thik hu,Tu kaisa hai.

Rey: Acha hu but sounded low.

Sw:Kya hua y r u so low?

Rey:Bas meri patni ko mere alawa sab ke liye time hai.

Swa:Yehi prob meri bhi hai.:(

Rey:So ab kya kare.Wait kal milthe hai aur plan karte hai.

Morning my house at 7.

Next day Swayam arrived.

Kria opened the door as the door bell rang and saw Swayam.
She said Hi and welcomed him in.
Just den REy arrives down and Reyam hug each other.

behind swayam was sharon she was too now typical bahu types...
kriya's mouth was wide open..

she hugged sharon and sharon reciprocated it..

K: hi sharon.. u look stunning and weird too
she said eyeing her head to toe..



Sh: same as u kripa..



K: if m kripa then u r now S-h-a-r-o-n-j-e-e-t
she said while stretching her name..

and they talked and talked and talked..
reyam was now fed up..

Rey : would u dont mind coming IN!!
he said screeching his teeth on each and every word ..

K: ops i forgot to invite u in..
she bite her tongue..

the two girl .. ops now ladies goes inside and then there bak bak shuru..


The boys were fed up.

Rey told Kria that Swayam and him to go to the lawn .
and soon both moved.

Rey (irritated) tells Swayam dekh liya kaisi hai yeh and man Sharon has also changed.
I nvr thought She wil were Sarie .

Sw:Haan yaar dek liya nah tune

Both together:Typical Indian gals and started laughing.

Just then Kria arrived with tea and Snacks and placed it on table and Served both and moved in to do chatting with Sharon(Gals talk)

Rey:Acha bata Swayam kya plan hai.

Sw: narrates the plan.

Rey:Wow yaar hope this works very well.

Next day Rey was all ready to work on the plan. and he started to office soon saying he has some important meeting.

now it was time of his office to get close.. he didnt come home..

an hour passed..but no sign of rey..

2 hours passes but rey didnt came..

she was now worried and his parents too were worried for him..
they asked kriya about rey's whereabouts..
but she said she dont know..

they tried to call him but his number was Off!!

his parents tried hard but couldnt find where he was..
then they called swayam and asked him but he too says he dont know..
time passed..

kriya at last was successful in convincing his parents to take sleep...


Guyz this OS will have 2 parts..
next part will be posted soon :)
and will name it soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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*Res*

**Unres**


Awesome...Superb...new concept!!!


"Love Life after marriage", poor rey...i liked d lines which told d girls think boys shudnt change after marriage n d boys wants d girls to b same as now...n d girls change!!!


Really loved rey's condition...


N den d Krisha talk...


It was totally rocking..


I loved dis Indian Style...


Coming to d title, just suggestions, "Love after marriage", "Flavours of life--this fishy i dnt kno d storyline dats y".


N Asma I wont leave u free from now...wil make sure u write another one.

Edited by snigdha_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesum update

gud strt

aww poor reyam nt gettin tym frm thier ladies😔

nd btw wats da plan ????

ty fr da pm

nd bout title srry no ideas nw

i'll tell u afterwards😊

ty fr da pm

update soon😊

Edited by luvcookie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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res
unres
Awesome OS...
nice start
loved it guys...gr8 job
poor reyam they don't get enough time from their ladies
eagerly waiting for the next part
update soon

n guys sorry mai title suggest karne mai bahut slow hu agar kuch idea aaya toh pakka bata dungi
Edited by lovely7010 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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bechare reyam fed up of krisha!!! lol...
i just hope unka yeh plan kaam karein...
title: teri sajni...
Edited by kriyaanshd3 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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unres !


wow nimri and asma di kya likha hain kya baat kya baat kya baat luvd it nyc concept

title name: marriage ke baad 😆
Edited by SOBTILICIOUS - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update...
Update nxt part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AWESOME update !
nyc concept !!
lol ! kria n sharon TYPICAL BAHU !!🤣🤣
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Originally posted by: SOBTILICIOUS

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unres !


wow nimri and asma di kya likha hain kya baat kya baat kya baat luvd it nyc concept

title name: marriage ke baad 😆

well thx alot..
and ye title me bhi suggest kar chuki hun.. :P
but it didnt fit

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