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Posted: 19 years ago
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Plz contiune soon its been so long. 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
#42
sry i was ill. i'll cont asap
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Posted: 19 years ago
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A: kanu

Ka: plz bhai don't call me that if any of my friend hears it my image will be dead.

A: u and ur image maintenance u know we are looking proud poor in this taxi.

Ka: Don't worry I have the Check.

A: which check?

Ka: dad gave me…. He asked me to buy a new car and the keys will be with me that you can't bunk.

A: that's unfair, I m the big one, kanan will u…… give the keys to me in the nite.

Ka: no way, u r shameless

A: hey if girls are my addict so….

K: we haven't experienced any gal at college. And it's the best school with position holders studying here u won't get a chance.

A: we'll see.

We see kripa walking through hostel corridor as she get her room she enters. She sees two brown beds with brown bed sheet. But nothing resembles her home. She sits down and cries, suddenly a hand pats her shoulder. She looks behind and sees a gal with brown shiny hair in night dress.

Girl: you are kripa sharma rite.

K: who did u guess?

Girl: I got info that my roommate's name is kripa. Btw I'm simone.

K: oh

S: missing mom dad.

K: hmmm.

S: see when I was first here I was also really disappointed but once u get in the college u will experience fun and fights……………
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Posted: 19 years ago
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K: wat do u mean by fun….. and fights…..

S: watch it tomorrow. Beware of ragging.

And they sleep. The next day in St. Patrick College and University they both were going through the big and noisy corridors. Some boys block their way.

B: hey simone who is this hot girl.

K: mind ur damn language or I will complain.

B: oh so u think u r cool.

S: plz manik let us go.

M: sweety have u forgotton ur rules the gals r already ragging boys…..

We see angad walking to the doors with kanan

Ka: bhai these gals are staring us.

A: so u r uncomfo wid gals.

Ka: bhai they will rag us.

They hear a voise from behind.

S: hey handsome.

A: ya

S: my name is aaliyah wat's urs.

A: mine is angad.

Aa: well u r to handsome to be ragged but as a rule u have to do something.

Then we see kripa and manik arguing. Manik comes closer to her. She pushes him hard and he falls. Crowd was laughing at and he was ashamed he got a narrow shave. Kripa gave hi-fi to simone.

Aaliyah murmurs something in angad's ear.

A: that's too easy.

He walks ahead. He pulls a gal to face her and slaps her. She was none other than kripa. He recognizes her.

A: zor se lagi kya.

Kripa burst out crying harder and harder. The principle comes to her.

P: why r u crying?

S: this man slapped her wdout any reason, she didn't have known him.

K: my parent didn't have ever slapped and this…….. (continues crying)
P: who r u?

A: angad Khanna

P: oh my god, ur father is a very good man and u, don't u feel respect for gals why did u slapped her.

A: no offence sir, I was instructed to do that. I was ragg……

P: shut up we may dial to ur father.

Ka: sir my brother will not repeat this act.

P: no arguments. And u young gal (kripa plz come to my cabin wid him u shud complain directly to his father.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#45
awesome part!!! 👏 👏 👏

meanie angad!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#46

awwww
wow vewii nice story so far
luvin d titl n luvin d hole story MOR!!
plz plz plz continu soon im dyin 2 read wot hapens nxt!!
dis is so cute a-k alredy havin argumnts 😆
luvin ur fan_fic!!! its briliant!!!
i fink im alredy adictd 2 it n cant w8 2 read mor! plz continu u very soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon!!!
xxMWAHxx
xx Saz xx

Edited by Chotii - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#47
yes u continued greats parts! continue soon! 🤗
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Posted: 19 years ago
#48
wonderful part. this is taking so long. could u try to continue sooner. please
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Posted: 19 years ago
#49
its awsome 👏 👏 👏 i can't believe angad slapped kpipa anyways cont soon plz 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
he gettin in ttouble.. noo he's gonna want revenge and then........ o noo!!! o weelll it was a gr8 partt
continue soooooonn

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