Kriyansh SS-True Love v/s Evil link to Thread2 pg1 - Page 70

Originally posted by: pkriyaansh

waiting for next update

will try to update today if not then tomorrow

damn neha...u ruined the moment...neways kriyansh romance was intense...and the last part made me have gooesebups...upd8 fast...

Originally posted by: mEgical_arsha

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Unress krungi tom.

bade comments ke liye be ready !!! :D

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So...so soo my dear Twinkie darls...

As i said wuld give u a longg comment...

So here i go...my my non stop blabbering or to say chapar chapar !!!!

U have to jhelofy me !!!!

Coming to the Update...

It was damn Awesum as usual !!!!

The small small things and scenes that u put takes my heart away...

Nd wow u write great horror stories...

I think u should right more often of it !!!!

And now i guess u should change this SS to a FF !!

Am damn sure it will be Fantastic to read more of ur horror works darls...

Pretty Please make it a FF naaa...

Ohk ohk the update was Mavellous...Fab !!!

I really liked the few kriyaansh moments ...all the hugging nd all !!!

The little scary scenes too !!!!

Each Passing day the SS is turning more Interesting !!!!

So,i don't wanna wait for longgg...

Pls update sooonnn...

Thanq fr the PM !!!!

Twinkie keep *twinkling* !!!!!

Muaaahhh !!!!!

(behen vala only )

awwiieee thanks for such a long comment sweeets...I'm glad u liked it and changing it into a FF i don't think i can but i will surely turn my other SS into an ff and rahi baat update ki toh will tryi updating today agar nahi toh kal kar dungi tab tak tu mera dusra SS ka update padh

Originally posted by: abhiyakreya

update!!!

update hi likh rahi hu...if i complete then will post it today nahi toh kal tak

amazing update...

Sorry sorry i know im again late...without any delay here's the update...thanks aisha for helping me in this...

Part 12:
Due to the lack of enough oxygen and suffocation kriya fainted. Here int he living room rey was waiting for kriya but it had been nearly more than half an hour kriya didn't come down satirs. Now he became worried because kriya had never taken this much time to get ready and moreover from the day they entered this house something wrong was happening with her this scared rey even more. He just wished she's be fine. He waited for another five minutes thinking she would turn up but she didn't. This made him even more worried and he rushed to her room. The door of her room was open and he entered inside. But didn't find her. He then went towards her washroom the door was locked from inside. He called her name for the umpteenth time but no use. She didn't respond. Now he had only one option left that is break the door and he did it. He found kriya lying on the floor unconscious. He didn't understand how to react. He then picked her up in his arms and made her lie on the bed. He was hell worried for her.

*****Rey's POV*****
Gosh yeh kya hogaya??? my my baat cutter is lying unconscious in front of me but y?? it is as if some one has stabbed my heart and it pains in my heart on seeing her like this. plzz universeji kuch karo wake her up plzzz wake her up...I need to talk to Mr.Malhotra about this...he was the one who gave me this house for rent and its because of him all this is happening with my baatcutter. From the moment we entered this house kriya has been facing hell lot of problems...i need to find the answers...
*****POV Ended*****
Unknowingly tears started rolling down his cheeks. He placed her and in his lap, then took some water from the glass kept nearby and sprinkled water on her face and started taping he cheeks sayin "plzzz wake up baatcutter". Finally after a lot of efforts kriya slowly opened her eyes. She could see rey crying. She didn't understand why was he crying??? She some how managed to speak.
Kr:re..rey aap ro kyu rahe ho.
R:tum theek toh ho??/yeh sab kaise huya???
Kriya then started coughing and rey immediately made her drink water and again asked her how did she faint.
Kr:vo vo mai naha kar bas bahar hi aa rahi thi par washroom ka door khula hi nahi aur vahan par ventilation ke liye jo windows hai unke bhi doors khul hi nahi rahe the and due to lack of enough oxygen i fainted.
R:how are u feeling now?
Kr:i'm better...
Rey takes her down for the break fast and asks her to start he'd join her in a while as he has to make a call. He goes away from there and calls Mr.Malhotra's office the person who had given them this house for rent. But unfortunately the receptionist picks up the call.
Re:Hello, can I speak to Mr. Malhotra
Rec:i'm sorry sir but Mr. Malhotra is currently out of town and would return this saturday..Any message??
Re:yes plzz inform him that Mr. Reyansh Singhania had called up and also tell him I'd come to meet him on the next Monday.
Rec:sure sir..
Re:thank u
Rec:ur welcome sir.

He went back to dinning table where kriya was waiting for him. She asked him whom did he call to he which he replied that he had called swayam for some work. She understood that he was lieing. She made him look straight in his eyes and again asked him whom did he call. This time he told her that he had called Mr.Malhotra in order to know whats the secret behind this house and if it is really haunted then why did he give this house to us on rent???He also told her that Mr.Malhotra was currently out of town and would return this saturday and his appointment is on Monday. Kriya requested him that she would also come along with him to Mr.Malhotra's office, at first he refused but later agreed. Both of them had their breakfast and left for college. Rey wanted kriya to saty back and rest but she was firm and told him that she's feeling better and will go to the college.

One week had passed by and again it was the weekend time. In this week a lot of thing had occurred. Kriya would be facing daily some problem or the other and even some strange sounds had started coming from the basement but they didn't dared to go there. In this one week kriyansh had come so close to each other. And rey had made his plan that he would propose her and make her his forever. Since this whole week was quite busy for them rey didn't get the time to plan their date. He thought that he would take her out on a dinner today and then propose her. He asked kriya to get ready as they will be going out for dinner. Kriya got ready and it was 8pm in the evening and kriyansh were ready to go. As soon as rey opened the door to step out what he saw totally surprised him as well as kriya. The gang was standing at the door with a huge grin on their faces and a lot of packets in their hands.
Re:guys tum sab yahan???
Vi:ha kyu tu hame dekh kar khush nahi hai??
Re:nahi aisa nahi hai but all of a sudden???????????????
Ni:vo humne socha y not spend this weekend with u both nice idea na
Kr:haan. She said this looking at rey who became sad.
Both rey and kriya welcomed the gang inside. And after everyone went inside kriya haeld reys hand and squeezed it indicating him don't worry we'll go out for dinner some other day. He just smiled at her. Both of them were staring at each other. It was vicky who broke their eye lock.
Vic:Oye love birds jaldi aao na mujhe bhook lagi hai.
On hearing love birds kriyansh smiled t each other and blushed a bit.
Ni:Dude tujhe humesha bhook hi kyu lagti hai??
Ne:dare not saying anything to my babu...
All of them had their dinner and were getting bored.
Vish:idea!!!
Gang:wat!????
Vish:lets play truth and dare...wats say???
Gang:awesome idea...
They moved away the couch and a few tables from the living room to create space for all of them to sit in a circle. All of them sat with their respective partners. The game started with vicky spinning the bottle. The bottle landed at vishakha and neha. The open side of the bottle was pointing towards vicky and the closed side towards vishakha. It was vishakha's turn to ask him.
Vish:dude truth or dare
Vic:truth
Vish:okk so agar tumhe food and neha ke beech mai kisi ek ko chose karna ho toh tum kisse chose karoge???
Vi:yeh kaisa question hai???!aise questions nt allowed
Bh:abbey kya nt allowed chup chap answer kar.
Ne:wat happening babu telling them na u chosing neha before food.
Vic:i chose neha. Agar neha hogi toh hi toh vo mujhe food khiliyegi.
Gang:arrey waah dude.
Vishakha spins the bottle it lands on swayam and bharat.
Bh:abbey truth or dare???
Sw:umm dare??
Bh:tujhe sharon ki acting karni hogi jab vo gusse mai rehti hai
Sw:ok okkk
Before starting his dare he looks at sharon first. and then stands up completes his dare. His acting was almost similar to the way sharon behaves when she's angry. Everyone praises him for his acting and sharon feels a bit embarrassed on seeing the way she used to behave with swayam. They resume their game. This time the bottle lands on neha and simmi.
Sim:so neha truth or dare?
Ne: Neha taking dare
Si:okay...so, umm tumhe vicky ko kiss karna hogay sab ke saamne
Ne:wat neha not doing this. Sab ke saamne aur vo bhi kiss.
Vic:arrey waah simmi kya kamal ka dare diya hai...bhagwan tera bhala kare
Si; shut up vicky and neha tumhe dare karna hoga.
Ne:okk
She shyly moves towards vicky and gives him a quick peck on his cheeks. Every one starts hooting for them and she hides her face in his chest.
Sh:guys enough dekho bechari kitna sharma rahi hai...lets resume with the game.
Sharon spins the bottle and it lands on her and kriya. She has to ask kriya.
Sh(with a mischievous smile): so truth or dare?
Kr:ummm dare
Sh:looks like aaj har kisi ko dare lena hai...okay so ur dare is u have to seduce rey.
On hearing this kriya's jaws dropped down. After a while she said "wat!!"
Sh:yes...tumhe yeh karna padega
kr:but mai kaise?? sab ke saamne??
Sh:kyu dar gayi
this was enough for kriya to accpt the challenge and this time rey was shocked and he was constantly asking in his ming "kya sach mai mai itna lucky hu??"
The song starts kriya gets up al ready to seduce rey

here's the link of the song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=27L-j8d4I1g
In hersszzz Touch
Wats d fun ? ah ah
Do u know wht i mean it isz ?
Mmm
Sup sup
Ooo
Can i get ya
Ooo
Can i touch ya
Ooo
Can i get ya
Ooo
Can i touch ya
She starts moving around rey swaying her hips here and there , she starts moving close to rey , she takes his arm puts its on her bare waist and moves her body , while her arms are around rey neck, then she leaves him and starts ther work...

Zara Zara Touch Me Touch Me Touch Me
Ah Zara Zara Kiss Me Kiss Me Kiss Me
Ah Zara Zara Hold Me Hold Me Hold Me
Ah zara zara .. Ooo ooo ooo
She moves around rey swaying her body here and there , poor rey dosent know what to do kriya comes close to him she gets her finger and slides it down rey cheek on to his bare chest , rey starts to move away trying to control himself but kriya gets hold of his wrist and pulls him back

Touch Me Touch Me Touch Me
Ah Zara Zara
Kiss Me Kiss Me Kiss Me
Ah Zara Zara
Hold Me Hold Me Hold Me
Ah Zara Zara
Ooo ooo ooo
She moves her hand down to his chest and comes closer to his face , rey thinks kriya was going to kiss him , but she just touches his cheek with hers and she does the same with the otherside, kriya smirks a bit whilst rey still there with his eyes closed , she sways her side infront of him and then turns around and winks at him.
All the gang are shocked seeing kriya like that

(Bin tere sanam is jahan mein
Beqkaar hum
Dum da dum da dum
Bin tere sanam is jahan mein
Beqkaar hum ) '.. 2
she points out rey and densways her hips brings her hair forward revealing her bare neck while her eyes are closed she moved her hands from her chest to her hips and swayed her belly

Zara Zara Touch Me Touch Me Touch Me
Ah Zara Zara Kiss Me Kiss Me Kiss Me
Ah Zara Zara Hold Me Hold Me Hold Me
Ah zara zara .. Ooo ooo ooo
Touch Me Touch Me Touch Me
Ah Zara Zara
Kiss Me Kiss Me Kiss Me
Ah Zara Zara
Hold Me Hold Me Hold Me
Ah Zara Zara
Ooo ooo ooo
she brushed her fingers thru her hairs she went towards rey and chaught his hairs between her fingers and pulled him towards her rey was loosin him self he was staring her curves and looking at her hungrily kria pushed him and den went back gicvin a smirk to him..

(I love the way you touchin me, feeling me
Boy im gonna be rebelling
Boy my little secrets gonna let you know
That wen you put your arms around me
I love the way you surround me
Oh boy I m gonna loose control ) '.. 2
kria pushes him and he falls on d ground she went upon him and climb on top of hi on her back and den faces him kisses him on his neck and puts his hand on her waist..brushes his hairs and gang is staring at kria totally shocked and embarrassed

(Tere hi tera hi intezaar hai
Mujhe to bas tujhse pyaar hai
Tera hi tera abb khumaar hai
Khud pe na mere ikhtiyaar hai ) '' 2
(Bin tere sanam is jahan mein
Beqkaar hum
Dum da dum da dum
Bin tere sanam is jahan mein
Beqkaar hum ) '.. 2
rey ki ankhein khuli hi khuli reh gayi hai , he had totally lost it he strted to move forward to kiss kriya he was inches away when kriya pushed him back and she got up she offered him her hand and made him stand straight

Touch Me Touch Me Touch Me
Ah Zara Zara
Kiss Me Kiss Me Kiss Me
Ah Zara Zara
Hold Me Hold Me Hold Me
Ah Zara Zara
Ooo ooo ooo
Once time touch me like this
I like what you want
What you give its a risk
Two time touch me like this
Together wanna fasa d style the way tat a lover
Three time touch me by far
Gets over here comes the crazy with me in my car
Its one time touch me like this
I know wat you want, wat you can, wat you say.. my lover

she went forward and did some hot dance moves nil was looking at her she was llooking soo hot rey got angry at dis but he again saw kria and was lost in her kria dis tym came and kissed him on his cheeks he was now out of control he just pulled her towards him. He was about to kiss her but realized the gang was there. Finally the music ended and every appreciated kriya. But suddenly some sounds started coming from the store room present in the basement. Every one went there to check. As soon as nil opened the door a huge gang of bats came out. Every one screamed loud on top of their voices and ran in different directions but luckily they were with their partners. All the bats went out through the window leaving a 2 of them. those were a bit huge when compared to others and were following kriya every where ready to bite her and stick to her.


So hwzz hit...its long haina?? so plzz hit the like tab n do comment...the next update of both my SS's will be updated next week as I'm busy with my exams...pms will be sent later as im updating through cell...

really cute update dear :))