Shades Of Grey- CHAPTER 12 (PG-143) UPDATED!!

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mysticmanthri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

that was refreshingly different...congrats for the new FF...

superb first update...waiting to be thoroughly entertained...

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Wow! Fresh concept with new struggles! just read it! Thank you for the pM! 👏

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Veena

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

wowww tht was amazing!!! 👏

luvd d 1st part!! ⭐️

so i rly thot tht its Anjy in d beginning!! so ws happy tht it ws Khushi 😛

thnx for d PM 😃

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asrcraze

@asrcraze

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Really really loved the first chapter :)

OMG it was just mind blowing...The way you described their relationship...I could almost imagine the two of them in your story...It was so refreshing...so new :)

I'm sure it's going to be an awesome story...I'm just glad I got the opportunity to read it...

Looking forward to more...:)

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velangini

@velangini

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

a new ff🥳

great start

loved it

khushi is everything a girl can be

responsible,tactful,loving and caring

their past is what made them so close to eachother

continue soon

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Anamika100

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

What a wonderful concept. The two of them being a family with a shared past, history and growing up together to what they are today.

Khushi is portrayed as such a strong girl/woman and yet I sense that her source of power and strength is his existence and presence in her life. That he is her sun, her energy. However, I am surprised that she was not jealous and angry at his flings while he was on this crazy two week escape. I know I would want to kiick his butt. But I have faith in her and will wait and see what she does.

He on the other hand needs her a lot more and is weaker than her and definitely emotionally stunted. Wonder what he would do if she ever really left him? He is definitely scared of his feelings.

I am charmed to my toes with this story and dying to find out what will happen next.👏👏👏

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rashgirl000

@rashgirl000

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

wow that was different and so refreshing. too good. i loved it. as usual ASR's being an ass(no offence). khushi's sensible, tact, wow. she's different. or should i reserve judgement? cant wait for the next update😊

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Wah_taj

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

wow..amazing start!! anodr fab piece from 2 of my fav writers!!!:)

p.s: @gaargee: update butterfly pelease..i ended up reading it again frm d scrach while waiting for d update 😆