Kriyansh SS-True Love v/s Evil link to Thread2 pg1 - Page 24

Originally posted by: nams_arsha

Omg tat was so scary nd great part indeed..
Really luved d way u carried the horror.. Those signs.. Insects evrythn my god i felt lik im watching sum horro movie..
Pls continue soon..

thnxxx di
I'm happy u liked it...will update soon

Originally posted by: kaba3003

Awesome part and was scary too 😊

luvd it 😊

Rey's car missing 😲

Waiting for d next part 😃

thnxx aish...
im glad u liked it...

Originally posted by: abhiyakreya

Awsm update dear!

Tyre puncture and that apple tree!! confusing ?????

Reys car missing!!!!!!! how will they go now!!!!!

Pls update soon and thanx for pm

thn\anks konpal..
dont be confused sab samajh aa jaayega...I'll update soon

Originally posted by: aromakriyaansh

hey maan tere dimag vich ki chal reha a

kina daraye gi tu hun

thank god ki kriya ne or apple nahi khada pta nhi ki ho jada

megical update

update soon please

thnxx aroma
lol menu vi nahi pata mere dimaag vich ki chal rha hai😆
dont worry aje te hor daraana hai
I'll update soon

Originally posted by: Nirju99

wow awesm update

thnxx

Originally posted by: ...Harshita...

Awesome...Loved it!!!!!!!!

thnxx harshita

Originally posted by: shenz_kriyaansh

scary!!!

someone following them...

some kinda insects coming out of Tyre and apple...

weird sound...

scared Kria and worried Rey but tries to console her...

and this precap: Rey's car missing??

what is that following them?? what kinda insects were they? why are there so many obstacles to reach that haunted house??

amazingly expressed... fab

thnxx dear
yup some one following them..thnxx again

Originally posted by: rIDhid3rox

wat an awesome update manu👏⭐️

seriously it was damn scary

especially that insect wala 🤢

and thank god rey didn't allow kriya to eat that apple...he is too intelligent😳very detective minded

plz update the next part asap...waiting for some horror and romance😍

thnxx ridz
I'm happy dat it was scary😆
ab rey hai intelligent toh hoga hi
will update soon

Originally posted by: meevee

That was an awsum update...I'm sure I can expect sum horrifically yucky things to happen in future- gr8 going rite now 😊

thnxx and yes u can excpect some horror and yucky things to happen...thnxx again

Originally posted by: tinatartari

fabulous

thanks

Originally posted by: kria_sharon1

Fab...
It was scary...
Rey has an dectective mind...😃

thnxx
and yes rey has a detective mind

Originally posted by: crazysky

it was awesome
loved it

thnxxx chetna

Originally posted by: RockStarHuda

Yaar... Sorry for Late comment.. waise I read it Early.. Commenting Now

Yaar.. I Read It @ Night 1:00 AM...

You scared Me...

And My Condition was Like

Awesome update

waiting for Next update...

Its okay huda...
gosh u read it 1:00 AM
thnxxx and will update soon

Originally posted by: mEgical_arsha

res...exclusively subah ke 3:30 !!! :P

kab unres karne ko soch rahi hai???

Originally posted by: Born2Dance

res

dear plzz unres ur comments

I'm so sorry for the late update. I was just busy with my colg and stuff and on top of that my poor net connection due to which I couldn't update. Guys thank you soo much for liking my SS. Now enough of me talking. Enjoy the update.

Part 5:

They started heeding towards the car and as soon as they reached their they found the car missing. They went a few steps in the direction where they were going before stopping here. But there was no sign of the car. They searched for their car in the near by surroundings for nearly 20 minutes but it was just a waste of time. They couldn't find the car. Then something clicked in their minds and they went in the opp. direction that is towards the left and at last found there car but they well hell shocked. The car was in the reverse position as if they were supposed to go back.

Kr(in a scared and tensed mood): rey yeh car yaha kaise aayi??
R: i dont know. He could sense the change in kriya's voice so he decided to change the topic.
R: i think maine isse yehi park kiya hoga aur waise bhi yeh sab chodo lets go.

Kriya nodded in response and they went towards the car and checked it properly to see in case anything was missing. Every thing was there and they got back in to the car and heeded towards the villa. As soon as they left a note from no where came flying towards the car it was on rey side and it reached near the window so that rey could see it.

Rey was shocked to sed that paper as it was written BEWARE on it. He tried to catch it but as soon as he reached near it, it flew away. Rey was very much shocked and he decided not to tell this thing to kriya as she would get even more scared.

He looked towards kriya who was looking staright lost in her own world. He knew what she was thinking so took her right hand and squeezed it assuring her everything will be fine. She just smiled at him and he went back to driving. All through the drive they were quite none of them spoke any thing. Rey was busy thinking about the note whereas kriya was looking outside the window.

Rey's POV:

wats happening today?? first the event occured in the garden then puncturing of my car's tyre and the sound and apple thing and now this note. How did that note come and from where it came??Why was BEWARE written on that?? Are we doing something wrong by living in that house??gosh I'll go mad if i don't get answers to my questions. I can't even tell kriya about the note or else she'll get more worried and scare. I hope everything will be fine over there.

Finally he came back to the present on hearing kriya's voice.

R:kriya kya hua??

kr:rey kya hum uss ghar mai reh kar koi galti toh nahi kar rahe?? hume kuch hoga toh nahi?/

R:kriya relax hume kuch nahi hoga and when u are with me nothing can go wrong. On hearing the last part she blushed a bit. Finally they reached their new house the "Mannat Villa"

(Sorry couldn't find a suitable image according to my imagination. Imagine this house to be a bit bigger.)

It was a big house or more like a palace, they had taken on rent for 6months. It was painted in white and was build according to the ancient architecture with white marble. Due to this ancient pattern of building it attracted every one. As they entered into the gate they could see beautiful and various kinds of flowers every where. It was situated in the middle of a garden making it look even more beautiful. Kriyansh were mesmerized by its beauty. They couldn't take their eyes off it. Though they had seen it earlier once while selecting house they had not seen it clearly and properly as they were seeing it now.

They slowly started gong towards the entrance through the path made in between, capturing its beauty. Finally they entered inside the house. When the entered kriyansh felt something strange and different. It was very big from inside and was painted in mixture of gold and yellow. They were huge paintings on the walls. Those paintings were made by ancient and royal artists. As the moved a little further they could see 3 stair cases. they 2 which are on the extreme sides lead upwards towards the first floor and the one in the middle leads downwards towards the basement and store room. Finally they finished checking out the house and one common thing that they could find every where was dust. It was like no one lived here since few years. All through this time theey felt as if some was watching them but they ignored it and decided to heed towards their room freshen up and then clean the house.

Precap: Rey in the kitchen preparing coffee and suddenly he hears kriya screaming
Kriya:aaahhh...

So hows it?? good or bad???
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P.S i just wanted to ask u guys liking this SS or not?? If there is any thing that u dislike then do tell me.

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scray movie se bhi zyaada scraay tha...just kidding...awsome update ❤️ur writing

Wow nice update horror and darrr in every where amazing update