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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kriyaanshd3

awww... KR part was sooo cute...
kriya playg wid water... splashing it on rey... KR palying wid water... sweeet!
whose spyg on dem...


thnxxx...u'll know soon whoz spying on dem


thnxx
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Posted: 13 years ago

thnxxx

Originally posted by: kriyaansh23

Awesum...
Someone spying on thm..😕
Car'spunctured...😕
Must be a GHOST...😆
Thnx 4 the pm...

Update soon..


thnxx...will update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: poojadworld

wow its amazing,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,luv each n evry prt,,,,,,,,,,,,,,n sry 4 late cmt<div></div>


thnxx...n its okay

Originally posted by: kria_sharon1

Amazing..
Kriyaansh...😍
Thnx 4 d pm..




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Thnxxx
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mEgical_arsha

Res


dekha maine kal se pehle saare read kr liye...

will unress sooon...
pls gussa mat hona cuz mom chilla ri hai to study,...
byeee !!!!


mai gussa nahi hu...so dont worry
n ya unres soon

Originally posted by: rIDhid3rox

res😉

unres
iam once again sry for commenting late manu you know how many unread pm's i have i didn't notice your update iam very sry😭😭
and coming back to the update
the 2nd part was superb...i loved the way the gang was concerned for kriyaansh
and i also loved the way the boys teased rey it was awesome...and awww kriya was blushing so sweet😍...
3rd was just simply amazing and awesome👏 ⭐️
how sweet of rey that he wanted to spend some time with kria before moving to their new house and getting all busy
and the garden was very nice😉was adoring the way kriyaansh were enjoying themselves and also romancing😳...
but who was that mysterious person who was watching them
oh iam getting scared😆
plz update the next part asap plz


phew!! finally mujhe tera comment padhne ko mila
its okay mujhe pata hai tune kitna bada record banaya hai of unres pms😆😆
thank u soo much
I'm glad u liked them
mujhe pata hai dat u r not scared but don't worry mai tujhe bahut jaldi daraungi😛
will update soon


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Posted: 13 years ago

plzz unres this dear😊


hey nishna ab unres bhi kardo pll😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Heya😊 I'm back with an update. I hope this part is a long one and if u still find it short then I'm soo sorry...Enjoy the update:)

Part 4:

While going towards the car kriya feels as if some one was following her. She turns back and see there was no one.
R:kriya kya hua
Kr:rey mujhe laga ki koi hume follow kar raha hai par jab dekha to koi nahi hai
R:this place is really strange. Lets just get out of here fast.
They sit in the car and rey starts driving. Just after 10mins the car suddenly stops and causes a jerk due to which they fall forward.
Kr:rey yeh car ko kya hua
R:i dont know,lets just check.

It was q very calm road with a few trees present. They both go outside and find that the tyre was punchtured.
R:yeh tyre achanak se puncture kaise ho gaya.
Kr:rey iss mai konsi badi baat hai ho gaya hoga tyre puncture.
R:lekin kriya aaj subah hi car garage se aayi hai.
Kr:oh ho rey zyaada mat socho aur tyre change karo.

Rey feels something strange but he keeps his thoughts and gets the spare Tyre. He bends down and inspects the punctured tyre. He finds a hole on the Tyre, it was as if some one has purposely punctured it. He sees some insects of very small sized coming out of the hole. As soon as those insects went away from there he quickly changed the Tyre and they heeded towards the villa. All through the journey rey was thinking about the events that took place firstly the bushes thing then kriya feeling some one was following them and now Tyre puncture thing. He felt that all these events were some how related to each other.

Their journey was very quite but the silence didn't remain long. They heard sound coming from a nearby place. Rey immediately stopped the car and they decide to find out from where the sound was coming. It was a very strange sound and they were hearing it for the first time. They more close to that place they reach the more louder the sound became. Suddenly they could not hear the sound it stopped. They looked around to find some clue where they were. All they could see was some bushes and an apple tree in between them. It was a single tree no other tree was present. Kriyansh were busy figuring out from where the sound came but suddenly a ripe apple caught kriya's attraction. She couldn't stop herself from going towards it. Rey saw that she was going towards the tree so he also followed her but he was busy thinking some thing

Rey*in his mind*:Its very strange??!? Its a strange sound and all of a sudden stopped but hows that possible and from where it was coming. And now this apple tree its even more strange that only one tree is present here and it is not even the season of apples then how come its present. There is definitely something wrong here.

Suddenly he saw kriya plucking an apple. It was very ripe compared to the others. She was about to eat it but rey snatched it from her.
Kr:rey yeh kya mujhe wo apple khana hai do mujhe.
R: nhi tum yeh nahi khaogi
Kr:kyu
R:kyunki mai keh rha hu
Kr:rey plzz
R:no

Rey was feeling something strange about that apple. He immediately broke that apple in to 2 halves. Kriya was watching him with curiosity. As soon as he broke that few very small insects started coming out it. Before those insects could climb onto his hands he threw it away. Kriya was a bit scared. He saw that those were the same insects which were in that hole of the Tyre but he didn't tell kriya because he didn't want her to get tensed. He turned towards her and found her staring at that apple. He could clearly see the scared expression on her face. He hugged her slightly so as to tell her that it was nothing to worry about.

Kr:thanks rey
R:its okay, lets go back.
She nodded yes in response.

Precap:Rey's car is missing...


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Posted: 13 years ago
res
unres
yayieee first one to comment
awesum update
luvd it
u wrote so nyc 👏
nd u made me scared
thnk god
kriya didnt hav da apple
nd da insects frm da apple *ewww*
nd precap - rey car missin???? 😲
hw vil dey go nw????
update da nxt part soon :-)
Edited by luvcookie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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unres...

hell scary man...
thank god kriya ne nayi khaya woh apple...
hmmm...
rey gettin tensed...
usne realize toh nai karliya...????
cant wait fr d nxt part...
recap is so interesting...
Edited by Born2Dance - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
great update
each update is getting scarier nd ewww i hate insects they make me scream so it woz scary 4 me hahaha
thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
insects?n thank god rey didn't allow kria 2 eat tat apple...update soon

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