You breathe life into me.. Pt4-pg38

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s s nair

@..SSNAIR..

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#251

😃Superb chapter... loved it... update fast... 😃

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rhearuhi

@rhearuhi

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#252

lovely update fast paced and full of suspense loving how khushi has taken charge of the situation..

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-BarunKiMeera-

@-BarunKiMeera-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#253

Oh. God..
What will khusi do now?
Nice update..

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coalfax

@coalfax

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#254

Thanks for updating. getting intresting,

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Vishwa

@vish94

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#255

ok sup (dats my new nick name for u cuz writing ur full name always is too long n I, am waaayy tooo lazy!! sorry if u dont like it!))

i updated my comment. now go read ! page 41.

once again awesome work!

but khushi and arnav should please be safe!!

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Laila

@Edella17

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#256

Sorry for the late review ...Omg...Khushi Please be safe...Update soon ...I love ur writing (;

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amisuv

@amisuv

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#257

Getting more exciting, waiting fr the nxt part...

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Shivana

@SNR7

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#258

Part 1: Love how they are able to sense each other 😃...hope it's not creepwa that's found Khushi!

Part 2: Those guys are such a******s 😡! Making Arnie bleed, torturing him before wanting to kill him! But Khushi is here - yay!

Part 3: Yep definitely romantic 😉 U aced it! The desparation to fulfil wat was a long time coming was successfully completed - the uniting of 2 souls that had always meant to be 😊...

Part 4: Intense part - liked the action heaps. Cliffhanger!!! U really had to do that nah?!

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-zozo-

@-zozo-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#259

OMG i'm scared for Khushi!!!!

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pyrarkh

@pyrarkh

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#260

hey just read the last chapter nw...and hve to say tht the goons are dammm funnny...but khushi line regarding tht owl ws awesum...luved tht line...

and its so great tht she know smallest possible detail regarding the goons...but gosh nw she is in trouble..m so scared fr khushi nw..what's gonna happen nw..

i wantt tht arnav have a fight sequence with the goons...cause i knw they will try to hurt khushi...

waiting fr then next part like anything ...wanna know wht will happen to khushi...

continue soon...

thnx fr the pm...