ArHi - Kaisa Ye - Part 10-3Pg 51 - 08-21-12 - Page 17

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lovelycutietedy

thanks for the pm dear ...


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Warm welcome 😛

Happy to know that you enjoyed and keep on enjoying it.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Is anyone bored! I hope not! Cause its time for update and before I begin.. just wanting to clear out something that I've been asked several times in my feedback regarding Arnav knowing Khushi's age. Currently, Arnav doesn't know nothing about Khushi's age.

Secondly, I've replied to your comments on the previous pages (check them out - if you want) otherwise enjoy the part.


Arnav is 27 (currently, but the story begins in the past and his age at that moment is 23) and Khushi is 17 (currently, but the story itself begins in the past and her age at the that moment is 13) I hope that help and many of you requested that I use different fonts in breaking the past and present...

right!


Legend of the fonts... "Light Pink" means "extra info in brackets or song playing in the background or heading of Scene"

"Medium Purple" means "I am writing in the past"

"Dark Blue" means "It's in the present"

If there is more changes in the color coats than I'll let you know.



Arnav's age: 23
Khushi's age: 13

Part 5

Kripa shedding away her tears while Rudra search everywhere for Khushi, but no trace of her anywhere.

Kripa kept on praying silently for Khushi's safety. Rudra came toward his wife who kept on searching for Angel behind me "Rudr where is Angel? I know both siblings enjoy teasing me, but this isn't joke. Where is she?" I lower my head "she isn't anywhere near school grounds. I search everywhere" "what do you mean? Everywhere" she grab his collar "why, did make a promise when you knew you couldn't keep it? If anything happens to my Angel.. I won't forgive you" her voice slowly get quieter and quieter before she collapse in her husband's arm.

Rudra lift Kripa in his arm and made her relax inside their room. He called his friend Akshat (Akshat is good friend of his and always treated Khushi like his sister. He is raw agent and work undercover for his department) and told him about Angel being missing.

Few Hours Later

Rudra: Dude, what can I say? I don't know where Angel ran off because I couldn't keep my promise.

Akshat: Hey, don't get emotional. You trust me and I won't let anything happen to our Angel. Just stay clam and leave everything on my shoulders.

Rudra: How can I stay clam? I don't know if my sister ate or she isn't in any trouble. I just want her home.

Akshat: Relax! I know its very difficult moment, but you have to be strong for Bhabhi and if I get any news on Angel. I'll give you shout.

Rudra: Alright!

Two Days Later

Akshat couldn't gather any news on Khushi. Kripa's condition getting worst that Rudra decide to shift her into hospital.

Akshat place his hand on Rudra shoulder "what are you thinking? Just shift Bhabhi into the hospital and don't worry about Angel. My team are trying their best"

Rudra nod his head... went inside his room... saw Kripa staring at Angel's photo... Rudra sat beside her... took her hand in his hand.

Rudra: I know you are upset with me, but I have to shift you into the hospital.

Kripa: I don't want to go anywhere without Angel being beside me.

Rudra: What I am doing its the best for you and the baby

Kripa: You are worried about the baby when my daughter is missing for two days and you just standing here... only skulking instead of doing anything. I am not going anywhere.

Rudra: Please

"Bhabhi" voice shouted. Both Rudra and Kripa fallow the voice "where are you guys? Look your Angel is back" Kripa spread her arms open and Angel ran in her arms. Kripa leaving wet kisses on her face "how is my Angel" she kept on asking "I've missed you" she kept on kissing Khushi's face and her forehead.

Angel cup Kripa's face "I'm fine" Kripa notice blood stain on her forehead "just shut up. I can see how much fine you are. So Bhabhi where you have gotten hurt"

Khushi touch her forehead and remembers how she got blood stain on her forehead and clothes.



~ Flashback of blood stain ~

Arnav convince Khushi that her brother asked him to take care of her in his absent.

Khushi agreed.

Arnav enjoyed his each moments with Khushi and her innocent. Slowly two days pass by and he had to attend wedding on behalf of his family. He took Khushi along with him.

Khushi enjoyed the entire wedding with satisfaction. On there way, back to the cottage Khushi share her excitement with Arnav.

Khushi: Thank you for taking me out.

Arnav: You enjoyed it

Khushi: Yep, it was my first time attending something like that. I had so much fun with the people around us. And the food was tasty.

Arnav: Wow, it was your first time and mine too. I hardly attend functions, but in your company I enjoyed it much. Thank you for coming with me.

Arnav touch her forehead and lower himself to kiss her forehead.

Khushi: What was that for? Did I do something good that I deserved your appreciation?

"She already win my heart" Arnav told himself that before answering Khushi's question suddenly Khushi screamed.

Arnav: What happen?

Khushi: Look (she point at person laying on the ground) is he hurt.

Arnav park his car on the side and check the person. Suddenly many people came out of no where and saw a person trying to reach his car. Arnav boil with anger and start fighting with them.

He thrust them with deadly punches.

Khushi: Arnavji!

He turn around (sweat dripping down his face) and saw one of those people got hold of Khushi. His anger crossed the tolerance. He march toward them and smack the person straight in his face.

Blood flowing out of his mouth.

Khushi hugged Arnav and Arnav soothing her back "everything is going to be alright" he kissed her shoulder.

Khushi sobbing away.

Arnav: why are you crying?

Khushi I want to go home... Please Arnavji

Arnav sighs "fine" without wanting he agreed to take her back home (but destiny had something else stored for them) while breaking apart from the hug. Arnav's wounded hand rubbed against Khushi's forehead (making her his forever). At first Arnav didn't notice his blood stain on Khushi's forehead, but when they sat inside the car. He notice it and smirk.



(Khushi's Monologue Begin with end of flashback)

After we sat inside the car it became quiet. I saw him smiling at me. I was confuse, but when we stopped in front of my house.

I got excited and without waiting for him. I ran inside shouting Bhabhi's name because I am still mad at Bhaiyya.

Anyway I ran into Bhabhi's arm. She kissed me everywhere on my face with love and motherly affection. I just buried myself in her arms before Bhabhi freaking out when she notice blood stain on me.

I touch my forehead... saw dried up blood stain on it... that moment I realize Arnavji got hurt while protecting me... without waiting for anyone I rush toward the entrance where I saw Arnavji standing with Akshat Bhai and blood dripping from his hand. I curse myself for not noticing earlier.

I ran toward him and took his hand... tears started rolling down my face automatically...

Akshat: What happen? Angel

I just ingored him and Rudra Bhai's question I heard behind me. I look at Bhabhi who notice my tearful face and she cupped it.

Kripa: Kya hua meri Shona ko?

Khushi: Bhabhi because of me Arnavji got hurt. I should have listen to him and stayed inside the car, but I was scared and look he's bleeding.

Kripa finally notice the person who stood beside Angel and she was holding his hand in her hand. Also Rudra notice him too.

Kripa: Stop crying now! Why don't you go upstairs and fresh up while Bhabhi nurse his wound?

I let go of Arnavji's hand and rushed upstairs into my room. Unaware of the discussion happening downstairs.

Guys.. how was the part! Hope alright! Please do leave behind your feedback otherwise how can I improve myself. Every comments counts "positive or negative".

Love Misti

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update :D
thnx for the pm 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: flowers4u

nice story...do continue...



Hey, Welcome aboard

I hope you liking it so far. Thank you so much.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: darksydeangel

nice update :D

thnx for the pm 😃



Great to hear from you.. Thank you

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice story
pls pm me when u update next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome..
Omg they r married..
Brilliant.
Loved it. Continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: meenaluma

nice story

pls pm me when u update next part



Surely, will

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rkapoor1382

Awesome..
Omg they r married..
Brilliant.
Loved it. Continue soon.



Destiny already planning ahead in shaping their relation... Let see how things are going to fold...

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part.. loved it.. cant wait what they r discussing in kushi s absence,, continue soon
thanks for pm

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