(ArHi) Parineeta - VERY IMP NOTE PAGE 51. READ!!

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Gayathri

@GayuArnav

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

OMG! I have never seen parineeta but this is sure awesome!

I mean arnav is khushi's husband but he says o khushi that she is someone else's wife? Okay i guess there is some past there!

Loved the update. Waiting to know what was the past! Great update krani!

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nj123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

I haven't watched the movie but the way you write is just so gripping and I really can't wait to read more!😃

Absolutely loved it and the suspense in your stories always draw me and I'm sure this is gonna be really amazing.

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thebubblespop12

@thebubblespop12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

Thank You for updating!!
When I first read that you were starting this update the first thing I did was go watch the movie. For anybody who hasn't seen it, go watch it. The movie is amazing and so is this ff. I loved this scene in the movie, it was so intense. I loved the way Khuhsi talked to Arnav, she seemed so powerful! You're anamqzing writer, and I can't wait to read more!!!

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farfar319

@farfar319

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Posted: 13 years ago

#154

totally loving it!!! the storyline of parineeta so works with the characters of Arnav and Khushi.

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@boyznaka

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Posted: 13 years ago

#155

I had the whole scene playing in my mind during the last part. It's just.. amazing to read it, you know. You've seen the movie, you've heard the voices, but it's just a whole different experience when you read it because you can almost hear yourself narrating each scene, each sequence.

And I can so imagine Sanaya as Khushi/Lalita and Barun as Arnav/Shekhar. I could also imagine "Kaisi paheli.."playing in the background, like in the trailer. Hehehe!

Anywho, I loved the update! :)

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anumber1

@anumber1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#156

Yay You restarted this! Loved the update. I could totally see Arhi on the stairs from the movie. And choosing Lavanya as the sister was perfect!

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meenaluma

@meenaluma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#157

awesome update

loved it

the story line of parineeta

will be great to read

cat wait for next part

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peppygeek

@peppygeek

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Posted: 13 years ago

#158

Great start!

I knew what was coming yet I felt bad for Khushi.

I finally got around to reading all your updates!

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#159

K! U updated all ur FF's? Why no Pm's still?

Okay I dunno what Parineeta is and how popular it is. I was holding myself from reading its storyline as it might spoil the fun here. But it seems I need to go browse.

Kushi is married but not to Arnav? And she is seducing him? But she was not like that before she stepped out of the room. What happened and is happening??

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Jalebi Jane

@JalebiJane

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Posted: 13 years ago

#160

Your write exquisitely. The pacing, the way in which your words balance on that emotional edge--that scene between Arnav and Khushi--you held us on the precipice so beautifully. I became Khushi and I felt crushed by Arnav's harshness--YET, yet, I felt he was in such pain also.

This is gorgeous splendid work.

Do write more and as often as your life allows--I'm more impressed than I can say.

Warmest regards,

Maya