(ArHi) Parineeta - VERY IMP NOTE PAGE 51. READ!!

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Shruti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#161

Oh my K u really did bring out Bengali culture
No doubt abt that ask me I live in Bengal
And u wrote the start beautifully
I can really imagine the scene
I have seen the movie like thousand time and the start n end is my fav
And u have penned it down exceptionally good
Great work

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Homairah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

This was sooo beautifully written!
And omg. This air of mystery you've created is amazing and it was so intense between Khushi and Arnav omggg! I don't even know what to say. My heart was like dhak dhak dhak dhak dhak dhak reallly fast through their whole encounter. Can't believe Arnav called her a wh**e! Holy hell, what s going on! I am so curious about their history. And what was it that Arnav used to call her? Aw mannn this is some fabulous stuff K!

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sun_shine_girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#163

Rani, I love the way you have used the concept of Parineeta and made it yours. This story has your unique brand of imagery, the language is beautiful, the scenes magical.

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Sona

@mistyrains

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Posted: 13 years ago

#164

Krani, exceptional writing :)

Needless to say, I loved the first part. The pain, the emotions are so wonderfully written. Arnav's shoulder stiffening, the outburst, Khushi's actions before going to meet him, it seemed to be happening right in front of me. Great, great job:)

Before Arnav's entry though, I loved the part about Khushi and Lavanya,it touched me, somehow.

Loved it, update soon:)

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scorp1AN

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Posted: 13 years ago

#165

that was an awesome update... felt bad to see arnav say all those words to khushi.. but it is really interesting... really hoping to read more! please update soon!