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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
really interesting
very romantic of arnav proposing to her going behind her
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
intersting do continue plz...pm me too
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
heya

that was awesome..

you should definitely continue..

many thanks for the pm..:)

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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Awesome ff continue soon can't wait for next part and thank u so much for pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you for your amazing comments. I can't explain how much it motivates me!!! Here's part 2.Enjoy!!

Part 2

Khushi woke up in Arnav's arms the next morning.She blushed seeing him..remembering their intimate moments of last night. Suddenly Arnav started kissing her hair.'Good morning' Khushi said smiling at him.'Good morning to you too baby 'He replied kissing her hair more.Khushi looked at the clock..it was 8.30am..and she freaked out.'Arnav, it's already 8.30..We are late.Come on hurry up.' She said in a urgency.'What's the rush baby? it's only 8.30 and we don't even have our office work today so relax.' 'Come on..it's my 1st day at your house and I don't wanna be late for the breakfast.There must be some rituals too.Get up na?' Arnav looked at her making a duck face.'What? What do you want?'Khushi knew this expression of his face very well.He only makes it whenever he wants something.'Umm...I just want a good morning kiss' He said like a baby.'God Arnav!! You're such a kid.'Khushi said giving him a soft quick kiss.'Now get up..I'm gong to shower' She said getting up from bed.

They dressed up for the breakfast and all the family members were already at the table.Khushi wished all of them Good morning and they gave her sweet repiles.Anjali started taking..she said-'Khushi ji, you know as it's your 1st day at this house, so according to the ritual, you need to make a swwet dish for everyone today.' Arnav choked the water hearing it.He knew what a terrible cook Khushi was. He looked at her and Khushi gave him a nervous look.Anjali and Payal took her to the kitchen. Arnav started getting worried...wondering what disaster Khushi would do in the kitchen.

The three of them returned after 45 minutes and he got concerned to look what disaster khushi had made.he glanced at the plate at khushi's hand..and saw that it was full of Jalebis.'She made Jalebis?Where did she learn making jalebis?'He thought.'I just hope that the Jalebis taste okay..'He thought further.Khushi started placing the jalebis on the plates of the family members and Arnav started freaking out.She placed 2 Jalebis on his place too.'At least they look fine' Arnav thought.' Khushi ji made sugar free jalebis chote..especially for you..'Anjali said in a teasing tone and everyone laughed.' Everyone, lets start' Nani said. and Arnav with much hesitation took a bite at a jalebi and got the surprise of his life.It tasted awesome!!! He gave khushi a shocking look and she smiled in response.Everyone started prasing her cooking and Khushi blushed hearing their compliment.Then Nani ji cleared her throat ad started making an announcement.'You know, It's a gift from the family for Chote and Khushi betiya.I'm sending them to Kashmir for honeymoon.Here are your tickets.You have to leave tomorrow morning.' All the family members started teasing them. Aman said-'Wah...ASR..Kashmir ki hasin vadiya,with your angel...wah...what a combination'. Arnav gave him a threating look but Aman of course was busy teasing him.

Finally after being busy for different rituals, they got some alone time in the future,Arnav hugged her and said-'The jalebis were awesome baby!! How did you make them? or Payal helped you making them?' Khushi smiled looking at him and said-'You know the last time i came to india I loved Jalebis.They tasted freakin' amazing.So when I went back to England I learnt how to make them.Of course, I was missing you very much.I had no other thing to do..and making Jalebis seemed to lessen my restlessness.' 'Jalebis lessen your anxiousness?' You really are a museum piece Mrs. Raizada' he said kissing her cheek.'YOu are no exception sweetheart' Khushi said giving him a long wet kiss.

so do you guys like it/I'm thinking of dividing the honeymoon chapter into 2 parts.Can't still confirm.Plz comment and like.Thank you!! and for those who want PMS..just send a buddy req and i'll Pm whenever i'll update.I Don't have separate PM list.

Edited by ArnavKhushi16 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
yeee...
I got 1st. 😃
awww... Arnav is sooo swwet in dis story.
I was laughing when arnav aws thinking dat how khushi will cook. 😆
looking forward 4 their honeymoon.
Update soon.
Thanx 4 da pm.
Edited by kajolkonna - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
so mr and mrs raizada are going for honeymoon😉.hope they come back with a good news.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow...i m the first person..loved it yaar..update it soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
wow...
such a cute part...
thnxz for de pm!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
awesome update

amazing

loved it

please cant wait for the next update

Thank you for the pm

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