Arhi- Their Child (Part 10 on 91, upd 6/8)

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kaira101

@kaira101

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#511

awww lovely way to end it dear

very well written

thanx for the pm

loved reading each and every updates

can't wait to read more of your works😉

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jenshad

@jenshad

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#512

Can't Believe You Ended It :( But Good That They Shared & Solved The Problem Together 😳

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scorp1AN

@scorp1AN

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#513

loved the update as usual! thank god arnav spoke out abt what he feel abt this whole prenancy and stuff! thank you for the PM!

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689471

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#514

Glad that Arnav expressed his fears to KHushi. It was a lovely update. All the part were really good and they did express what some men or women feel when they first find out a baby is on the way, fear, excitement and happiness, it can be one out of the lot or a combination of all. You've executed that very well in your story.😃

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aakriti

@aakriti120

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#515

heya..

awesome ending..

many thanks for the pm..:)

will so look for the os...

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Harshnee Vora

@harshnee

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#516

luved it

especially when arnav told her how he felt at first and how he feels now about their baby.

looking forward to seeing wat happens next.

continue soon

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sasr

@sasr

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#517

Am so sad..y cant you end it with khushi's delivery...?

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#518

That was nice n sweet

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Riima_Azraa

@Riima_Azraa

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#519

I like how you have ended it!!!

yeah no point in dragging it - it was a beautiful SS

thnx for the PM 🤗

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580531

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#520

Nisha! 🤗 That was a lovely ending dear. Loved this last update, in fact, loved this entire SS of yours. It was beautifully written and had such a heart warming story. You did a wonderfully awesome job. 👏 Congratulations on the completion of your first ever SS. 😃 I am with you, to end it seemed logical to me too. ArHi are set to live a conflict free blissfully happy married life. At the very least you could have prolonged it a bit further and maybe written a part or two more about Khushi's delivery but would have ended then. 😊