Shades Of Grey- CHAPTER 12 (PG-143) UPDATED!!

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Downhill

@Downhill

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

awesome start...i am hooked to this

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jazzpreet

@jazzpreet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

wow guys, great start and awesome storyline! i love how he's feeling scared that she might not show up. serves him right, since he ran away from his emotions and all. please update soon, and when you do, please pm me! :)

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yusam

@yusam

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

WOOOAHHH... BLEW ME OFF PPL.. WA A COWARD TO RUN AFTR SHE CONFESSED HER FEELINGS... POOOR THING... N ITS GREAT THT SHE'D B NORMAL WID HIM AFTR ALL THT HAS HAPPENED, N THT MY FREND SHUD IRK EACH N EVRY NERVE IN HIM...

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rockinggirl5

@rockinggirl5

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Wow...wow... Wow... I loved it. It was a very very awesome start. Amazing!!!! You both have done a great job. I am really looking forward to read this FF. please pm me when you continue.

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

you blew my mind away... amazingly written.. sometimes i think when best writers get together.. they either create disaster of mismatch style or wonders... in this case it is wonders.. two of my fav writers getting together... you both have unique styles but still it gelled up so well..

The hero who had saved her. Rescued her from a life of nothing. Arnav never dared tell her that it was the opposite - That her hero had feet of clay.

above line reminded me of bingala writing and below one of Gargee

"Because it's the city of lights Khushi." he had answered in a low voice, "A city of hearts", a play on the word with the hindi term for hearts - Dil... Dilli. "And," he had added in a harsher tone, "A city where you could lose yourself in. Start anew. We both need to."

but i might be wrong.. it just what i felt.. as you guys have done a hell of a job of mixing your writings..

awesome work..

now about the story,.. story line is perfect.. i am so eager to read more.. mixture of their past and present.. gave out a lot about their character and what Khushi thinks and how strong she is... and what arnav thinks about Khushi..

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Swetyz

@Swetyz

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Awesome start
Simply love khushi in Ur story

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Awesome beginning. Love the new concept of them supporting each other from teenagers.

Hate that he is with other people.

Please continue soon.

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MISTIE

@MISTIE

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Aah!such a great start and long one too so thanx 4 that n always send me pm's ok

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Harshitha Shankar

@-_-harsh42

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Amazing work, Gargee and bingala. . .
So Arnav is an emotional coward. . .
Facing such emotionally draining situations at such a young age would do that to you, I guess. . . .
Your Khushi is VERY headstrong ladies!
I just LOVE her! :-D

Thanks for the pm, Gargee!
And bingala too!! :)

PS for Gargee: I'm still waiting for the updates of memories of butterfly!! -__-